
This Is Why I Was Targeted by a Girl When I Was Playing Football in Japan
我在日本踢球被太妹盯上这件事
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Football Article! ! ! !
Football article! ! ! Systematic
Enter the Single Heroine, Stay Away from the Harem
As long as there is only one female protagonist, as long as there is only one female protagonist, as long as there is only one female protagonist, say the important things three times, don't be ambiguous, be specific, I'm almost sick of reading harem stories these days
One of the Best Football Articles.
Football article
Football Articles (It Would Be Best to Have a World Cup)
I would like to read a book like "Football Nuclear Weapons: A Club for One Pound". To be honest, the best thing about Tomato 🍅 right now is football ⚽️. Come out quickly. Wasted. (It would be best to have a World Cup)
Single Heroine, Never a Harem, Any Type Is Fine
Japanese Light Novel, the Kind Where the Male Protagonist Goes to Study Abroad
I want to watch content similar to "I am in a comprehensive comic, and I am picked up and taken home by the Angel at the beginning". Stop pushing Youth Story, please, Tsundere really doesn't like it. If I really don't like reading it, I'd recommend something like Lord Angel. Please don't add weird books, only Japanese ones.
Highly Rated Football Novels
The protagonist is Chinese. From domestic football to the world league. He also wants to lead the Chinese team to win the World Cup! !
Single Girl (Any Series Is Acceptable)
Want to watch something similar to "Aloof School Beauty?" The book is just a clingy love brain (the dog food is super sweet). Single Girl If you want novels with single female protagonists, don't push a bunch of messy novels. Don't push novels that have nothing to do with single girls. I hope this is an article about a single woman.
Want a Single Heroine
Are there any novels with a single heroine who is not ambiguous with anyone else at all?
Is There Really No Masterpiece of Football Writing?
I want to read a book similar to "Football: Rejecting the National Football Team, I Join the German National Team (I am the God of Football)". I have read all the Tomato football articles that I can read, and most of them have problems. I feel that there are really no good football articles.
Are There Any Japanese Light Novels?
A Collection of Light Novels
Mainly I want to see if there are any light novels on Tomato. I feel like I haven't seen them very often. To read a light novel, I have to look for it on other platforms for a long time.
Looking for High-Quality Football Articles
I want to read a book similar to "I'm a perfect passer, Messi and Ronaldo are crying".
Are There Any Spy Novels as Exciting as Barbed Wire?
I want to read a book similar to "Spy Code I am Waste Barbed Wire (Spy: Jedi)". After chasing the barbed wire fence every day, I no longer know what to look at, and I shed tears. I never get into other spy novels😭























































The routine of a hot-blooded comic is not bad, but the game is too formulaic. I am always full of confidence before the game, then falters at the beginning, and then becomes sensational. I can almost guess the ending after seeing the beginning of the plot. After watching it for a long time, I feel a little tired of reading, but overall it is okay. You can read it if you are short of books. Highly rated, the AI flavor is a bit strong. After reading that the author has updated more than ten books at the same time, he is simply a superman.
Five-star praise, don't be fooled by the ratings. The new book has a low rating, but the author is very capable. Without violating the rules of football, he writes the feeling of Japanese comics (hot-blooded teenagers). The only suggestion is not to write about the national football team. Joining the national football team is either disgusting or violates the rules. Writing about the national football team is equivalent to writing official articles, which ordinary football writers cannot grasp.
I don't know why this book has such a low rating. This is the best football novel I've ever read. The emotional lines are intertwined without being awkward. It feels like watching a hot-blooded Japanese comic. Canceling the point mode and switching to training to increase praise can make the content look more real. At the same time, many people talk about the pain point of wanting to play for the country. In fact, I think it is very reasonable. If we were football players, wouldn't we want to wear a red jersey and win glory for the country? Although the current national football team is very poor, I have really seen its changes. The youth training system is slowly being established, and there are more children in Xinjiang. Although there is still a gap in strength with the first-class or even second-class teams in Asia, I still love our country's football team. My father has been waiting for the revitalization of the national football team for 20 years. I don't know if I can wait, but I can't wait. There are generations of Chinese people who can wait and choose to contribute a small amount to China's football industry. I sincerely hope that more and more innocent-hearted players like Wang Zijie and Zhou Tian will appear. Full marks
Those who say they don't want to play for the national football team, do you want the protagonist to change his nationality and play for the Blue Warriors? Isn't this more painful? Secondly, this is my opinion. This is a very nice novel, one of the best among the many football novels I have read. The most attractive part of this book is the emotional drama with the heroine. Sometimes it is easy for people to get involved in it involuntarily. I also play football, and this novel is one of the more reasonable ones I have read. It can also be seen that the author has some knowledge of the Japanese professional league, and does not have a winning streak like other novels, crossing major skills and levels, and winning against teams that are higher than his own. It can also be regarded as a small group portrait article. It not only describes the protagonist, but also the teammates' coordination skills are worthy of praise. Overall, it is an excellent book among football articles. Keep up the hard work. Four stars are given for fear that the author will be proud.
It's really great, or it can be considered a high-quality football article on Tomato. The overall story is very passionate, and there are some inner monologues and speeches from the middle school students. It feels like an anime. I didn't know what the Japanese league was like before, but there is no hindrance to reading because the author's description is so detailed. But the protagonist of this book still follows the route of the national team. I like this very much. Although the Chinese team is sometimes terrible and the Football Association is very bad, don't the fans hope that their national team will be better? In the past few years, there were many plots about winning glory for the country. Basically, the football articles I read before are rare now. In fact, the author's writing style is still a bit immature, but the character creation is still very good and deserves a high score. Looking at it now, it doesn't feel like it did at the beginning. I started chasing after chapter 100. Now it's getting more and more complicated. It's getting more and more ai. The plot of J League has been delayed for too long. It's almost 400 chapters and it's not yet in the top five leagues. Don't be so lazy. I don't know what use this low-level league is with the protagonist's current strength. I wish I had to write two chapters for every game. Sigh😮💨
Wokwok is so beautiful🤣🤣🤣🤣 It really gives me the feeling of watching a sports show! ! ! Most of the comments in the comment area are about whether Japanese football is too strong in this way. In fact, you only need to consider two factors. The first is that Japanese football is the best in Asia. The second is to treat this book as a Japanese drama. In this way, there will be no problem with the description of Japanese football! ! Finally, let me say it again, this book is really great! Even people with no football knowledge can still watch it! (Just like me)
There are some Japanese hot-blooded sports comics that feel like Blue Reed. Although the protagonist becomes stronger through the panel, there is also the guidance of a good teacher and self-breakthrough. If you like this type, you can get a good experience. (Originally I wanted to give it 4 stars because love is not as sweet as Qing Zhiwei [laughing evilly])
Surprisingly good, the male protagonist has the image of a classic hot-blooded comic, with a little bit of emotional support, and the plug-ins are not too much. I only add a little in one game, and more improvements are made by myself.
It's a very good book. I felt very happy and excited when I first started reading it. However, I felt uncomfortable after I guessed that the author was going to write about returning to the national football team. You laid the groundwork so well in the early stage. The protagonist is in Japan, has a girlfriend, close friends, teammates who are 100% trustworthy, and has a wonderful life. There is really no need to write about the national football team. The French guy said that Pedro will only let him do odd jobs. So what is the meaning of the plot of the emotional exchange between Pedro and Sunday? I can only say that the left and right brains are fighting each other, and the most difficult thing is that the national football team did not want the protagonist at the beginning, and the attitude was not as good as the attitude given by the Blue Warriors. In short, really, if Sunday stayed in Japan to develop, the book review would definitely be more than that, but the key is that many readers hope that Sunday can stay in Japan and develop, and the bond with people like Kudo and Tanaka can continue, and it is a fact that the national football team is bad, there is no need. The author's writing style is not bad at all, and he also writes very well about emotional dramas and growth. However, from the current point of view, it is really not worth giving up your brilliant future for the so-called national team. I hope the author can consider it carefully. I will still read the book, but it's still uncomfortable. So far, it seems that the writing is almost as expected, very good. I thought that the national team would be the same as the final fantasy of other football novels. Now it seems that the writing is quite good. Finally, it is Rixi 99
It's very beautiful and passionate. I stayed up all night reading it yesterday. It was so cool. Besides, the author is also a strange person. I probably counted 11 books that I opened at the same time, and they were all published on the same day. It was like [shocked][shocked][shocked][shocked] I feel like it could be called "Midfield Succubus: Global Forward Falls in Love with Me" [laughs][laughs]
I can give it four stars now. My feeling after watching it is that it is almost the same as watching a hot-blooded sports series. The protagonist is hot-blooded and stupid, and there is also a second male lead who is pretending to be a badass. This combination has always been the standard for sports movies. I hope it can be written down.
I gave it five stars because the author wrote it very much like a passionate sports drama. The emotional and career lines were well handled, and the overall rhythm was very comfortable. This is why I have been reluctant to give up this book. The only thing that is difficult for me to accept (it may be a poisonous point for some readers): the protagonist is going back to the national team to play in the Asian Cup or even the World Cup. My heart is very eager to see China Red appear in the World Cup, so that I can really wear the jersey of my country's home team and cheer for it. But the paradox is that the current situation is so far removed from such a vision, which in itself is deeply saddening. In addition, the author's writing is not completely false, which makes reading it even more uncomfortable. Of course, I respect the author's ideas. Just as a reader, I would like to make some suggestions: Perhaps the plot related to the national team can be downplayed as much as possible, and there is no need to exaggerate the "red and blue showdown" too much. The gap cannot be bridged overnight, and relying on words to construct a victory makes it easier for people to feel the sadness of reality. Finally, I hope the author will have the opportunity to write a sports light novel with a Japanese protagonist in the future. Haha, I really like the author's writing style. Wish: getting better and better
It's not bad to read as a light novel. It just places too much emphasis on vision and doesn't make up for its shortcomings, so it's often seen that the best option is given up because of a bunch of shortcomings. (Maybe write about the national football team?) Besides, the rest is pretty good.
It can be seen that the author used AI, but he still has very detailed control over the outline and general direction. On this basis, using AI to polish the writing is also a good choice. At least I can read it well and write well. However, even if AI is used, the control must be good. You cannot let AI do a lot of work for updates.
First, the male protagonist is not traveling through time, nor is he reborn. He is a native who has obtained the system. Second, the male protagonist is a classic One Sutra type protagonist, and his daily life is similar to Sakuragi Hanamichi. Third, this is a neon world in a novel, and everything looks particularly beautiful. Basically, all the dark side existences unique to neon will not appear. If you can accept these three points, then you can enjoy the hero's passionate football journey. Chapter 23, the opponent was a youth training team, but the opposing midfielder directly transformed into a future-predicting superman and also saw through the protagonist's prediction of the future? ? ? ? The opponent is not a consecutive league champion, right? ? ? So before the protagonist, there was no need to kick the football when it hit the opponent? You can't lose every time, right? And if the opponent has a midfielder who can predict the future, how do they lose other games? ? ? Now a small neon youth training team has this kind of midfielder who can predict the future. Then doesn't every team in the European League have one or a few? ? ? Otherwise, wouldn't it be that he was tortured with blood? ? ? Football can also be played as Kuroko's football. . . . . Also drunk. . . It feels like this is not writing about football, but about a cultivation simulator. . .
The writing is good, it gives me the feeling of watching Japanese comics, but can you please not write about the national football team in the later period? I feel that the national football team is too boring [face covering] How can I put it, first of all, there is really no need to save the national football team. It is recognized to be terrible and no one wants to watch it (it is really poisonous. It made me feel bad when I watched it and ended up feeding me a lump💩). If I insist on writing it, it is not comfortable at all. Secondly, the intervals between each emotional outburst are too short. In the middle, I can write more daily life, except for the protagonist and a few scenes. There are many characters and other supporting characters who have no offline growth process at all. It's too dry. I see that you are also opening more books. It is best to focus on one book and polish it carefully (opening more books always feels like AI). There are many areas worth improving. The theme of this book is quite good. I haven't seen anything similar to it yet. Come on, keep it up.
The writing is very good, and it has a sense of familiarity with Japanese comics. The emotional line is well grasped so far, and the characterization is also very good. Although the aura of the protagonist exists, the charm of other characters is also pretty good, not particularly bad.
The writing is very good and passionate. I feel like I have watched another Japanese manga episode. The emotional line and the football line run at the same time, but they do not interfere with each other. To be precise, the emotional line is the lubricant of the football line. Without the eldest sister, our protagonist cannot persist in playing football. Currently, we only write about the Japanese J1 League. Most of the characters are virtual, but the growth of the characters is very well portrayed, and the transformation of the protagonist is also very good. What struck me as a stroke of genius was changing the bonus points for winning the game to training hard to grow. It is obvious that the protagonist's mentality has changed after the system change. Winning is necessary, but it is not an inducement to be impetuous. The protagonist can endure countless repeated trainings just to deliver that through kick on the field. Speaking of the national team, excluding the Football Association makes it easier for readers to accept the national football team. After all, no matter what, the Dragons will always be our home team. What we hate is just the sad bureaucracy and association.
It's very beautiful, and it's really exciting to watch. One chapter basically has more than 4,000 words, which seems very coherent and enjoyable. What one coach said really touched me. How can a person face the call of the motherland if he refuses? This kind of thing comes from blood. Reminds me of Ai Qing's. Why do I often have tears in my eyes? Because I love this land deeply. People don't like the national football team because it's difficult to write about in many aspects, and they always remember this scar. The National Football Team has already conceded two goals in the U23 finals and should lose. Anyway, come on, it's better than before I think Wang Zijie's writing is quite good. It has the feeling of Qian Xuesen in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China (of course not as great). When the motherland needs it, he will go there without hesitation, no matter what is ahead. In fact, I'm a little confused about the description of the protagonist's life in Japan after joining the national team. Will he directly go to China to develop?
Ai, but it does not affect the perception. Except for some places that make me feel a bit stiff, the whole story is very good in terms of character setting, storyline, and emotions. Moreover, this book can give me a feeling, a feeling that I can't describe.
The author's writing is still okay, but the completeness of some lineups can be better. For example, the commentator explains the formation at the beginning. For example, the home team's lineup today is 4231, and then briefly introduces the lineup, who is the midfield commander, and who is the single arrow that stands out. Or you can pay attention to certain players and combine it with the previous part to ask whether certain things will affect today's game. In this way, I feel that it will be more immersive and the transition should be smoother than the original text where the referee blows the whistle for kick-off.
The author writes very well, both in terms of technical descriptions and emotional scenes in daily training. It embodies the word "passion" very well, but there are too many repetitive scenes and repeated descriptions. For example, Zhou Tian and Maki wrote twice with their hearts like war drums. Overall, it is really good. Even football novices who don't understand technical words or people who just know football can understand and feel the passion. I rarely write so many words because I think this book is really hidden. It is very powerful. I keep writing it and optimizing it. I think it must be a very good novel. When writing about the national team, you must carefully consider it, but don't be led by the readers. It is impossible for everyone to like it. After all, every author has a perfect story in his heart. Please read more. It is really great and beautiful. I finished it without realizing it. It has great potential. Believe me, there will be no problem. This book is really great! You will definitely not go wrong writing this book!
Perfect top football article (at least the good ones I have read) There is a passion for chasing dreams and a beautiful two-way rush. In the routine football writings that shock the world by upgrading to invincibility, they are all unique and refreshing. Especially the portrayal of love in them is fresh and not obscene, but also innocent and rational. It is a handful of chopped green onion in a pot of broth. It perfectly reconciles the greasiness and mediocrity of popular upgrading football writings. The characters are vivid and not stereotyped, the writing is detailed and clear without being bloated and draggy. The plot is not invincible (which is very good). The development is a little fast (to cater to the taste of Tomato readers), but the rhythm is well grasped, making people want to keep reading. The only drawback may be that there are too few updates. Lao Deng, hurry up and give me more updates, otherwise I will really save books!
Yes, it has a bit of a blue lock feel, but the protagonist is very different. I have really struggled with this setting of a madman for the rest of my life. I have read many of the author's books and I am constantly updating them. Although I admire it and find it very hard, I still hope to get more updates! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts]
Well, the emotional line is well written, and the system is also very reasonable. The character of the protagonist is the type of passionate anime. Overall, it is very good. The national football team is still a bit unacceptable. For many people, the national football team should be considered a poisonous point. I hope the next book will be less national football. At present, I think many people still cannot accept the protagonist joining the national team. I hope the author will reply to my comment after seeing this comment.
I generally don't like sports novels with romance elements, because many such novels deviate from the center of the sports direction in the middle and late stages and become love affairs or even harem faction fights. But this novel gave me a really good feeling, whether it was the passion on the court, the sweat off the court, the competition, cooperation and assistance among the players and coaches, the care of the neighbors, or the warmth of the male and female protagonists and their families. They all have a good grasp of the tone, the emotional tone is relaxed and moderate, there are tears and passion. It won't make people think that this is the routine again. Apart from this, the depth of the concept is good, there is criticism of the national football system, but there are also expectations of one's own between the country and the dream. I hope the author gets better and better, and I will always support him. Come on
I like it very much. The protagonist is passionate and does not have the feeling of mindless winning or mindless pleasure. If you lose, you lose. The protagonist can occasionally explode, but he will not win inexplicably, and there will not be the kind of special training that will be very useful in the next game. It is the protagonist who was hit a bit miserably in the early stage. There is also a love line, but 16 is a bit early, a bit too early to kill a dog [facepalm], I feel like the relationship can be finalized a little later. Although the growth is slow and there are a bit too many metaphors, I think I can still give it 5 stars. Mainly because it looks better than others. Please help me give a rating [laughs] Author, I would like to call you the author who loves to use metaphors. Metaphors are quite vivid. Come on, author
It's very good. The emotions are very coherent and not blunt. I just have a question. In the first half, it's very uncomfortable for people who watch it because they focus on vision without adding body and dribbling. You know that this place is very weak, but you don't reinforce it. It makes people feel uncomfortable [laughs]. Overall, it's very good. Worth recommending
The title of the book affects the data too much. I didn't want to read it at first, but I read it after reading the reviews. It is indeed a good book, and I feel like I am watching a sports series. The male protagonist is a passionate idiot, and idiot refers to the emotional aspect. The emotional line with the heroine is also written quite well. Worth a look It's actually pretty good, but I don't like watching national football.
It's a very light novel, and I feel pretty good about it, but I can't get it even if I try to add more vision. I feel that adding more body or shooting can make the game better. Then I wanted to join the national football team and I didn't hold back. It feels too high. Please change it.