(Light-hearted and humorous) (Daily) (Single heroine) (Group portrait)
When Lin Hezhi delivered food for the first time, he bumped into Jiang Mier, a lonely senior who wanted to commit suicide.
"What does it mean to bring a pair of scissors with you when ordering takeout, but only use the scissors and not take out the takeout?"
Fate has bound these two unrelated people together.
That afternoon, he stumbled into her blind date.
"I, I heard from the instructor that I am here for the evaluation. Is this a dumpling-making activity center?"
The lonely school beauty, Jiang Mier, who had never been seen speaking even though she had been in school for two years, had a pair of deep eyes. As the new class entered the school, there were people who wanted to challenge her and teased her.
It was such a weird senior, but she got entangled with Lin Hezhi. Her love for Lin Hezhi was also very simple, that is, she only talked to him.
"Mr. Lin, do you believe in fate?"
"Ms. Jiang, I thank fate."
The train will leave and come back again, and those who are willing to wait for you will always be waiting for you.
Reader comments
Book reviews are really difficult for me. The writing is definitely not good, but the expression is okay, and some parts are inexplicably well written. Most of the parts need to be corrected. As for the literary and youth parts that some people say, they probably give the supporting characters too many tragic experiences to allude to certain social phenomena. I don't think it's totally bad, but it's just that It is necessary to control the frequency. Once or twice is considered a full-fledged character, and more than three times is suspected of being a literary youth. Most people don't like overly depressing plots (and I have to say that except for the male and female protagonists, every supporting character has a somewhat literary youth feel). Then there is the plot rhythm. There is a problem. The first part is fine, but as I write, I start to lose control. The pacing was slow, maybe it was influenced by the comment section. I spent a lot of time describing Xu Qian's part of the plot, but the most important solution to the problem was a bit brushed off. Although it ended well in the end, it didn't feel satisfying. The victim was beaten and dropped out of school, and the perpetrator was not even punished by the law in the end. It was a big mistake but a small punishment. Finally, let's talk about the problem of the heroine. The character can be set like this, but it is not easy to write. The emotional changes cannot be written. In the end, I can only express it through a diary. Although it is acceptable, it is overall inferior and has no sense of substitution. The heroine's emotions are not very expressed, and the male protagonist is inexplicably entangled. I can understand what the author wants to express, but he did not write it well.
Although there are a lot of faults, it is generally good. It is difficult for a single female protagonist to control the plot. I can only say that the author should sum up his experience. Overall, I can give a recommendation.
Disadvantages: The old problem of literary youth, moaning for no reason. (Take the middle paragraph as an example. After the male protagonist knew that the female protagonist liked him, he booked a ticket and wandered around from home, claiming to be looking for answers. Finally, he wandered to the place where he went to school. He didn't sleep, and he didn't know how to ask for money from his family... Anyway, I couldn't sympathize with this paragraph. Instead, I felt it was inexplicable and I was moaning.)
Apart from what was said above, the other plots are not bad, and the character creation is pretty good, especially the portrayal of Li Si, which is very three-dimensional and intuitive. From what I have seen so far, the character Li Si impressed me the most, and he is also the most optimistic person in the book. I hope he will be treated sincerely.
The following is a conversation between the male and female protagonists, which is also where I saw it. It is also because of this conversation that I wanted to write a book review.
"I don't know. I used to think that people are full of shortcomings and hypocrisy. But as you learn more about it, the shortcomings of the people around you seem not to be so obvious anymore."
"No, it's not because of me, but gradually you will find that the shortcomings of your friends are exactly what makes them interesting and interesting. Just like a plate of dye, you can't ask all the colors to be angelic white. Only messy colors can make up a painting."
Five-star review. It's really beautiful. It gives me a feeling like "There's a Canteen by the Clouds". I think if the author changes his name, polishes the story, and controls the word count, he can really publish it.
Boom boom boom boom boom boom boom! ! ! ! !
The story may develop a little quickly, but it doesn't feel compact or rushed at all. Instead, it has a very unique rhythm.
It's not a cookie-cutter plot at all. Every move of each character is completely natural, and the details and foreshadowing are also exquisitely exaggerated. So ingenious!
I just accidentally read it, but it made me stay up late to finish it, and at that time I wanted to give it to my bro from Amway
This book appeared on Tomato, but it doesn't want to be an online article. It is more like a light novel projected by the author and recording youth.
I hope we can have such a group of divine friends in our lives and have such a unique love and youth!
Not bad, not bad. It's the innocent moaning of the literary youth, but it's fun and interesting to read🤔 It feels like the author is dreaming about what he wrote, but it's like he has experienced it himself. The contradiction is reasonable, and the writing is good. Looking at the liberal arts students, I, a science student, can only laugh and read in the advanced mathematics class [Thinking]
It's hard to say how good the writing and plot settings are, but the writing is quite comfortable. After six or seven years of reading, there are very few books that I can read so comfortably, and each one is still fresh in my memory. Come on, author, support me with five stars.
I didn't come here just to get extra credits.
A very pleasant book to write. The writing is smooth and the author has his own style. The writing power should be the well-deserved number one among the modern novels I have read. Cheers to the health of the knight🍻
It feels like the male protagonist and female protagonist are fictional but! There are two characters in it who are very popular. One is the guide, and the other is the one named Xu. They have similar emotional experiences. They are most likely the same person. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are the kind of love the author hopes for. I can only guess these [thoughts]
I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is very good. It has real darkness, but it also shows us the beauty of friends and lovers supporting each other and being happy after the darkness. It's not a very refreshing feeling, but it can bring us into it, as if we are one of them, and feel real happiness.
It's pretty good, it would be better if there were more updates [laughing]
Being a bookworm for ten years, I think the writing is really good. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, this is the first comment for you
I like this style very much, but the middle part of the movie was a bit radioactive when I went to Nanjing. It was like I was confused and sick. Then the most important thing is Xu Qian's handling. Reality may indeed be so tragic, but the novel is fictional. You can use other means and plots to create an image instead of using this cruelest way in the work. I hope to improve Xu Qian's plot. This is light literature. I don't like to watch people grow up after carrying huge tragedies.
I hope there's no knife in the back
A good book is a good book, but I feel like it may be difficult to write in a long way. I think it should be a short or medium novel, but I like to read long novels.
Youth is courage
It's quite comfortable to watch
Hee hee hee hee hee hee [laughing]
Not bad, there is indeed something written in it
Good looking, not bad, good luck to the author
Beautiful, the writing is relaxing
Good looking. Love to see more.
I really have to say something, I feel like I'm back in high school, reading novels during evening classes.
I felt uncomfortable reading this book, but it's a good book, but I can't accept the malice.
After watching half of it, I feel like Wang Xiaobo No. 2
How come no one reads such a beautiful book?
It can be seen that some settings should be borrowed from Chunwu
Yes, if the beginning is better, the book is very good and tasteful. The beginning is better and the taste is better. I feel like I can publish a book.
Book reviews are really difficult for me. The writing is definitely not good, but the expression is okay, and some parts are inexplicably well written. Most of the parts need to be corrected. As for the literary and youth parts that some people say, they probably give the supporting characters too many tragic experiences to allude to certain social phenomena. I don't think it's totally bad, but it's just that It is necessary to control the frequency. Once or twice is considered a full-fledged character, and more than three times is suspected of being a literary youth. Most people don't like overly depressing plots (and I have to say that except for the male and female protagonists, every supporting character has a somewhat literary youth feel). Then there is the plot rhythm. There is a problem. The first part is fine, but as I write, I start to lose control. The pacing was slow, maybe it was influenced by the comment section. I spent a lot of time describing Xu Qian's part of the plot, but the most important solution to the problem was a bit brushed off. Although it ended well in the end, it didn't feel satisfying. The victim was beaten and dropped out of school, and the perpetrator was not even punished by the law in the end. It was a big mistake but a small punishment. Finally, let's talk about the problem of the heroine. The character can be set like this, but it is not easy to write. The emotional changes cannot be written. In the end, I can only express it through a diary. Although it is acceptable, it is overall inferior and has no sense of substitution. The heroine's emotions are not very expressed, and the male protagonist is inexplicably entangled. I can understand what the author wants to express, but he did not write it well. Although there are a lot of faults, it is generally good. It is difficult for a single female protagonist to control the plot. I can only say that the author should sum up his experience. Overall, I can give a recommendation.
Disadvantages: The old problem of literary youth, moaning for no reason. (Take the middle paragraph as an example. After the male protagonist knew that the female protagonist liked him, he booked a ticket and wandered around from home, claiming to be looking for answers. Finally, he wandered to the place where he went to school. He didn't sleep, and he didn't know how to ask for money from his family... Anyway, I couldn't sympathize with this paragraph. Instead, I felt it was inexplicable and I was moaning.) Apart from what was said above, the other plots are not bad, and the character creation is pretty good, especially the portrayal of Li Si, which is very three-dimensional and intuitive. From what I have seen so far, the character Li Si impressed me the most, and he is also the most optimistic person in the book. I hope he will be treated sincerely. The following is a conversation between the male and female protagonists, which is also where I saw it. It is also because of this conversation that I wanted to write a book review. "I don't know. I used to think that people are full of shortcomings and hypocrisy. But as you learn more about it, the shortcomings of the people around you seem not to be so obvious anymore." "No, it's not because of me, but gradually you will find that the shortcomings of your friends are exactly what makes them interesting and interesting. Just like a plate of dye, you can't ask all the colors to be angelic white. Only messy colors can make up a painting."
Five-star review. It's really beautiful. It gives me a feeling like "There's a Canteen by the Clouds". I think if the author changes his name, polishes the story, and controls the word count, he can really publish it.
Boom boom boom boom boom boom boom! ! ! ! ! The story may develop a little quickly, but it doesn't feel compact or rushed at all. Instead, it has a very unique rhythm. It's not a cookie-cutter plot at all. Every move of each character is completely natural, and the details and foreshadowing are also exquisitely exaggerated. So ingenious! I just accidentally read it, but it made me stay up late to finish it, and at that time I wanted to give it to my bro from Amway This book appeared on Tomato, but it doesn't want to be an online article. It is more like a light novel projected by the author and recording youth. I hope we can have such a group of divine friends in our lives and have such a unique love and youth!
Not bad, not bad. It's the innocent moaning of the literary youth, but it's fun and interesting to read🤔 It feels like the author is dreaming about what he wrote, but it's like he has experienced it himself. The contradiction is reasonable, and the writing is good. Looking at the liberal arts students, I, a science student, can only laugh and read in the advanced mathematics class [Thinking]
It's hard to say how good the writing and plot settings are, but the writing is quite comfortable. After six or seven years of reading, there are very few books that I can read so comfortably, and each one is still fresh in my memory. Come on, author, support me with five stars.
I didn't come here just to get extra credits.
A very pleasant book to write. The writing is smooth and the author has his own style. The writing power should be the well-deserved number one among the modern novels I have read. Cheers to the health of the knight🍻
It feels like the male protagonist and female protagonist are fictional but! There are two characters in it who are very popular. One is the guide, and the other is the one named Xu. They have similar emotional experiences. They are most likely the same person. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are the kind of love the author hopes for. I can only guess these [thoughts]
I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is very good. It has real darkness, but it also shows us the beauty of friends and lovers supporting each other and being happy after the darkness. It's not a very refreshing feeling, but it can bring us into it, as if we are one of them, and feel real happiness.
It's pretty good, it would be better if there were more updates [laughing]
Being a bookworm for ten years, I think the writing is really good. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, this is the first comment for you
I like this style very much, but the middle part of the movie was a bit radioactive when I went to Nanjing. It was like I was confused and sick. Then the most important thing is Xu Qian's handling. Reality may indeed be so tragic, but the novel is fictional. You can use other means and plots to create an image instead of using this cruelest way in the work. I hope to improve Xu Qian's plot. This is light literature. I don't like to watch people grow up after carrying huge tragedies.
I hope there's no knife in the back
A good book is a good book, but I feel like it may be difficult to write in a long way. I think it should be a short or medium novel, but I like to read long novels.
Youth is courage
It's quite comfortable to watch
Hee hee hee hee hee hee [laughing]
Not bad, there is indeed something written in it
Good looking, not bad, good luck to the author
Beautiful, the writing is relaxing
Good looking. Love to see more.
I really have to say something, I feel like I'm back in high school, reading novels during evening classes.
I felt uncomfortable reading this book, but it's a good book, but I can't accept the malice.
After watching half of it, I feel like Wang Xiaobo No. 2
How come no one reads such a beautiful book?
It can be seen that some settings should be borrowed from Chunwu
Yes, if the beginning is better, the book is very good and tasteful. The beginning is better and the taste is better. I feel like I can publish a book.
Plain, simple, yet full of life and good-looking
Light as water, but with the fun of bubbles