I Asked You to Concentrate on the Spy War, but You Decided to Expend Millions of Troops.

A very good book. The author seems to have escaped from the wilderness. I feel that a book with this kind of writing should not be published by Foreign Persimmon, but should be published by Qidian. The author's writing is really good.

Well written, sounds logical Dozens of fighter jets bombed a civilian cargo ship and almost made people run away [laughing]

Overall, it is a good novel and should be better than 90% of similar works on Rotten Tomatoes. But I would like to give some suggestions to the author from my personal experience. When I read your novel, the protagonist was quite familiar with various plots in the city. But once you switch to clones, that is, having meetings and conversations with a group of base people at the base, I just skipped them.

I have read a lot of spy war and anti-war novels. Either the author desperately writes about the brutality of the Japanese invaders and the tragedy of the people, or the data skills overwhelm the protagonist's ability, which makes people feel extremely frustrated! I tend to like reading cool articles! So I was always searching for cool articles, and I was lucky enough to find this book. I saw dual systems at the beginning of the novel! It's a spy system again and a red alert system again! I feel like I've discovered a really cool article that's really cool to the end! The author gave me a surprise! ! ! This conflict between the two systems first suppressed the protagonist's combat ability, and then gave rise to expectations from low to high! The writing is very smooth, and then the protagonist gradually transforms from a modern person into a spy master... I really look forward to the author's security guard to give me a good reading experience, the author [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

It's good-looking and the author's writing skills are good. The scenes described are very vivid. Dear author: Are you feeling well lately? The wind in Siberia is even colder and there have been several rounds of snowstorms, but the scenery is very beautiful. Please be sure to update quickly so that I can read more exciting things, otherwise the potatoes that have not yet been dug in Siberia will become your daily work and food. Beautiful Siberia and beautiful scenery are waiting for your arrival. Hope to see the new chapter soon, my dear author. ——Joseph Vissarionovich Stalin [laughs]

This book is really good. A spy story about an ordinary person growing up slowly. Not brainless and logical. The characters are charming too. It's a pity that the early stage was too slow. Tomato's book is too early-stage. Leave a comment. Support the author [blowing kiss]

There are no big problems, but there are quite a few minor ones. There is some hint of an emotional scene, but he said the protagonist is immature and will be tempted by beauty. I just hope it can be dealt with later. In those days, the love between children had to be compromised for the survival of the family and the country. Only with everyone can we have a small family.

The Red Alert part was averagely written, but the spy story was superbly written, giving it a feeling of watching TV. Whether it was describing the psychology of the joint, the action, or the logic, it was all very good. If the author writes well, publishing physical books is inevitable.

Judging from the current issue, the author's basic skills are still very solid. The two cool points are well separated, and there are basically no major problems. There are some minor problems in the front, but the author basically covers them up. In fact, considering that the protagonist is an ordinary person who traveled through time, it is normal to have some minor mistakes at the beginning. The author also has the courage to admit it and find ways to make up for it later. I feel that in Tomato, a five-star is still okay.

The shortcomings are that the first part of the book is procrastinating and the protagonist's character is flawed. Although I understand the author's ideas and try to advance the plot reasonably and describe the growth and changes of the protagonist, as other comments have said, few readers who come here to read the book have the patience to accept the lengthy article (such as the content of the meeting) and the protagonist's flaws, etc. However, after reading, there are improvements in these aspects, but It can be seen that the author will often read the comments and make changes, and another advantage is that whenever there is a toxic plot, the author will either change the plot, or if it can't be changed, update it to speed up the plot, so it still looks very enjoyable. More than seven points is still a bit less. If you can endure it and read the plot after the male protagonist establishes himself in the Secret Service, it is still worth watching.

Strictly speaking, it is not a red alert or spy novel in the strict sense on the market, so it will not give you a sense of satisfaction on a certain level. However, it is definitely a readable novel. If you want to use it to pass the time, it is more than enough. Not to mention, it does discover the refreshing feeling of combining dual themes and borrows some seriousness from spy films. In general, take a look, it won't waste your time, it's better than going to the bookstore to rummage through the trash without any idea.

I can see that you want to write well, but the problem with this book is that the current environment is different, and that you chose to publish it on Tomato is another. Many people who read the book don't have the time to think about the past and just want to have fun. But when you dig a hole for the protagonist, a group of people leave. Just like they say, the protagonist deserves it. Secondly, the two identities of the protagonist are too separated, and they still haven't communicated with each other after 100,000 words. To put it bluntly, writing a book in Tomato is a service industry, and you are not serving readers, you are just enjoying yourself. I just saw a comment saying that your writing style is like that of Qidian, but the plot of this book will most likely not be possible at Qidian. But the writing is okay, and although the plot is split, the portrayal of the protagonist is passable. Come on! After all, there are not many books that Tomato can read, so he finally fished out a book that he could read from the sea of ​​excrement [note]

Very well written. After Chapter 90, it will feel better. Like to watch

There are constant poisonous points, and there is also a very toxic plot for me, but I tolerate it. The reason for constant minor poisoning is because the author is a woman. Some plots are more female-oriented [laughing], for example, in more than 300 chapters, foreign bandits rob the protagonist's woman, and then dominate the warlord protagonist. If my woman is even injured, they will all be executed [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] The most poisonous point for me is a plot in which the protagonist saves civilians and then dies. Actually, it looks okay, not very poisonous, but it reminds me of a certain book about Japanese soldiers pressing civilians as shields in front of the position and raping women, and then the protagonist does not care whether his men live or die, and lets people rush into the Japanese position (the protagonist has no cannons, and his men are automatic rifles) The grenades, which seemed to be Red Alert explosives) changed from the defensive side to the attacking side, and a lot of people died, and the eight friendly forces nearby also came up, and then something unexpected came. I jumped to watch and saw a paragraph where the protagonist soldier and the civilians hugged each other and died laughing. I wrote a lot of psychological activities and almost vomited. It was real vomiting, and I felt physically nauseated. I gave that book two stars because I heard that one star would not be remembered. Also, the main character in the first 300 pictures is this one woman. I haven't looked back yet. My (male) view of this woman is that she is an agent who posted her for information. She is beautiful, but she doesn't pay much attention to it. It is similar to the protagonist's view of the gold-worshipping girl in the Godly novel, the golden phoenix who gives money. As a result, the article directly states that the protagonist goes out to find someone for this woman, and then the protagonist soldiers protect the woman very ruthlessly. It is written just like the queen😰. It's a hole filled. The purpose of sending troops is mostly to use this incident to intimidate surrounding forces so that they can be consolidated [awkward laughter]

After reading it, the evaluation is quite satisfactory, but there is a problem. Now that you have cheated, it will be very exciting, or you should not cheat and just use your wits. The most uncomfortable thing is not being able to get up or down, and you feel like you haven't seen anything after watching it.

It's rare to find a book that you can read with your head. The logic is clear, and it's not so mindless and comfortable to read. I've read a lot of books on the Internet that only focus on fun and ignore logic. This book is rare. Come on, the author. I hope I can finish it.

It can be said that this is a novel with very dense poisonous points. I am not deceived by the reviews. The first 300 chapters have quite frequent poisonous points, both big and small. It will get better after 300 chapters. Basically, every plot has its own poisonous points, but overall it is still okay, it is hay, and it is at a watchable level. Ignoring all the poisonous points may be regarded as fodder. Considering that the author of AI+ is a girl, it would be nice to be able to write like this in a male channel. I have considered re-reading the first 300 chapters to summarize the poisonous points so that I can avoid them if I write novels in the future.

Very good, come on ✊😍(づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~! ! ! "Reminder Post" The author's official portrait: Reading a masterpiece this time is like drinking sour plum soup in the dog days of summer, which makes me feel so happy! However, ten days have passed, and the new chapter has disappeared. We are so anxious that we are scratching our heads and tossing and turning over the pancakes on the kang, unable to sleep! The Stove Lord offers incense for three rounds, and the Moon Queen waxes and wanes again and again. Could it be that your pole is blocked by your lazy tendons? Or is it like the old ox dragging the plow slowly? Please! Sharpen the ink quickly and add lamp oil, don't let the readers' intestines turn into nine twists and turns due to hunger! If a new chapter comes out, we will definitely beat the gongs and drums to spread the news to the neighbors. Kill pigs and sheep, thank you sir! He kowtowed and pressed harder, The word "hope" is like hoping that the Dragon King will rain to save the dry fields!

After reading so many novels, I found that the most common thing is that when a character appears, he (she | it) first shows a certain single personality trait and is labeled first. Then slowly flesh out the characters through small details and storylines. If the irrational behavior results from character flaws, conflicts between reality and beliefs, it will damage the perception of some readers. How can I put it, the procrastination in the front and the gradual filling of the characters are inseparable. But it is precisely this choice of the entry point for the protagonist's image that determines that this kind of problem is bound to arise. It's just that the author handled certain situations well, and some handled them poorly. In terms of broad categories, military, youth, history, documentary, etc., Many of them will highlight the theme by showing a certain problem, a consequence, saving a mistake, and sublimating an image. These often use character flaws to flesh out the characters. But in the conflict of the story, we must consider its rationality and whether he must do this, rather than choosing to do so and participate in unnecessary storylines. This is a great test of the author's writing skills, that is, the characters drive the development of the story, and conversely the story drives the characters. The two exist at the same time and cannot be viewed in a single way. There is also the setting, which I won't go into details about. In short, this is not an absolute issue and must be viewed from a developmental perspective. I hope the author writes better and better! Ollie gave [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

I think an author should have some thoughts of his own. This author is too active. He is afraid of explaining everything. [Pause face]. His writing is good, but it is too utilitarian. It is inferior) should have its own character, which may be a bit literary, but if an author completely serves the readers, then I think the works he writes must have no depth. Most online articles are cool, but cool is cool, and some cool articles can also write a little depth. I think the author himself has ideas and strength, but maybe because of the current situation The real reason is that the writing of the work is very strange. This kind of strangeness is not caused by AI and other reasons, but a kind of indescribable, similar to the antecedent that cannot be related to the effect, but the effect can be inferred from the antecedent. The writing of the work is very strange (I personally feel). If the author can block the outside voice and focus on his own heart, I feel that he should be able to write an incredible story. Wrong work, but maybe the author really cares about the data of the book, so he wrote it like this.

It's not bad. I don't understand why the score is so low. It's a rare good book in spy games, but I guess most people who come here like to watch violent soldiers. This one is obviously biased towards espionage. To put it bluntly, the audience is wrong. For the time being, it is still possible to proceed with two lines. How can I say this? What's the difficulty with dual systems?

It's great, there are some small problems in some descriptions, but the flaws are completely outweighed. People who watch the big scene are very excited. Can the author insist on updating 6 times a day? [The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food]

What I find most well-written is that the protagonist unlocks the dual systems of "Spy War" and "Red Alert" at the same time. And with dual systems or even dual-line writing at the beginning, the author's lack of writing skills can easily destroy the plot and make the book bad. However, the author of this book uses the conflicts of the systems to cause greater problems. Chu He lives in the troubled times of Harbin. On the surface, he is a small policeman working in the camp. He is dragged into the spy battlefield. From cautious and cautious to bold and cautious, his strength gives him the confidence. The novel does not let the protagonist rush into the enemy's army and crush them without thinking. Instead, the soldiers in the Red Alert Base need points from the espionage system to provide resources. In this way, the logic of the espionage front is self-consistent, which makes every intelligence theft full of practical significance. It is a great work.

A very good anti-war article, different from traditional anti-war articles. This book is quite enjoyable. I have never read spy wars, so I subconsciously wanted to read it, but I couldn't stop reading it. The protagonist's focus is on explosive technology, supplemented by espionage and emotion.

This character is flesh and blood. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, you can really get emotional for him. But what about the protagonist? As a novice, I am growing up bit by bit, and it is not a purely cool article. However, many friends say, well, whether it is military or anything else, it is almost there, but after all, I am not a professional, so I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and it is still worth recommending. If someone hasn't read this book, would I feel sorry for him?

Author, your writing is really good, but don't be limited to the original version of Red Alert (foreigners really don't have much innovation). Red Alert is really fun and should be expanded according to the world view you wrote. It needs more powerful weapon technology and upgrade systems, such as three-star heroes, five-star heroes, etc., As well as various mods and Red Alert 3. It really needs to be expanded to be super exciting. Don't be limited to the original version of Red Alert, you have to make a big change, this is the real excitement

I read the latest one in one go, and I really feel that the progress is a bit too slow. I need to speed up the progress, otherwise according to the situation of this book, it will be estimated to be 2 million words until the beginning of the anti-Japanese war. However, I think the design, plot and story line of this book are very good, and the character description is also quite gripping. Overall, I can give it full marks. Indeed, the progress needs to be accelerated. It is recommended to enter the trap. The author writes very well and listens to the advice.

It's very interesting to watch. There is no cp so far. I hope there is no [sending heart] later. I can see that the emotional line in big letters will be a little weaker. I would like to emphasize that one of the heroines mentioned in big letters refers to the female character who appears in the plot development and is related to the protagonist. Let's talk about Dujuan. At first, the protagonist felt like Bai Yueguang, so she had an ambiguous crush on her, but they didn't have a relationship. Later, when she found out that she was tricked and betrayed, she became a colleague and friend again. Don't say anything like she almost fell asleep or it was a big loss if she confiscated it. It's normal when she likes her. Also, let the protagonist be the Holy Father who forgives them and then gets together with Meimei. You want Da Da to treat readers as 🤡. For those who want to sleep with all the beautiful girls who appear in the perspective of the male protagonist, this book is not suitable for you. Don't make some bad comments that will affect Da Da's mood [Chigua]

Top quality, masterpiece There is a growth process, and the transformation from ordinary people to spies should be exciting later. I hope you don't fall in love and can trade power and sex normally without getting emotional. I don't know how the author will handle organizational relationships in the future, I hope it won't turn into *** [laughing]

I usually give 5 stars after following the updates. I will say it as a bookworm. The low point of this article is that the red alert and the spy are what attracted me. The red alert line at the beginning is very good, from the police to the special agent, and the memory loss is added. It is a hellish start. To be honest, I almost gave up after reading it (I filled in the pit later). Fortunately, I persisted. When the heroine came out, it was connected with the previous article. It is really exciting! Keep up the good work, I look forward to writing better in the future