Demon Slayer*****

What a rare book! There are very few books written by Foreign Persimmon about Feng Ge that are so good, and even fewer! I didn't read first-person novels before, but the boss's writing is really beautiful and doesn't make anyone feel uncomfortable at all! The most surprising thing is that I thought it was all over! In the end, the daily life after the decisive battle turned out to be so much - I thought it would be so hard to find such a good-looking book and it was going to be finished, but now I'm not sad at all! Alas, I usually don't write book reviews, but once I write, I can't stop because it's so special and well-written. I like this kind of book that is as calm as water, and the transition of emotions is very natural. It's not OOC as far as fan fiction is concerned. It's rare that I like it so much (biting my handkerchief) I want to watch the boss write about daily life for a lifetime! (Bushi) I want to see the wedding, I want to see the children, I want to see the two people accompanying each other for a long, long way, oh, boss, I will always support you! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 (Ps. It's such a pity that Xuan Mi picked up the lunch box without any idea. Oh, I want to see Xuan Mi ask her sister-in-law to live happily together. Oh, why didn't you throw away the lunch box?) (Thinking jpg.)

It's a relatively happy ending O_o The relationship between the heroine and Feng Zhu is relatively slow to develop. There is a long-lasting and faint sense of happiness. The plot and the source of the original plot are still a bit big (babys who have high requirements for the original plot choose carefully O_o) It feels a little strange that the butterfly has been "emphasisizing" that everyone has secrets and so on (I feel like I have said this to the heroine many times) but Overall, this is a very good fanfic. O_o It may be my personal opinion. O_o I think the author has a deep understanding of Shimi, so when he portrays Shimi, it makes people see the more charming existence hidden under the grumpy old man. (For armor, I recommend Shimi). So I think this is a good article. The author is great. Keep up the good work^O^

The writing and plot are so strong, the emotions are very delicate, the sense of immersion is so strong, the plot development is very unique, I will finish it carefully! Collect and reminisce later! ! ! I love Brother Feng and Qianye (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

Narrated from the first point of view, it's very beautiful and enjoyable to watch, and it's not OOC at all.

The writing style is very delicate, and the whole article is reasonable. After reading it, I feel that my brain has been purified. The love between Immortal Sumiya and "I" is a long-lasting love. The style of writing is very unique, and it is a rare first person. I don't know why there are very few paragraphs and almost none. Maybe it is because there are not many people reading it.

The writing is very nice and the plot flows smoothly, but there are some parts that the author doesn't remember clearly, such as Brother Feng's age, the upper limit of Yiwo Seat, Shuizhu did not participate in the third battle on the line,... But these are all small problems that can be read. This book is really good to read.

This is one of my favorite heroines now. Her character really attracts me! Everyone is not OOC at all, and the teacher's writing is very smooth and comfortable, like the warm spring breeze! [Full] [full] [full]

The author writes very well, and the relationship with Saneya is very well written. It doesn't feel too abrupt. It's great.

Well written, very careful, and not OOC

Very good, very well written. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good. The more you watch it, the better it feels. Like it👍🏻

It was actually okay, but I didn't understand when Xuan Mi quietly received the lunch box. Why does the heroine have to say "but" every time, and then gets interrupted without the second half of the sentence...

This writing and plot are awesome Klass

I quite like the image of the heroine [full]

It's beautiful, a bit weird, but I can't really put it into words.

A rare good book, the writing is very delicate! ! ! It is a rare Demon Slayer fan that writes about ordinary people. It is different from other hot-blooded fans, but it starts from Yin Wei, and the writing style is also very comfortable to read.

It's okay. I suggest the author add some private ooc in the introduction.