Re: Reincarnation Without a Job

I have finished reading it now, and I have to say that it is really exciting and beautiful. It actually gave me the same immersive feeling as watching the original work. Whenever I felt that a part was a bit unsatisfactory, the author's lightning perspective change made me convinced. I would like to call it Tomato's Strongest Jobless Reincarnation Fan. In fact, it is still a bit poisonous. Rudy's magic power cannot be just that much. If there is insufficient magic power, it is impossible for him to be knocked unconscious by a few wolves.

I spent an entire night and morning reading it and wanted to write a review. About the main line: In the early stage, Rudy didn't want to create a butterfly effect, so it was very different from the original work. However, the psychology reflected in many of the same events was slightly different from the original work. Paul's chapters reflected this very well; after going to Luo Adam's tutoring, major changes were made. Occasionally Rudy's slightly abrupt behavior The action will also reveal foreshadowing in the follow-up, and the behavioral logic of other characters will still be in line with the characters' own personalities and social status despite plot changes, such as Kirennu and Philip; the big transfer chapter is almost completely new, and random events occurred due to Rudy's motivation to protect his family. And from the distribution of the transfer, we can feel the mercy of God (the author), paving the way for a new ending for Aisha and Nolen. The journey after that was very exciting, not the fighting but the psychology and behavioral logic. It was almost a climax after meeting Paul. The follow-up continues to advance, and after meeting the Dragon God, all the previous foreshadowings are revealed in one breath, which is another super climax. In short, for impatient readers, after the main plot has passed the "boring" village period and the confused Roja period, you can play the big transfer period beautifully, so please don't give low scores just because of the early stage. About the chapter: The novel frequently uses chapters to change perspectives or describe daily life, buffering the rapid advancement of the main line or seasoning the dull period. Everyone will not appear to be the same person in the first chapter, and the words, sentences and observation angles are appropriate. Whether it's the main plot or the inter-chapter, I have the anime's CV saying this in my mind when I read it, especially the main plot, it's like the CV from Rudy's heart is telling me a story. About the logic: Ah, I actually want to go into details, but I can't give any spoilers in my comments. Anyway, it's very reasonable and perfectly explains why Rudy is reborn with memories. Even though I was a little confused in some places in the early stage, it was completely enlightened after encountering "". Finally, the word count and quality of each chapter are really excellent. As an author who is preparing for the high school entrance examination, he is really diligent! Diligence! So diligent! ! ! Why! Why! Why! Why why! Such a hard-working author! Someone actually saw your novel before me! ! ! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——Ahhhhh, my brain is shaking! ! ! ! ! ! !

The greatest jobless fanfic ever. Both the writing style and the narrative style are very similar to the original novel. The recycling of foreshadowing is also very reasonable, and the details are handled very well. After reading it, there is only one comment - Li Buman (the original author) lost consciousness at home. There is only one shortcoming - not enough to look at, boss😭😭😭

This book is very well written, and it is the best among the fan works related to jobless reincarnation that I have seen. On the one hand, the writing style and writing mode are very similar to the original work. Among the fan works that still have Rudy as the protagonist, this is a very outstanding choice and authentic. On the other hand, even in it, the control of the character's personality is not out of control. As a fan work, it is not overly OOC and the degree of creation is grasped. Therefore, the motivation for the character's transformation and growth is logical. Furthermore, the additional growth brought about by rebirth is still within the setting framework of the original work. This is actually correct. As long as the existing power system does not collapse and no additional elements are introduced, it is a good choice to dig deeper. In other words, this is a good choice for fan works. Author, your writing is really great. It is very important to know what you can do and what you cannot do. So far, you have done a very good job. After exaggerating the advantages of this work, let me talk about the shortcomings, which are highly related to its advantages. The two sides are that in some plot settings, it is right not to break the setting framework, but there is reuse of the original plot framework. Many plots can even be said to still follow the plot line of the original work. This method is actually a bit lazy. Of course, it is also possible that the author wants to reflect an important setting destiny mentioned in the original work, but in my opinion, this is a minus point. The plot is gradually moving forward, and I hope you can keep up the good work. Then there is a selfish request or suggestion that I have made. It is also because your writing is very original and clear, so I came up with an idea. It would be great if you could let Ai Xia become Rudy's wife this time. Aisha had such a regret in the original work. In the original timeline of Rudy's survival, Aisha's education was distorted. Aisha's excellent talent also made her mature prematurely, but Rudy did show extraordinary excellence and a twisted species. The child sprouted over time, and the inability to love eventually led to the incest between Aisha and Ars. To be honest, their incest was completely born out of pure love. This model of finding a meal replacement, I think is cruel to Aisha, and it is also cruel to Ars. But in your work, Aisha has the right and opportunity to choose, but your presentation makes me feel that Aisha still has strange feelings for Rudy. So, I hope that as a fan work, can you fill this regret? If you can, that would be great. Overall, this work is an excellent work and worth your time to read. The author of this work is also a talented, hard-working, and well-controlled author. The writing is really beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you will continue to create. Thank you for creating such a good, jobless reincarnation fan novel. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] There will be assumptions about Aisha's future. On the one hand, it is also the entire world view, which belongs to medieval moral ethics. It is not necessary to use the ethical framework of modern society to discuss some things. Moreover, Rudy has three wives and is a scumbag himself [laughs] It doesn't matter how scumbag he is. On the other hand, it is also in the world view setting. I remember I have seen such a statement. In the world of jobless reincarnation, the birth of a new life is also the combination of the magic power of both parents, so there is no such problem as genetic disease. Not to mention that this time Ludi's rebirth plug-in can have something similar to the blood of a dragon. In a large number of fantasy settings, the combination of dragons and other life forms will not cause distortion, and the offspring born will only be stronger. So it would be great if Ai Xia could really become a CP.

I feel like there should be a score of 8.5 Or higher. Old Ludy is reborn. When I first watched the anime, there were many comments saying that I wanted to watch it. The author's entry point is very appropriate. Although after old Ludy was reborn, in order to avoid the butterfly effect, the early stage (before the big transfer, or before becoming Alice's teacher) basically followed the original plot. However, many details are okay. For example, Ludy did not cry when he was born because he was actually an adult soul, and he cried when he saw Paul and Senis after being reborn. The overall story is pretty accurate, with many foreshadowings and retrievals. I also read some other book reviews. After all, the protagonist is the rebirth of old Ludy, not us who have read the novel. We don't understand a lot of information, so we did some things that could have been done better. Some people may have a slightly different impression because of this, but in my mind it can definitely score 9 points.

On the Simplified Chinese Internet, you will never find a better-looking article about the rebirth of Old Rudy than this! The writing is smooth and the rhythm is controlled. It is very similar to the original work, and the author's understanding of the original work is also deep-rooted (Fog). There are also many Japanese comics and Nikkei memes (although I have never seen them) With the author's plot control and characterization skills, it would be a high-quality masterpiece next door. If he further improves his environment shaping and literary skills, even if he just writes a simple original Japanese novel, he can easily subscribe for 30,000 to 40,000 yuan. And the author, I beg you, update it quickly! ! ! As long as you are willing to update, I will do anything! ! !

This is a perfect fanfic. The characters are not broken, the plot is innovative and logical, and the foreshadowing is very good. Even the writing style is very similar to the original work. Some details in the article can also be seen that the author has indeed read the original work, including side stories such as Gu Long Xihua. Although there are some errors in details and bugs in the plot (for example, Keith is in He was killed by the Dragon God in the corner of the tavern, and the Dragon God also made sure that there was no one around, but how could there be no one in the tavern), but these are completely negligible and cannot affect the excellence of this book. I think anyone who likes the original novel of Jobless Reincarnation will not dislike this book. As long as the author maintains this level and finishes it steadily, then it is a sure thing that he will become the top fanfic of Jobless Reincarnation. In addition, I am a little curious. Obviously, there are almost no books rated below 5 points in the book review section. Why is this book rated so low, only 6.9? It shouldn't be. It should be at least 9 points.

"I must express my respect to excellent chefs" - this is my feeling when I stayed up until two o'clock to read the latest chapter. I don't dare to boast about how many fanfics I have read, but this book is undoubtedly the most imaginative and the most consistent of the original novels that I have seen on Tomato. Whether it is the character arc, plot turning point, setting of suspense points or the final moment when the mystery is revealed, it all gave me a strong surprise. I wish the author can stabilize his thinking and writing standards, and finally express my respect to you again

As for the writing style of the Jobless Reincarnation fanfic, this is the closest to the original work I have ever seen. The article also intersperses many sentences and plots from the original work. Sometimes it is very harmonious but sometimes it is a bit inconsistent. In short, the author will continue to work hard and look forward to the transfer event chapter.

It's beautiful and well-written. The reading experience is really enjoyable. It's generous and full of content but also not lacking in logic at all. There are almost no poisonous points or bugs. However, I am still looking forward to what will happen when I meet Boss Long.

I highly recommend this fanfic about jobless reincarnation. The writing style is similar to the original work, there is no OOC, no poisonous points, and the quality is very high. It is really amazing. The score of this book is definitely more than 7.9. Like the author of the re.0 Shaula if fanfic next door, you can feel the author's love for the original work. I would like to suggest that the author should try to limit the length of a chapter to 2000-4000 words and make full attendance every day. This will lead to better grades. An author next door who wrote about the Kaiser said, don't let such high-quality fan fiction go unnoticed [crying]

It's really good-looking, and it's a perfect fanfic. The author has a really deep understanding of joblessness, and it's obvious that he's put a lot of thought into it. Everything including the foreshadowing is also very exciting. I used to think that a lot of the content in it was the same as the original text, but it looked a bit weird, but the foreshadowing in the following chapters was really fun to read.

The fanfic that best fits the setting of the original work. It can be seen from the description of some small details that the author has put a lot of effort into keeping it close to the unreasonable writing method, such as the change of perspective, Rudy's psychological description, and the character's behavior. It is simply amazing. Similar stories with different cores. After Rudy once again experienced the Demon Continent, he had completely different feelings from his previous life. The middle story is no longer a simple copy of the original work, but is combined with the original settings and the author's own understanding of the world view and the characters to create a more wonderful chemical reaction. The author's writing style is closer to Chinese tastes than the original version. Each foreshadowing is gradually revealed. Rudy's rebirth is no longer a simple background setting forced to write this story. I don't know how to create gods, but this book is definitely at the goat level among the fan novels I have read. The interactions between the characters are completely non-ooc, but the handling of some small details is more in line with the personalities of the characters in this book after experiencing different stories. I can only say that it is a super big book! As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following up! Moreover, the most important point is that the change of perspective in this book really makes it feel like reading the original work. I wonder if it would be like this if I couldn't write an article with this kind of setting (but if I think about it carefully, it is impossible, because as a new era Japanese writer, I have been affected by the Japanese social background to a certain extent, which makes the author different from Li Bujin. The "qi" of writing is different between writers. This "qi" refers to the different experiences and lives between writers, which results in their "characters" being completely different. For example, with a similar theme, the form, content, and setting of the final article presented by each writer will definitely be very different, which will reflect part of the author's thinking and thoughts to a certain extent.) In short, my dear author, please continue to read more! | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

Really, this book can be said to be the best freelance fanfic I have read so far. Not only is the structure compact and logical, but every foreshadowing is traceable. Although the author updates every two days, each chapter is large and full, and the description from multiple perspectives can highlight the charm of each character. Although it is the reincarnation of old Rudy, but It is not said to be a smooth script, but it brings the old Rudy to life. The murderous old Rudy and the new Rudy who have just been reincarnated. The inner contradictions and conflicts are vividly described. The adventures along the way are also very exciting. Even if you have read the original text, it will not affect the shock and excitement of this book at all. I highly recommend it! ! !

Absolute praise. This book does not seem to have the abruptness of other fanfics. The protagonist is Old Rudy. It is normal to kill decisively. Even if it writes "pseudo-human", it is acceptable. But other authors just don't take this path. I can't understand it. There is a good template in the beginning, which can not only meet the core and audience base of Wuji, but also allow for free writing, but they are not willing to take this path. It is quite abstract... The author's book is very in line with the core of jobless and the audience base. The character treatment is also very good, the writing is absolutely passable, and the description of the character's mentality is also in place. The only shortcoming of this book is Laplace, the God of Skills, because I have the impression that Laplace is a handsome man with green hair (I forgot where I saw the setting, but I have this paragraph in my mind), so when the author wrote the Laplace section, I felt a little inconsistent. Maybe it was preconceived, and the rest of the plot was all good.

The writing style is most jobless, and the writing also makes people look very jobless. The author, you must continue to update your mouth. (The only shortcoming of this book is that there are too few paragraphs and comments, but it is also the advantage of this book, because I think only if you are immersed in reading the novel, you will not post paragraphs and comments)

After reading the original work, I really feel that the style is very similar to the original work. The plot is well-arranged and has been carefully polished. Especially the description of the transfer magic continent is like the description of Noren's inner and delicate emotions. The last two words summarize it well^ω^ The author must continue writing. I beg the author to reply.

4.1-4.3 Stars It is too consistent with the main story. Compared with the original text, there are only minor adjustments, but the changes are still not big. And although the protagonist has been strengthened (compared to the original text), the current positioning is still unclear. According to the description after being rebuilt for so long, he has the strength of a powerful goalkeeper (?), But due to system problems, it is still a bit dangerous to fight in close combat (the life and death game does not count, but it is still not calm enough, and this is still a much weaker mob), which makes people look unhappy. Moreover, the protagonist is not smart enough before the big transfer begins, so why not use magic to speed it up? I ran with all my strength, but in the end I only got one more sister, which made me feel a little powerless. In my opinion, I always feel that the protagonist can have better choices and operations. One star for tomatoes. Probably 4.4-4.6 In the first person, after all, there are relatively few Oh, by the way, it's in first person, and the author's writing style is very close to the original text, which looks good.

This is a fan work with a very reasonable logic. The foreshadowing in the front is perfectly recycled in the back. It does not force a line on the basis of the original work, but truly interprets the butterfly effect, which makes people feel a sudden realization after seeing it [Bird Food God Works] [Bird Food God Works] [Like] Speaking of which, did the author really just finish the high school entrance examination instead of the college entrance examination? I feel that the writing is very powerful, and it is very incredible to put it from the perspective of my quasi-high school senior. Thinking about it, I probably finished reading the novel about jobless reincarnation during the summer vacation of my third year of junior high school. Although I felt that the intention was still unfinished, I also thought about some wild plot directions, but the difference between just thinking and writing is very big. It is even more valuable for the author to put it into action and write well. I admire [Sparrow Food Divine Work] [Sparrow Food Divine Work] [Sparrow Food Divine Work] [Like] [Like] Come on [Bookshelf Plus One] [Like] [Like]

Without a doubt, this is the best non-job fan work I can find among Tomato fans. Both the narrative structure and the plot arrangement are extremely reasonable. I added my own changes to the original plot, making up for the regrets of the original work without changing the overall main line. It is rare among fan fiction to use character point-of-view chapters. It uses the style of the original work. It can be seen that it is carefully adapted to the writing style of Roshi Fuzu no Sono. Whether it is the anime memes used by Rudy, it is very restored. The character setting is also very normal and there is no OOC tendency. If I had to find fault, it would be the lack of extra chapters (laughs) All in all, I think this is an excellent work that any non-professional fan will be impressed by after seeing it.

The detailed description of the family after the return of the old Rudy Dragon King is very good. The interludes in the main plot are richer in characterization, giving me a feeling of reading the original novel, including the reason for the subsequent reincarnation. I think the logic is self-consistent. It is the best I have ever seen in the fanfic. The childhood chapter is still mainly about Alice giving beauty to the red mother. There should be more scenes of the white mother and the blue mother in the academy chapter.

Paul's extra story is very well written. I love reading it and want to read more. After reading the review, I found that the writing is really good. The author's own thoughts and changes are added to the original work without being obtrusive. The extra chapters are also very well written.

Great, no need to say more It almost perfectly restores the feeling of reading the original work, with excellent writing combined with love for the work; successfully recycled foreshadowing and explosive chapters... He deserves to be the best unemployed fan of the year

It's very interesting. It's able to foreshadow more than half of the authors. It can recycle foreshadowing and the details are very reasonable. It's better than most of the authors. It's very strong among non-professional fans without OOC. It's worth watching.

Very well written. Although the first and second volumes are a bit repetitive from the original text, you can understand why when you see the Dragon God's point of view at the end and find a lot of foreshadowing in the front. The author is really awesome. So please post more chapters. As long as I can see the author's updates every day, I will feel happy from the bottom of my heart. This is the first time... The first time I feel so happy. Please, don't stop writing!

I always like it, it has the flavor of the original work. I have been a die-hard fan since I was in junior high school. I also hope that there will be more and more excellent works like this. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It was really enjoyable for me to read. There are many plots in it that are worth reading over and over again. It is really delicious. This is how I got addicted to reading. Please keep updating, I can do whatever I want [crying]

It has great potential, and it's still a dream come true so far. There is only one father alive in Alice's family. I feel that Alice's scenes in the Demon Continent episode are too few and not enough. The rhythm is quite normal, with some insignificant parts of the original film omitted and an original plot added to speed up the pace. The chapter where Boss Long confesses should be the most eloquent episode. Although there are many coincidences and accidents, it is enough to support this fanfic. I'm looking forward to the future plots and hope to write more about Alice, because I love Alice so much [shy]

The writing is fluent, you have your own ideas, and the writing style... Teacher, please submit your article to become a novelist.

It's an excellent book that looks great. As a fanfic, the portrayal of each character is almost the same as the original. The only shortcoming is that the rating is too low? ! Typical low-scoring quality work from Tomatoes.

The writing style is also very comfortable. Although it is rough in the early stage, it is still very interesting in summary. However, the update frequency is too slow. In this case, there will be very few people who will follow it (I almost want to give up).