The Witch's Cafe

Precise structure, touching character arcs, and tense central conflict. In essence, it is an expedition to find "possibility" - a world line where important people can survive, choices can be respected, and time is no longer a punishment but a gift. When the cowardly boy toddles in the maze of time, when the passing moonlight leaves a code on the blackboard eight years ago, when the sealed witch wakes up from the changes in the world line, a magnificent canvas of time, growth and love has been laid out.

Let me tell you, this book is more suitable to be read calmly. The first volume is relatively dull but it lays the foundation for the transformation in the second volume. Without the actions of the protagonist in the first volume, it would be a bit abrupt and a narration is needed. To be honest, if you want to achieve results, I recommend reading the content of the second volume first. The content of the first volume should be supplemented by narration. The first volume is too bland. In other words, the character of the protagonist seems a bit weak. Of course, it is just too unrealistic or lack of motivation. The second volume only started to act because the heroine disappeared. I personally think that the current order of the normal narrative is correct, but it is difficult to attract people. As I said before, it is a test of writing, but to be honest, this book is not suitable for the current environment. Make money It's difficult, because the protagonist of the novel needs a lot of growth, in all aspects, and is weak in every aspect. It's hard to see the point of being happy. Well, when I saw that the thing that made me feel slightly better at the moment was actually Zhou Mu saving others, I thought about the plot later, but the protagonist actually restarted directly because he couldn't see the future heroine. I still I thought it was about dying to save others, which is understandable, but my point of view is the same as what Qian Yuling thought. Unfortunately, the current second show is indeed the protagonist's fault. To be honest, it seems that the third show should be released, but by then the protagonist should be almost fully grown. Well, let's do this for now. Come on, the author is great.

I finished reading it in 2 days. In fact, I feel that the content of the book and the introduction do not match well. The introduction gave me the feeling that it was like 486 who constantly died and was reborn to save the heroine. In the book, it was more like the hero going back in time to save a heroine and thus met another heroine. I also saw the charisma of the male protagonist. Also, will the main plot end with multiple female protagonists? And how does Fujiwara in the main plot get to know the protagonist? Why doesn't Chen Xinglan, the main character, have bipolar disorder? And will there be the most anticipated Qian Yu Ling line?

Full marks! Must have perfect score! Rating is just a matter of time. The author's writing is very good and the handling between chapters is quite appropriate. There are a lot of foreshadowings laid in the first and second volumes, and they are all taken back to a certain extent. At the end of the second volume and the third volume, I finally felt the despair revealed between the lines. The feeling of wanting to save the one I love but being powerless is really suffocating. It reminds me of that rainy night when I was alone, watching the hero go back to the past again and again to try to change the future. However, it can also be seen that the author is indeed a dick, and there are really a lot of jokes to say (I feel so happy when I see it, maybe I am stupid because of the knife?)

There is no problem with writing. It is definitely possible to write with love for everyone to read, but it is impossible to make money from this book. The rhythm of this book does not meet the mainstream public. It is possible but unlikely to make money from this book. In short, the book is still good.

I am a bit light on the day, and almost all the detailed descriptions clicked in my heart. The plot is very good and the logic is rigorous (because of the concept of time and space). The plot is not the so-called happy harem (it seems to be quite refreshing, but you will know why it is like this after watching it) In today's fast-paced era, instead of reading those so-called cool articles, come and read such texts. Some people may say that this is vulgar, or that such books affect learning. This is wrong. In fact, many famous books are also vulgar, and many famous books also have bad descriptions. When a person's tutor and the education provided by the school are normal, how can one's values ​​change because of a few words. Masterpieces are because they have literary value and reflect history. In my mind, this book already has literary value. Maybe some people will say how can it be compared, but a book that can express a person or a group of people well (that is, the characters are full) (in fact, in the famous books I have read, the characters are almost all full, with advantages and disadvantages), rather than the kind of flat characters, this book is already well written 😢 Sorry to say a lot of things that have nothing to do with the plot.

There's nothing to say, it's just a matter of time before the score goes up. The writing style is good, which makes people calm down and read, but it is not very dramatic, so there are few points of memory. Many plots that should be developed are relatively flat in terms of perception, and it is easy to forget after reading. It's currently on a branch line, but the author should have a design and be very diligent in updating it. It's worth looking forward to.

Five stars for encouragement. I still like the storyline. Although the portrayal of the male protagonist is a bit outdated and contradictory, and the joking dialogue with Chen in the second episode gave me a feeling that there was a lack of foreshadowing. The joking dialogue made me feel disconnected, but overall it was pretty good. I support every new writer and hope to be discovered and supported by more people. After all, it is normal for new writers to have less traffic and not be able to continue writing. But I just hope that if this novel can't be written anymore, even if it's a bad ending, there should be an ending, okay? Less unfinished regrets.

It's okay, but the third volume was too sudden for me. The main plot was advancing well, but it was suddenly interrupted. I think it would be better if the future volume (or the past) is inserted into the main plot as a side story. Because the main line of the third volume was disconnected, I may have to wait for the main line to be reconnected before I come back to read it. Unfortunately, I put it on my bookshelf.

It's really, really good to read. In the first volume, I felt that the protagonist was a bit childish and love-minded, but in the second volume, the protagonist has really grown up, especially in the last few chapters of the second volume. I subjectively think it's a god. I hope the author can finish it normally. Please don't stop updating. It's so exciting, because I feel that there are not many people watching it and I'm a little scared. I'll buy some gifts and treat the author to drink milk tea.