Douluo************

For those of you who have read Chapter 18, please do not get involved in the characters of Douluo Continent when reading, and then listen to the book. For some people who are easy to be soft-hearted, it is really easy to get into a sad atmosphere. For an old bookworm like me, it is really a bit confusing. After Bibi Dong lost his memory, She is very sweet and beautiful. Her character feels like she was before she was harmed. She is really a little bit sharp at the end. I almost shed tears. I know this book will not last long. The main reason is that the time spent with Bibi Dong starting from Chapter 18 is really difficult to comment...

This is really well written, it doesn't just follow the original work, it has its own story, especially the part about Bibi Dong's amnesia. I've read a lot of Douluo fanfics, and the part about amnesia left a deep impression on me. It's just that I don't know when the Douluo article on Tomato stopped [face covering], I really hope the author can keep writing it until the end.

I don't know where to start. In my humble opinion, the book is well written, but it may not be blocked at any time. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more smoothly. I also hope that this book can be seen again on the starting point after it is blocked in 🍅.

After watching it for a long time, I became confused. Who is this Xiaona? When the author wrote, sometimes he was also called Bibi Dong. After watching the story about Cortana, I was stunned for a while. If it were really Bibi Dong, Xiaona would really have lost her memory in the plot, and she would also like the male protagonist. It also didn't explain why Bibi Dong lost her memory, and why she fell in love with the male protagonist in a state of amnesia.

For emotional people, the damage is really quite strong, with a few minor flaws, but no one can write a perfect novel, and the one I wrote is really good. But by the way, can I write about Douluo in 🍅🤔 Author, have you written about Douluo fandom in other places? I want to follow it.

Go, this Douluo fanfic is really well written. There is no grudges or grudges with Tang San like other novels. The protagonist has his own path and story and the system only helps to make the story more interesting. This is really well written. It can be said to be the best I have ever seen in a Douluo fanfic. Come on author.

So far among the Douluo fanfics, your writing is quite good. You don't blindly accept the heroine, unlike others where you always just follow me, Yushu Linfeng or something like that.

Not bad, very pretty

It's so cruel, it's a hard work, more than 20 chapters are updated at one time, now I have to give you 5 stars [face covering]

I've read a lot of books, and by the end of chapter 48, I admit that the author's emotional writing is very good. If I find out that you're not good to Xiaona, you'll be doomed (*｀へ´*)

Not bad, just a bit sharp

Very well written.

The emotional description is quite delicate

Chapter 46 I shed tears, I haven't felt this way for a long time

The story line of each character is very clear