Xingtie: He Is Still Steaming During the Reincarnation Live Broadcast

If the author wants to write, he should write an outline. The beginning is very good and I will give it full marks. I just like to see this kind of behind-the-scenes role

The author writes very well, please keep up the good work! ! !

Very very nice looking.

So far it looks good

It's pretty good so far, but it's just a bit lacking. I'm starting to keep books [thinking]

Good looking, good luck to the author

It would be nice if the sentences were broken up. It looks a bit like a long and difficult sentence to me.

There is no one in the world who is more tolerant than pure memory. It records all kinds of things without hatred, without partiality and selflessness. It stores all the original treasures and special appearances. It is the treasure of the eternal wisdom of the continuous stream of life. The fish that Fuli traces back are also the key to the treasure house. He also meditates in the pure land and quietly observes the world.

Five-star praise There was a problem with sentence segmentation in the first few chapters, but it was quickly resolved. The plot... I watched a little bit and I feel good about it

Bulldozer text? That's good

Looks pretty good

I will definitely write it well [I understand]

It's actually my favorite Shura field.