Rebirth*****

The level is good. , The smoothness of the plot and the normal development of the relationship between the characters are okay, but the rhythm can be improved, don't stay at home all the time. Have a famous scene where you show off to someone, and help your wife hold on to the occasion. Otherwise, your development will not have any climax points. Many viewers will just glance at the chapter and not feel the famous scenes, so they will easily quit directly.

I had a lot of fun reading the book, so I gave it a five-star rating. During this period, the family is slowly getting used to each other, and it is very warm. The male protagonist can go to the hall and the kitchen, sing well, and even scold his mother. Except for the fact that he always insists on being a soft rice, he can be said to be a good husband with twenty-four filial piety. On the way to get off work, it suddenly occurred to me that Xiaohua will be the senior sister from now on. She is young but has seniority. Finally, there is another awkward part. Judging from the relationship between the male protagonist and his wife, daughter and son, he has adapted very well and has no problem sleeping with other people's wives. However, he always insists that the 100 million gambling debt he owes is not his, so he is content to eat soft food and not go out to work. I was puzzled the whole time: You have enjoyed the blessings of the original owner, but you are not willing to go out to work and pay off the debts of the original owner quickly. This is something Yui doesn't understand either. Finally, a quick update from the author!

Come on, come on, it's super good-looking, come and catch up!

Very good, with good pacing and good character development. Looks comfortable, not like a newbie. The character design of the protagonist is also good and has tension.

To be honest, I don't like the idea of a scumbag being reincarnated and regretting his life, pursuing his wife in the crematorium; The same person may have choices in career direction and regrets, but when it comes to treating a person, the temperament and personality of two people are in harmony, and it will basically not be much better if they do it again. However, the setting of this book is very clever. It belongs to time travel. I had a bad life in my previous life and was tortured by my gambling wife. This identity experience resonates with the diva heroine left behind by the original owner, laying the foundation for accepting to live together. As for eating soft rice, they are all excuses. With the entertainment resources of the earth in hand, the senior king, you can't eat soft rice wherever you want, just choose a place to land (women and families). There are also many good designs in this book that avoid poisonous points and are worth learning. At present, I have seen 220,000 words, and I am catching up on the latest. Come on, author!

Good book recommendation! Although it is a type of cliche novel, it is written very joyfully, and I hope to maintain the character of the male protagonist as a leisurely fish! In addition, there are two children, a family of four, and the son's role is too little. Who says that the top student can't also be a naughty kid when he was a child? Maybe the direction of the bear will be very unique? Come on

After reading it, except for the background writing at the beginning, which is a bit unsatisfactory, other aspects are quite good. The emotional aspects are also good, not stiff and lively. The plot arrangement is also quite logical, it's not the kind of thing where you just write whatever comes to mind. Deducting one star is due to the background arrangement. It doesn't have to be a bitter and bitter beginning to attract attention. The author must have his own considerations in writing this, but I personally can't accept it. I can't change it even after I wrote it. I just hope that the plot will remain the same in the future.

Come, the author reads my solemn oath with me. From today on, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games, do not write poetry, be strict with myself, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, work hard, advocate first-class, strive for glory, take pleasure in code, and be made into steel. I am worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship. I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day by day and night by night. If I violate this oath, I must practice the Sunflower Manual and marry a wife like a flower! ! !

It's non-toxic, the plot is reasonable, the writing skills are strong, and life is transparent. Keep it up and keep an eye on you! ! !

Not bad. I didn't want to read the entertainment category. I didn't expect the quality to be surprisingly good. Much better than the crappy ones like Qidian Tomato. Not unconventional, the writing is okay Except that man is from earth. This is my second book. The only thing is that I don't want to follow updates every day I hope the author has some skills and can finish it in one go

It must be five stars, the writing is smooth, the rhythm is good, and it is very comfortable to watch. I prefer this feeling of having a daily routine and pretending to be invisible. Originally, as long as you have the capital, just go on as normal. There is no need to highlight the contradictions and then show off.

The author's writing is first-rate, and the characters describe the feeling of the letter of guarantee from the contrast of the background setting. As an old bookworm, I don't like the book at the beginning, because waiting for the update is a kind of torture. This book makes me unable to put it down. Alas, waiting in the torture is a bad fate. I advise all readers to click on it first, it is best to fatten up before killing. After all, a good book tastes good if you eat it in one go.

Can anyone tell me why the book has been removed from the shelves [face covering]

It's really beautiful, why was it removed from the shelves? Can it be released again?

The writing is really good. It can be said that it is unique and unconventional. It has the potential to surpass most entertainment works. It is just that the update is a bit slow. Come on, I hope you don't become a eunuch [laughs]

I miss Sister Mi. Can the author still do it? Please open the book and kick me. Thank you.

This book is really good, lighthearted and funny

This book is really a pistachio. It made my stomach hurt when I laughed. Five stars, must be five stars, one star less, the Southeast Asian boxing champion will beat me! Ha ha ha ha!

Very beautiful, very funny. Come on.

I really like Sister Li in it, she is really cute

It's fine if it's light-hearted and funny. A cool article about leisure and entertainment needs to be in a cool style. If it's not serious, it will be good-looking [laughter]

I really like this kind of writing, the writing is good, the plot is novel, and I like the interaction with the children.

To be honest, this rating is low now, I think it is at least 8.5 Or above. The writing is very interesting, especially the interaction with Mi Li

It's very good, I have the desire to read it!

A different entertainment version! Quite interesting!

I didn't have the desire to read the book after reading the title and introduction at first. After reading it several times, I started reading it. It was surprisingly good. It would have been better if the rhythm of writing and publishing songs was faster.

It's well written. There are very few works that make you laugh lately.

Different entertainment, worth seeing

The author understands life, and his writing focuses on daily life, like an itch that constantly teases the reader's happiness, hoping that this kind of happiness will last for a long time.

Take it at your fingertips and enjoy it freely. Each character has distinct characteristics, especially the dialogue and behavior of the two children. The descriptions are delicate and true. Keep writing [Adoration]