Re: Mushoku Tensei

I spent an entire night and morning reading it and wanted to write a review. About the main line: In the early stage, Rudy didn't want to create a butterfly effect, so it was very different from the original work. However, the psychology reflected in many of the same events was slightly different from the original work. Paul's chapters reflected this very well; after going to Luo Adam's tutoring, major changes were made. Occasionally Rudy's slightly abrupt behavior The action will also reveal foreshadowing in the follow-up, and the behavioral logic of other characters will still be in line with the characters' own personalities and social status despite plot changes, such as Kirennu and Philip; the big transfer chapter is almost completely new, and random events occurred due to Rudy's motivation to protect his family. And from the distribution of the transfer, we can feel the mercy of God (the author), paving the way for a new ending for Aisha and Nolen. The journey after that was very exciting, not the fighting but the psychology and behavioral logic. It was almost a climax after meeting Paul. The follow-up continues to advance, and after meeting the Dragon God, all the previous foreshadowings are revealed in one breath, which is another super climax. In short, for impatient readers, after the main plot has passed the "boring" village period and the confused Roja period, you can play the big transfer period beautifully, so please don't give low scores just because of the early stage. About the chapter: The novel frequently uses chapters to change perspectives or describe daily life, buffering the rapid advancement of the main line or seasoning the dull period. Everyone will not appear to be the same person in the first chapter, and the words, sentences and observation angles are appropriate. Whether it's the main plot or the inter-chapter, I have the anime's CV saying this in my mind when I read it, especially the main plot, it's like the CV from Rudy's heart is telling me a story. About the logic: Ah, I actually want to go into details, but I can't give any spoilers in my comments. Anyway, it's very reasonable and perfectly explains why Rudy is reborn with memories. Even though I was a little confused in some places in the early stage, it was completely enlightened after encountering "". Finally, the word count and quality of each chapter are really excellent. As an author who is preparing for the high school entrance examination, he is really diligent! Diligence! So diligent!!! Why! Why! Why! Why why! Such a hard-working author! Someone actually saw your novel before me!!! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——Ahhhhh, my brain is shaking!!!!!!!

Absolute perfection, the original work born from it, teaches you that the second creation is... It is a flawless, all-Tomato, strongest, no-job-reincarnation fanfic. The only adaptation point is that it is written in the first person, imitating the original work, which requires exposure to Japanese light novels. Of course, this is also the best place [I also strongly recommend] After two days of chasing, my enthusiasm has cooled down 😢

I have finished reading it now, and I have to say that it is really exciting and beautiful. It actually gave me the same immersive feeling as watching the original work. Whenever I felt that a part was a bit unsatisfactory, the author's lightning perspective change made me convinced. I would like to call it Tomato's Strongest Jobless Reincarnation Fan. In fact, it is still a bit poisonous. Rudy's magic power cannot be just that much. If there is insufficient magic power, it is impossible for him to be knocked unconscious by a few wolves.

There are no more humans. Has the author really read the original text? Old Rudy was originally escorted by Ruijerud along with Alice, and he was reborn again wondering why Ruijerud wanted to escort them.

The greatest jobless fanfic ever. Both the writing style and the narrative style are very similar to the original novel. The recycling of foreshadowing is also very reasonable, and the details are handled very well. After reading it, there is only one comment - Li Buman (the original author) lost consciousness at home. There is only one shortcoming - not enough to look at, boss😭😭😭

Tomato, the god of ratings, really deceived me. I saw this novel a long time ago. It was on my recommendation page at the time, but the rating was only over 7 points. I thought about reading it later when the rating increased to 8 points. As a result, after reading it in the past two days, I found it really beautiful. It fits the psychological description and the sense of a different world in the original work. It really feels like the original work. The psychological description and so on are very good, and the number of words is also very good. Just read one chapter with more than 10,000 words. Shui Wen? It doesn't exist. It's much better than those novels that appear to be highly rated but are actually large in size and published two or three times a day. Moreover, the author is still a freshman who has just finished the high school entrance examination and is now starting his first year of high school? Oh my gosh, I'm a lot more awesome than I was back then. I can only say that I hope the author can update at least once a day without affecting his studies. Oh no!

Volume 1 Chapter 1-10: ★★★★★ Around the second volume, the status declined seriously. Wenfeng preferred AI, and the original text without modification was posted in large numbers. It looked awkward for Old Lu to think like Young Lu, and there were also past life memories mixed in, indicating that it was not memory loss. -2★, The initial chapter of the second chapter was: ★★★ There are very few fans who can write well about joblessness, although the main reason is that there is not much discussion in China. I clicked in to read the book after reading all the five-star reviews. I'm reading chapter 20, and I hope you won't be disappointed.

Really, this book can be said to be the best freelance fanfic I have read so far. Not only is the structure compact and logical, but every foreshadowing is traceable. Although the author updates every two days, each chapter is large and full, and the description from multiple perspectives can highlight the charm of each character. Although it is the reincarnation of old Rudy, but It is not said to be a smooth script, but it brings the old Rudy to life. The murderous old Rudy and the new Rudy who have just been reincarnated. The inner contradictions and conflicts are vividly described. The adventures along the way are also very exciting. Even if you have read the original text, it will not affect the shock and excitement of this book at all. I highly recommend it!!!

There is no problem with the setting, but the left brain fights against the right brain. In the early stage of the Aiken setting, it was said that the magic power was sufficient, but later it changed a lot, and then it said that the magic power was not enough. Obviously, it could have been a few more layers of earth walls. After a good rest for two days, I had to keep rushing. I don't know what I was anxious about╮(╯_╰)╭

It's really good. The writing style, language, reasonable settings, and a lot of originality. The best thing is that the rebirth of Old Rudy is a reasonable adaptation based on the settings of the original work. There is no deus ex machina. After reincarnation, Old Rudy's appearance and combat are also quite well designed, which is very good. One star is missing because I have seen Rudy become an adventurer on the way to find Sylphy. Personally, I feel that this episode of Rudy falling into depression is a bit forced to match the original work. Old Rudy has lived for decades and has been killing people, and he has also accepted the pain of some Dragon Gods. It feels like falling into a trough like this is too deliberate to cater to Sylphy's appearance, so I will deduct one point temporarily. Of course, I hope the author can come up with a convincing explanation later.