The protagonist is the clone of the Child Emperor under Genos, Shota Hero. Little boy.
No system. No heroine, no CP. The original plot in the early stage is mainly unit drama. Slow writing
He has the ability to be resurrected as long as he wants to live.
Then there are other genes added by Genos, which will evolve during each battle.
And often reset the previous chapters to maintain the look and feel. If you have any unpleasant feelings, want to make suggestions, or even have your own ideas about the plot, you can tell me. Try to tell me directly.
Reader comments
This is the first time I have seen such a good one-punch article. The author has his own rhythm and his ideas are very good.
There was a little water in the back. I also hope that there will be as few poisonous spots as possible in the back.
I think it's the best among tomato punch fanfics.
The emotional descriptions are very delicate, the descriptions of each character are very close to the original work, and the plot is well inserted without being too abrupt.
And those who like to kowtow to CP are in luck [blowing kisses]
It's a very interesting book. What's different from other One Punch Man works on the market is that the author did not set up an invincible person. Instead, he used Saitama as a covert method to let the protagonist grow through the relationship between people. A 10-year-old protagonist is also interesting. It allowed me to see Saitama's side as a reliable adult, but the fragment of his past life looked a bit spoiled, but it was completely unnecessary.
Any suggestions? Especially whether it should be written according to the plot, or whether it should be more original, both can be mentioned. [Cover face]
The sources of inspiration for this book include Ultraman, Rick and Morty, Flame Fist, Blade Fang, Sea Tiger, Doctor Who, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Journey to the West, Jojo, SpongeBob SquarePants, etc.
Some plots may seem familiar. Probably related to these aspects. Especially the original plot. [Cover face]
This is probably the most beautiful one-punch novel I have ever read. Each character is portrayed very delicately, and the protagonist's psychological fluctuations are also very consistent with the character. Come on, the author [angry] [angry] [angry]
Unique among fans of One Punch on Rotten Persimmon
The best one, it's not about getting stronger for fun, it's much better than other One Punch Man books.
I have seen the latest chapter 64. All the characters are consistent with the original work, there is no OOC, the daily aspects are very well written, and the emotional expression is also very delicate. It is a high-quality One-Punch Man novel.
It's beautiful, the writing is very detailed, and the characters fit the original comics very well.
Oh my god, I like the daily life of the protagonist and Saitama so much. The fighting scenes are also very beautiful [full] The characters have no OOC and the protagonist has no CP and no ambiguity. Where can I find such a good-looking article [Sending my heart]
This book is good, with very few poisonous points and a more everyday style. It is very suitable for me to read. It is one of the few books in Yiquan Wen. It can be regarded as a food and grass book and has a very strong sense of immersion in the early stage.
The lovely Yong and Tong Di, I want to see them [admiring] each other.
So pretty! There are very few fanfics with good writing. I originally wanted to gain weight but couldn't help but click in... The rating is probably because I'm just starting out. If I continue to maintain this level, I feel like I can get a 9 or above! Come on, author!
Recommended, the author's character design is quite good, and the dialogue and behavioral logic of the characters are very close to the original work.
The combat performance is comfortable. It does not overwhelm the protagonist's combat power and strictly follows Saitama's performance in the original work. As a clone of the Child Emperor, you can feel that he is a completely different individual. The two children's colleagues are very cute in daily life.
[Like] [Like] [Like] The setting is very interesting and the emotions are very good
Come on, big brother who writes one-punch articles!
This is a very well-written one-punch fanfic, and all the characters are very consistent with the original work! The protagonist Shota Hero is super cute, and I really like the interaction between the protagonist and Mr. Saitama and the Child Emperor!
I originally thought that more than 80 chapters would not be a lot of words, but when it turned out to be 440,000 words, I wondered why it took so long to read.
Let's have more stories about Xiaoyong and Xiaoyong [blowing kisses]
It's very appetizing. It would be even better if the protagonist can have Overlord Chasing Fist in the future.
This is the best one-punch fanfic Tomato has ever read. The only point is why the protagonist has been resisting pressure since he became an S-class? The legendary pressure-resistant king said yes
The plot is quite good, and the writing is very good. You have to stick to it, author, and don't get involved in palace power [laughing evilly]
It's not mindless, it has the author's own thinking
I want to see more Tongdi and Yong's TieTie plot [crying] [crying] It's best to stick to the same plot as when they were in the hot spring together [Admiration] [Pouty] [Pout]
It's very interesting to watch, and the characters are well portrayed.
It's good-looking, the daily writing is very warm, and it's not fluent in writing. It's top-notch in terms of writing. The key is that it updates a lot 😋, good luck to the author
The style is very good, the characters are very vivid and there are no OOCs, and the writing is very delicate. It is a very good one-punch fanfic, but the combat description is too complicated, but the flaws are not hidden.
Enough of the good reviews, the author will update soon! That's what I want to see!
The writing is so detailed that it actually feels like daily life.
It's very delicate, but it doesn't give people the feeling of being in the hydrology
It's great, but why are there so few people?
Come on, brother who writes novels, you must keep writing!
This is the first time I have seen such a good one-punch article. The author has his own rhythm and his ideas are very good. There was a little water in the back. I also hope that there will be as few poisonous spots as possible in the back.
I think it's the best among tomato punch fanfics. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, the descriptions of each character are very close to the original work, and the plot is well inserted without being too abrupt. And those who like to kowtow to CP are in luck [blowing kisses]
It's a very interesting book. What's different from other One Punch Man works on the market is that the author did not set up an invincible person. Instead, he used Saitama as a covert method to let the protagonist grow through the relationship between people. A 10-year-old protagonist is also interesting. It allowed me to see Saitama's side as a reliable adult, but the fragment of his past life looked a bit spoiled, but it was completely unnecessary.
Any suggestions? Especially whether it should be written according to the plot, or whether it should be more original, both can be mentioned. [Cover face] The sources of inspiration for this book include Ultraman, Rick and Morty, Flame Fist, Blade Fang, Sea Tiger, Doctor Who, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Journey to the West, Jojo, SpongeBob SquarePants, etc. Some plots may seem familiar. Probably related to these aspects. Especially the original plot. [Cover face]
This is probably the most beautiful one-punch novel I have ever read. Each character is portrayed very delicately, and the protagonist's psychological fluctuations are also very consistent with the character. Come on, the author [angry] [angry] [angry]
Unique among fans of One Punch on Rotten Persimmon
The best one, it's not about getting stronger for fun, it's much better than other One Punch Man books.
I have seen the latest chapter 64. All the characters are consistent with the original work, there is no OOC, the daily aspects are very well written, and the emotional expression is also very delicate. It is a high-quality One-Punch Man novel.
It's beautiful, the writing is very detailed, and the characters fit the original comics very well.
Oh my god, I like the daily life of the protagonist and Saitama so much. The fighting scenes are also very beautiful [full] The characters have no OOC and the protagonist has no CP and no ambiguity. Where can I find such a good-looking article [Sending my heart]
This book is good, with very few poisonous points and a more everyday style. It is very suitable for me to read. It is one of the few books in Yiquan Wen. It can be regarded as a food and grass book and has a very strong sense of immersion in the early stage.
The lovely Yong and Tong Di, I want to see them [admiring] each other.
So pretty! There are very few fanfics with good writing. I originally wanted to gain weight but couldn't help but click in... The rating is probably because I'm just starting out. If I continue to maintain this level, I feel like I can get a 9 or above! Come on, author!
Recommended, the author's character design is quite good, and the dialogue and behavioral logic of the characters are very close to the original work. The combat performance is comfortable. It does not overwhelm the protagonist's combat power and strictly follows Saitama's performance in the original work. As a clone of the Child Emperor, you can feel that he is a completely different individual. The two children's colleagues are very cute in daily life.
[Like] [Like] [Like] The setting is very interesting and the emotions are very good
Come on, big brother who writes one-punch articles!
This is a very well-written one-punch fanfic, and all the characters are very consistent with the original work! The protagonist Shota Hero is super cute, and I really like the interaction between the protagonist and Mr. Saitama and the Child Emperor!
I originally thought that more than 80 chapters would not be a lot of words, but when it turned out to be 440,000 words, I wondered why it took so long to read.
Let's have more stories about Xiaoyong and Xiaoyong [blowing kisses]
It's very appetizing. It would be even better if the protagonist can have Overlord Chasing Fist in the future.
This is the best one-punch fanfic Tomato has ever read. The only point is why the protagonist has been resisting pressure since he became an S-class? The legendary pressure-resistant king said yes
The plot is quite good, and the writing is very good. You have to stick to it, author, and don't get involved in palace power [laughing evilly]
It's not mindless, it has the author's own thinking
I want to see more Tongdi and Yong's TieTie plot [crying] [crying] It's best to stick to the same plot as when they were in the hot spring together [Admiration] [Pouty] [Pout]
It's very interesting to watch, and the characters are well portrayed.
It's good-looking, the daily writing is very warm, and it's not fluent in writing. It's top-notch in terms of writing. The key is that it updates a lot 😋, good luck to the author
The style is very good, the characters are very vivid and there are no OOCs, and the writing is very delicate. It is a very good one-punch fanfic, but the combat description is too complicated, but the flaws are not hidden. Enough of the good reviews, the author will update soon! That's what I want to see!
The writing is so detailed that it actually feels like daily life.
It's very delicate, but it doesn't give people the feeling of being in the hydrology
It's great, but why are there so few people? Come on, brother who writes novels, you must keep writing!