Second Playthrough Giyu: Spending This Life with the Butterfly

This is so beautifully written! It turns out I wrote it, so that's normal~

It's so beautiful [laughing], you're dying for the author, it's not bad, it's a state banquet, the subject matter is novel, the feelings are sincere, the only thing is that it's too little, please update more, the character of Yu🐟 is lacking, but I like it, the sugar content is moderate, but very sweet, I like it! The fight between Shitou and Yu🐟 is very cool, the young couple are sweet [laughing] [blowing kisses] The writing is very good, I am so good at writing! The corner of my mouth was harder to squeeze than ak when I watched it [laughing] But as for the fact that Yu 🐟 has always wanted to get married, I kind of wanted to laugh when I watched it. I highly recommend it! It's too early to tell, Yu🐟 is also quite gentle, no, very gentle, and treats little Ren this way, you can see it when the author writes about Yu🐟 and the core of the dream. To be honest, the author's fish🐟 and Ren are so vivid and concrete, I like it so much, the author picked it up, I will post a few chapters first, update quickly, don't finish it too early, let's watch the couple's interaction [laughs]

The emotional line is very delicately drawn. It is the only demon slayer CP novel that I can really follow. It not only writes about the emotions of Ginin, but also intersperses emotions in the main line to prevent readers from feeling bored. It is not like a running account. In short, it is very well written. The author must continue to write more [crying] [crying] The writing is really good. I hope the author will not starve to death and start a new book as soon as possible [Sending my heart]

I really think it's quite interesting. I've read many books by Ginin. Well, this book is the one I am most satisfied with. How should I put it? This book is humorous and funny. Although it contains a lot of jokes, there are deep emotions in the jokes and it does not make people feel overly descriptive. Although the characters of Giyuu and Shinobu are not like this and are a bit OOC, I quite like watching this kind of thing. This book not only depicts the Ginin, but also has plots with other Demon Slayer Hashira and ordinary people. Overall, the plot adaptation is very exciting, and I hope the author can continue writing like this. I really like this article (//∇//) (I hope the rating won't be too low. It's too low to deserve this article. I also hope more readers will fall in love with my comment)

After reading it for so long, I realized that I haven't written a review for this book yet. I will make up for it today. First of all, this book is impeccable in terms of language and other descriptions. The emotional descriptions are also great. I have read so many Bengi-Ninja novels, not just one of the best, but definitely one of the top five. In the daily life of this book, the couple Yiren can no longer be described as "sweet". Do you know what word to use? Use "", but I feel that Shinobu is a little too shy (maybe because Kanae is still here) Secondly, the description of the fighting scenes in this book is very good, exciting but not too many (this reminds me of the fighting scenes in another book, which are exciting and not too many @ Xiangdikaijushiha, you think so) and the description of the fighting scenes is perfect: the characters' thinking in desperate situations, the customization of tactics, etc. Moreover, all kinds of CPs are basically described, but it may be because the decisive battle has not been completed yet, and some CPs have not been described too much (after all, the author said that it is mainly Ginin's), but you have to believe the author's daily life. After the decisive battle is over, every pair of CPs will definitely be described. I won't say too much about the rest of the advantages, otherwise it would be a bit... Emm... A waste of brains (hehe, it's definitely not that I can't think of it). Now that we have talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages (not to be picky!!!) First of all, many characters in the previous plot did not appear, such as Tanjuro's family. It stands to reason that Tanjuro's talent is extremely high. The Lord will definitely use all his strength to see if he can be cured. If he can't be cured, he will be allowed to enjoy the rest of his life (it should be portrayed logically). But here, after the end of Kutoriyama, Tanjuro did not appear. Also, Koiyuki's adoptive father was not introduced after Fujisakiyama briefly mentioned it (maybe he will appear later after fighting Muzan) Secondly, the plot is a bit too fast. You Guo, sword forging and pillar training are not included. Although it would be too much to write all the chapters, but to be honest, this is also due to some reasons of the author. There are too many chapters about Teng Xishan. If you write less about the selection of Teng Xishan, and write about Yu Guo, sword forging and pillar training, it may make your novel more perfect @Like Ami Donkey Okay, let's make a summary: This book is very good overall. The writing is delicate and the characters, battles, etc. Are all perfectly depicted. It would be even more perfect if I wrote about You Guo... This is my favorite among the Ginin books I have read. The update frequency is stable and the word count is also stable at around 5,000 words (each chapter). My rating is undoubtedly five stars. If you can comment multiple times, I will increase this book to 9.9. If you are hesitating whether to read this novel, my answer will be "Why are you hesitating? Read it quickly." Finally, I would like to send you my best wishes: Come on, author. I hope your novel will be seen by more and more people. I also hope that the rating of this novel will exceed 9.0 As soon as possible. I also hope that the author's next book will be better and more perfect. The next book will include all of these things about You Guo... @Radishfish Please give me a rating for this book, otherwise I won't read your novel [laughing] Add a follow-up comment: I forgot to mention that the characters in this book are slightly OOC, but why do you care so much? Every Ginin novel has some OOC to some extent. If you don't read this book because it is OOC, then I sincerely recommend you not to read fanfiction in the future. In short, this book does not have too much OOC (at least in my eyes). Maybe only the main characters have it, but this level is completely negligible. After all, it is all fan fiction, so you don't have to worry about it so much. If you are "fucked" by the author every day, you will forget about this OOC. (I will write a review of the next book when I am about 90 chapters away. Don't worry, I want to [make faces] this time @Like Ami Donkey) @FukuokaSalmon @WQWL @TAKA @ @CP fans who like Smailu @sh @… @ care~~~ @ Chapter @ Sakura Falls Three Geng Yues @ Mo You Zhi Ming @ The slow-heated cuteness can't write the title @Tomioka Winter Rain @ Die Shui Xiang Xi @ The Righteous Ninja Heavy Dependence.. I don't know if any of you have seen it and who hasn't. In short, the "acquaintances" are all Aite. Please give this book a review! Remember to add a bookshelf

It's very interesting. I can give it a 9 points. The author's understanding of the original characters is very good. The Snow Love chapter is a bit unreasonable and has a feeling of the author's supernatural power, but it does not affect the quality of the whole book. It's a novel anyway, so long as it's good to read, it's over!

Just like it was deduced step by step from rebirth as a logical starting point, everything fell into place. The characters' personalities are grasped just right, and even the image of Tong Mo, the most difficult to understand and difficult to understand, the psychology full of contradictions, the intertwining of light and dark, the coexistence of good and evil, is vividly expressed. Of course, the most important thing is that although there are only a few descriptions of Shinobu's original image in the original Demon Slayer, and most of them are her disguises, the author (I think) perfectly restored the original Butterfly Ninja, which can be regarded as settling a knot in my heart (damn, I couldn't find a suitable emoticon) I can't give a higher rating. Conferred God.

What a great write-up! Let me, an outsider, eat it with gusto. Although I have never seen Demon Slayer, this must be a very sad story, so please make it a dumpling-making story! Outsiders pass by, they are shocked, outsiders eat with gusto [smile]

One of the best fanfics I have ever read. If you like Giyuu and Shinobu, you must not miss it. The relationship is delicate and sincere. The Shuizhu who plays straight ball in this life and the happy and arrogant Diezhu are so sweet.

Very beautiful! Yiyong's language has become stronger😱