The Chief Guide's Combat Prowess Is Off the Charts

It's nice to read, and the character creation is okay. However, the logic in the first twenty to thirty chapters is a bit confusing, so it's best to delete it. I actually prefer the version with more than twenty to thirty chapters. Everything should be logically smooth. It's best to revise it carefully after the full text is completed. The article is because the character setting is good and the story is quite interesting. If the full text is edited, more people will read it and the score will be higher. The reason why there are so few people now may be because the logic of the article does not flow smoothly. Readers abandon the book when they lose the desire to read it. Anyway, come on, Mrs. Author, the plot behind it is very interesting.

It's very interesting, and the writing is pretty good, but the author has not finished revising the text. Each chapter is delicious to read separately, but the plot is not connected. I really like this content. If so, can you please revise it faster? I believe you

Okay, ok, ok, it looks good, there are indeed messy places in the middle, but it doesn't affect the look and feel, it's still very enjoyable to watch! 😊The little ferret is also very cute🥰👍

It's very well written. Before I read it, I read other people's comments saying that the plot was a bit messy, but I didn't feel it when I watched it. I thought the plot was very exciting and I was very impressed. (Can you update 100 chapters at once? It scares me to death [shy])

The writing of Dada is quite good, but the connection of the plot is a bit messy. I am looking forward to the revised work [Shy][Shy][Shy]㊗️Dada's work has become a hit [Shy][Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

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Overall, it's pretty good. The part about defeating the Zerg Queen at the end is really hard to understand. The language expression is also relatively gentle. The characters don't have big mood swings. It's not a joke [blowing kiss]

I am a person who almost abandons the book before it is finished. Maybe I didn't read it too carefully this time, and then clicked in and got out of hand. I have now added it to my bookshelf and look forward to your completion. I'll finish it all at once

The more I read, the more excited I became. The author describes it in great detail. In fact, I don't understand a lot of the content in it (because it is an interstellar novel), but the protagonist's various guidance abilities can make people excited. It also reflects the author's strong writing skills from the side, and the evenly matched love. I like it very much.

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It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, but what does "door" mean? I don't understand it👀👀👀 Well, I feel like the introduction has little to do with the main text, haha [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The writing is very good. I wanted to give it five stars, but since the chapter about meeting each other, every chapter has no title. I personally don't like it very much, because without a title, the overall meaning of the chapter is uncertain. Some readers like to look at the title to summarize the chapter or highlight the highlights. I don't like chapters without titles. Others are pretty good.

Highly recommended! Very nice! If the author stops updating, I will go crazy. Come on, author, I believe you! I will recommend this book to my friends! I can't watch these good things alone!

It's very interesting. The plot line is very attractive to me. The relationship between the two is also great. The two people's spiritual bodies are very cute. But I feel that there is very little interest in the whole text and it is relatively subtle. The author's writing style is okay. I recommend it.

Nice! It's super nice [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Looking forward to the following plot (I hope the author will never stop updating [Sending Hearts]!!!)

Ah~ it's so beautiful, the author's writing is so great, I can't get enough~

So far, it's fascinating and a book worth reading. I hope it doesn't end badly.

I just saw it and it looks pretty good in front ('▽')

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

It's okay, but it's still being serialized

Why isn't it popular?

Not bad, after reading the comments

Beautiful and rich in content and plot

Come on! I think it looks good hahaha

It's very beautiful and delicious. It's been a long time since I watched Pure Love for so long [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's a very interesting description of the spiritual picture, but in fact the love interaction between the two is not much, it is more of a growth type of the protagonist, not a sweet love version of the two.

Em didn't understand what was going on in the middle 30 chapters or so. Was it rewritten? I saw Zuo Hua. I wrote it for myself, so it's okay. The subsequent plot is very interesting and a bit scary. I watched it in the middle of the night hahahaha [blowing kiss] [love]