Bring Some Golden Shock to the Other World

Very good. This book is really interesting, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I like what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation against the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! ☹️☹️☹️This kind of comments are very common under many books. If you want to know whether the book is good or not, you can read other people's comments. Don't read me.

The writing is really good. The recent wjzs is too offensive to the brain. Please read more normal fandoms.

Read, 19 chapters, no major flaws, no OOC. Although he is a leather-covered person, the way of speaking and drawing and the tone are similar to the original author. It is more like the original author than some novels with the original label, such as Talking Tuberculosis and Xiadie [Eating Melon]

It is still a very interesting novel, the setting is also very good, and the characters are not OOC. It is worth reading. However, from about 1/3 of the way, it starts to feel like it is written by AI. I personally feel very uncomfortable with articles written by AI. I read almost half of it, which is a pity. I still want to finish it, but my body is already warning me. I will consider coming back to continue reading after I can adapt to AI.

Very interesting fanfic, basically no OOC (fidelity) The character design of the protagonist is also pretty well written and looks quite comfortable. The author also did a good job in portraying some of the supporting characters, and did not completely give in to the portrayal of the golden descendants. The plot is reasonable and logical, and the writing is fluent. All in all, it's a good fanfic (anyway, I can read it whenever there is too much OOC, humble)

It was so well written that I really wanted to cry. It was really well written. When I first saw that the main character was not the real person, but was suspected of being a man turning into a woman (it was just a suspicion), I was anxious... I thought it was another kind of male loser who turns into a female character that he likes, and then fucks his own things with a group of people. But not OOC at all! I haven't seen such a well-written fanfic in a long time. I really want to cry. I used to really like this book... But didn't you other readers realize that? Nowadays, the flavor of AI is getting stronger and stronger. I discovered this book in about mid-February, and then I officially started to catch up on it at the end of February. It took me a few days to catch up. I really like this book. The writing is good, the setting is good, the original characters are full of characters, and the characters are not OOC. But now the flavor of AI is getting stronger and stronger. I don't resist AI-assisted writing. Sometimes I will chat with AI to find inspiration. So you can't just let AI generate it for you, right? Do you want to take a look at the descriptions in your current article? And he would complain about his sufferings from time to time. What sufferings could he complain about? Isn't it possible that your novel can be directly generated by chatting with AI for a few words and inputting a few keywords? !

The writing is very good, the logic is no problem at present, and there is no OOC in the setting. The character's personality is very distinct and has great potential. Come on, the author. So, the author can update 33550336 times a day. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Xi Lian in the book is very consistent with the psychology of a second-tier game player and an ordinary girl. There is no sense of separation when reading. The plot and rhythm are very comfortable and very immersive. (This is my first book review for this book.)

This book is still very good to read, and it is the best among Tomatoes. However, I am still skeptical about what the author said later that the golden descendant will be comparable to the star god when stacked at the back. I will see what the author will write later. Mainly in terms of each destiny, it is basically impossible to replace the star god and go further. However, if the pure numerical value of more than 30 million lifetimes is superimposed, it is already very good to reach the command level. After all, Bai E is at this level, and the upper limit of the golden descendant is probably under the fire disaster.

It's quite comfortable to watch. Bai E's descriptions are not OOC. He still cares about his companions, and the writing style is also very good. However, the author can't update more recently during the final exam. Come on, author.

Like! Like it very much! ! ! The author's writing style and rhythm control are very sophisticated, and you will look like a bookworm at first glance. The combination of the world view and the story of the golden descendant of Benttie is also quite good, and it will not make people feel like they are in a drama. The overall character of the characters is also very good, and there is no OOC. The only pain point is that it is still being serialized, and the number of words is too small, making it unsatisfying to read.

Overall, it's okay, but there is a small problem. In fact, I didn't regard the heroine as the real Xi Lian at first. The author often pointed out some small actions of "Xi Lian" such as sticking out her tongue (some of which I can't remember) to reflect her girlishness. Maybe the author wants to make Xi Lian more cute, but as a reader, I don't think this aspect needs to be rewritten. It can only appear once or twice occasionally. That's it, overall it looks pretty good.

So far, the plot is basically logical. The details are pretty good too. The characters have not deviated from their original settings. And some of the supporting characters are also well portrayed. Most of the characters in the cutscenes can also be seen as people with some flesh and blood. Not the kind of artificially retarded person who would risk his life to be a bitch. Even if you are writing a plot like traveling through ancient times, I still recommend that the author check more relevant information. It's not that it's not well written, or that it's unreasonable or has some loopholes. Just hope the author can give it a try. Through some description of the environment and so on. Let readers automatically think of the conditions and people's lives at that time. After all, the superiors of most dynasties are somewhat imbecile. Some of them are even comparable to those of Britain and the United States. If the article is written in a fictional way, I also suggest that the reader can directly or indirectly understand the current production capacity. Without setting production conditions and capabilities, it seems quite reasonable to build a Daqin military industry or a Dongtu warship.

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. Transform into Xi Lian and save the world in another world, summon golden descendants, increase your popularity, kill monsters, destroy cults, travel through different historical nodes to build a team with your friends, and save the world at that time. It is a very good setting, but it is a pity that there is no emotional line. There is no sticker, and there is zero description of the appearance of the female characters. This is very helpless. However, the battle scenes are well described, the plot is also interesting, the combat power has not collapsed, and the heroine is slowly improving everyone's strength, instead of being invincible at the beginning, it is worth collecting.

This book is very comfortable to read. The imaginary world means that you will not be constrained by the plot, let alone be stabbed by MiHoYo. The plot is also interesting and reasonable. As long as it does not collapse, I think this novel is a book worth reading. Sooner or later it will become popular.

It's quite good-looking, the characters basically have no OOC, and the setting is very new, but the pace is so slow. It takes half a chapter for Xi Lian to study his own abilities. Can't this kind of thing be summarized in a few sentences?

I think it's very good. It's the first time I've read a book in its entirety (although it's not finished yet). Others said that this book has an AI flavor, but I don't think I can really feel it. I just feel that there are too many descriptions of the opening scene. I don't think so many words are needed, and there is an indescribable discomfort. Also, the battle line of this book is very long. I want to see the golden people together www [cry] [cry] (I also want to watch Xi Lian take off his vest)

The author's writing style has a delicate feel, but there are actually some slight differences in the character description. For example, Bai'e will not call Aya Lady Aglaiya. Most of the previous games between Bai'e and Wan En were actually started by Bai'e. In fact, Bai'e is more childish hhh, but I really like this kind of story. It's really well written.

I like this book very much. I can give a thumbs up to the plot development and background setting. Character unlocking is slow, but it feels just right and not OOC. As for the strong AI flavor mentioned in the comment area, well, I don't deny it. After all, it is indeed a bit much. I hope that the author can be more attentive in the future. I am not against AI, but I hope that the author can go through the article typed by AI, make some changes, and then publish it. Personally, I still like this author. I also hope that all the book friends who read this will be more tolerant. After all, most of the Bengtie fanfics published by Yang Persimmon are a little... Hard to describe in one sentence. Compared with the others I can see, this one is already considered a masterpiece. Come on, author! ! (Then I will add more updates, the recent updates are too few and not enough to read)

I have read several books of this type. If I want to make an overall evaluation, this book can only be regarded as average. It looks good in the early stage, but the character design is basically not OOC. There are only a few minor issues left. But when it comes to traveling back to the Dayao Dynasty, the plot may be a bit boring, so I skipped some of it. Then around 30 photos in, this feeling came out again. The other Valentine's Day stories are quite good, and the daily writing and the more enjoyable plots are both well written. In addition, this book has a small problem, that is, after saying a paragraph in the front, I like to repeat the paragraph again using characters later, which feels a bit watery.

Lift the blanket of memory and take away the ripples of the past. Abduct the saint of destiny and capture the stray cat. Take away the Weaver's wheelchair and put on a yellow and purple coat. Stealing the sea monster's grilled fish and defrauding the maid of all her savings. Correct the hanging spine, fatten the healer's horse. Make fun of the monarch's height and steal the sage's praise. Replace the immortal lunch box and play with the camera of time. Wear a strange hat and replace the commander's pajamas. Speak the strange words of Feng Liang and listen to the words of ancient scholars. Raise lovable behemoths and call for seal crashes. Nurturing the new planet, waiting for the opportunity to meet again. Tampering with the branches and leaves of imaginary numbers, overturning Star God's chess game. Erase the tears of joy and collect the toys of sorrow. Dismantle the hunting bows and extinguish the ruins of destruction. Measure the balance beam and release the crucian carp in order. Fold the folds of space and dry the raindrops for light years. Crack down the protective walls and sow the seeds of chaos.

This article is amazing. [Laughs] Where is God? [What] Behind the original, of course. [Laughing] Then it's all over the floor! [Eat melon] Where is the pull? [Stunned] Of course it's the front of the Three Kingdoms Killing [laughing evilly] Have fun. [Making faces] Oh, hurry up. [Making faces] Dian [smile] collapse [smile] Ma: [smile] All in all, all in all. If there is no update, then I can only give Three Kingdoms Dead a good review. Yes! [Cool]

Nice! A new type of Bengtiewen! I gave up after reading the introduction at first, but now I'm following the big team in a few days, no 00C! The protagonist plays Xi Lian, but the whole story looks like Xi Lian himself (in my personal opinion). You can watch it! Recommend!

There are no other poisonous points in writing golden descendants, and the author handles them very well. The rhythm of the plot needs to be carefully controlled, and the character perspective changes should be clearer. The plot content is very good and heartwarming~, [Please update]. There are just few updates Also, when you think about your last book, the author should think about the outline carefully first and don't break it off again.

Very good. This book is really interesting, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Other than that. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character description is very good!

Overall, it's pretty good. The characters basically have no OOC, and the plot is very logical. Although the combat power is a bit reduced, they are still the strongest in this world (almost). I like the golden descendants to shine in the other world. There are enough chapters to read. I have read more than 200 chapters and haven't finished them yet. I only saw Xi Lian entering the headquarters dormitory and meeting a girl. I have something to complain about, just my personal opinion. The first description of Xi Lian's appearance said it was a pink-blue gradient. I thought it looked like a big Xi Lian, but the protagonist looked in the mirror and said he looked like a small Xi Lian, so it turned out to be a big Xi Lian or a small Xi Lian. In the early days, I mainly had a good relationship with the two female members, but every time I called An Ning, I called An Ning sister An Ning. I felt that the relationship was both good and bad, and the title was not intimate and casual enough. Lin Xiaoya asked Xi Lian to help her participate in a competition to win prizes to test her memory, because Xi Lian's character is a person with hyperamnesia. After winning, he got a prize of a large doll rabbit. When he found a lost child, he helped her find her mother. Xi Lian found it through her ability to determine the area. Her mother thanked Xi Lian and the others, and the child stopped crying. She looked up and saw the rabbit and wanted to touch the rabbit. When she thought it belonged to someone else, she retracted her hand. Lin Xiaoya saw that she liked to give rabbits directly to children and said that she just enjoyed the process of winning. It's too blunt. But when the little girl was crying and looking for her mother, Lin Xiaoya comforted her with a rabbit doll, and finally saw that she liked it and gave it to her. I wouldn't think it was so blunt. The official organization character Lin Xiaoya is a character and speaking style similar to that of Little Amy, but the author always describes "awkward moves" instead of objectively describing what she did. The second move is very dramatic. There is a new female character who likes cute things. When she first met Xi Lian, she was stunned and said she was so cute, and then asked, can I touch you? After Xi Lian refused, they started chatting and found that the other party's dormitory was next door to hers. She invited Xi Lian to visit her dormitory because Xi Lian also liked cute things. There were many cute things in her dormitory, but Xi Lian refused because she had just arrived and had not been to the dormitory yet. When we arrived at the door of the dormitory on the floor, she asked pitifully, "You really can't let me touch you?" It felt a bit presumptuous. I have a strong sense of personal boundaries. I don't like this kind of question that doesn't give up even after being rejected. It's a bit presumptuous for me to ask. If you are more familiar with each other, this is the first time we meet.

The interaction between Bai E and Xi Lian made me feel soft 🥰 It felt like the savior who had just saved the world was brought to work before being cured by everyone, and the cold-faced killer spawned monsters online (not true). Xiao Xilian has a very heavy task of curing Xiao Bai. We must all be together happily! The protagonist in the author's works is different from Xi Lian. It seems more like he is unconsciously imitating Xi Lian, which makes him feel more vivid.

It looks great. Please update it. Now, um, the progress bar feels a bit slow? It's relatively slow-paced, but it can be considered an advantage. It reveals the trump card at once. Because it tells the story of the golden descendant, I'm not sure if the space behind it can bring people in, will it be a question of ordinary people? After all, if it's more shocking to bring people in, you should see a completely different world, and some people will be lively like this. The descriptions of the protagonists and supporting characters are pretty good, and the golden descendants are basically not OOC. The characters are very three-dimensional, and the camp and world view are not bad. Although it was a little rushed at first, but later on the protagonist is understanding the world and adjusting to himself.

What a divine book! This is a masterpiece that has never been seen before in the world. It is a wonderful chapter that is hard to find in the literary world! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin's writing power, Zhongyuan Lao Zhuang Xuanzhe, Li Duhua Zhang, San Su Love, the tragic spirit of Jiaxuan, the majesty of Emperor Qin and Han Dynasty, the majesty of Emperor Tang and Song Dynasty, the power of Genghis Khan, the Zen heart of Sakyamuni, the philosophy of Plato, and the insight of Copernicus, Aristotle's wisdom, all the sages, sages, great writers, emperors, sages and people throughout the past and present, when you read it, everyone will be dumbfounded, stunned, prostrated, and worship! The beauty of his words, the exquisiteness of his composition, the majestic charm, and the far-reaching artistic conception, inherit the austere character of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, enhance the graceful charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, integrate the majestic atmosphere of the Han and Tang Dynasties, and combine the skillful writing skills of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Every word is like thunder piercing the ears, every sentence is like a rainbow penetrating the sky, and the strokes of the pen can shake mountains. The mountain can move rivers, lead to the underworld, reach the sky, penetrate the wood with three-dimensional force and penetrate the back of the paper, and describe all the phenomena of the common people, describe the prehistoric times of the universe, the cycle of creation, and describe the vicissitudes of eternity. To be able to see the true face of this work in this life is really a blessing accumulated in three lives and a hundred generations of good fortune! However, I cover the scrolls with regret, and shed tears of sadness. The sadness cannot be cut off from it: it is like reaching the sage, transcending the past and the present, shocking the heaven and the earth and weeping ghosts and gods. It is difficult to see this masterpiece in the world in the years to come, and it is difficult to find it and encounter it again. Even if you enjoy glory and wealth, and read all over the world's wonderful works, this life will be boring, leaving only empty regrets, with nothing to rely on and no soul to send! Fortunately! When I was in a hurry, I made an immediate decision, treasured it and hid it on the bookshelves, worshiped it like a guide, and respected it like a god. Only then did my restless spirit finally calm down, and my turbulent and unstable heart finally calmed down. What a pity, what a regret, what a pain, what a sigh! It was born like this The essence of the sun and moon, literary stars come into the world, the rare treasures of the divine craftsmen weeping blood, the sacred jade of the literary world, the treasures of the literary world, if they have been buried in the dust for a long time, the uncut jade is hidden in the abyss, its brilliance is not revealed, and its reputation is not known, so that thousands of book friends in the world cannot see it. To appreciate its essence, appreciate its true flavor, and realize its great truth, wouldn't it be a waste of natural resources, a blasphemy of sacred scriptures, a waste of rare treasures, and a waste of the author's painstaking efforts, burning ointment to follow the sundial, pouring out his liver and guts, and weeping with blood? Between the Fangcun Lingtai, in the depths of my soul, I have gone through countless struggles and tangles, battles between heaven and man, and my mind has been shaken. I finally made a decisive decision, and I was cruel and cruel. I gave up my small self, which is like a fly and a dog, and became a big self that can be enjoyed by friends all over the world. I put aside my selfishness, abandoned my selfish thoughts, and abandoned my selfish desires. I gave this heartfelt comment to the world, and dedicated it to the world, spread it throughout the world, and spread it throughout Kyushu! People who share the same path, people who share the same hobbies, and people who know the sound of the music, like the likes of Ai Wen, look up to them again and again, reaching to the top of the clouds, the top of the sky, beyond the stars, and in the grand mist, causing the nine heavens to shake, the sun and the moon to shine for it, the color of the universe to change, and to be passed down through the ages! Looking up at the sky and the stars as evidence, overlooking the earth and the five mountains as evidence, looking at the ancient and modern times as a guide: This book is refreshing, soul-stirring, soul-stirring, thrilling and thrilling? Galloping through the eight wilderness rivers and lakes is the evidence, crossing the four seas and rivers is the evidence, and the Nine Heavens Immortal Tower standing tall is the sound: this book is so refreshing It is so vivid that my mind is so moved that I can't stop. Even though there are thousands of chapters, thousands of sentences, thousands of words, and thousands of thoughts, there is still a regret that lingers in my heart, lingering, and it is difficult to eliminate. How slow the update is, how few chapters, how ignorant the length, and how incomplete the content is! One chapter is not enough, one hundred chapters is not enough, not enough, ten thousand Chapters are not enough! One qi is not enough, hundreds of qi are not enough, thousands of qi are not enough, ten thousand qi are not enough! Pleasure is not enough, heartiness is not enough, majesty is not enough, mystery is not enough, ups and downs are not enough, magnificence is not enough, depth is not enough, magic is not enough, enlightenment is not enough, enjoyment is not enough! Everything is empty, everything is empty, I only seek one update, I only hope for quick updates, I only hope for crazy updates, I only pray for continuous updates When you look at this place, read this sentence, feel this emotion, and are moved by this idea, why don't you all raise your arms and shout wildly, with the same voice that resounds throughout the heaven and earth, and reaches the sky? Now that the divine book has been published, who can compete with it? Now that the divine pen has been written, it will be immortalized forever! Update it quickly! To comfort the common people! Seeing this, I didn't rush to update it, I was as hasty as the law!

OK, I tied it in one night, and I highly recommend it. The characters basically have no OOC and their combat power is not broken. The protagonist Goldfinger is also very reasonable. The plot arrangement is very good and interesting. In short, it is a great recommendation.