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The heroine is well portrayed. There is no plot in other literature where the tsundere female brat only puts pressure on her own people. On the contrary, she is just a bit arrogant towards her own people and is a bitch to outsiders. It is good that there are no messy important male supporting characters to mix into the lives of the male and female protagonists. , So far, there is only one dungeon boss who was tortured to the point of losing his mind and has developed feelings for the female protagonist. In other similar plots, the female character is chasing the male protagonist, but the male protagonist only loves the female protagonist and has no ambiguity with other female characters. Don't worry about that.

I feel that the author does not need to write so many supporting characters to deliberately mock and slap the plot in the face. Now many people are tired of watching this type of plot. I think the occasional daily routine and leveling up to fight monsters can satisfy the requirements of fun. Too many slaps in the face will dissuade many people who like this kind of theme. Of course, if you have a plot outline, you can also create it according to your own arrangement. In terms of plot, try to spend more time to see if it is in line with human common sense and polish more details. I believe you can go to the next level [understood] (personal opinion)

I haven't read much, but I can already see the ingredients. The first poisonous point: Pressing the War, the title of the book is Crossing the Tribulation Realm, but it is actually pressed into refining Qi, the body is just a golden elixir, and I don't bring anything like a storage ring. If I want to see myself invincible all the way, I just go straight. The second poisonous point: It's too classic. The pretense and slap-in-the-face plot hasn't changed. There's still an NPC villain taunting you, plus a pressure fight. It's the same as watching the early Dragon King novels. Addendum: This book has a bit of an otome theme, like a female fan disguised as a male fan (it may be a female fan). If it is really a female fan, it is because I read it from the perspective of a male fan, so I won't give it too few stars, just four.

It's beautiful and beautiful, it hits my xp perfectly [smile], the heroine is well portrayed, she is arrogant, more arrogant than arrogant. The male protagonist does not overwhelm his fighting prowess, and has an invincible and refreshing story plus a love story. Good looking good looking I hope it doesn't end badly. The last book ended badly. I was so heartbroken.

By Chapter 20, the heroine's parents don't know the hero's strength. Even if the heroine posts on Moments, they think it's p. It's an upgrade that is obviously disguised as an online game. It turns out that because the upgrade is too fast and she has to adapt, there is currently no improvement in the heroine's upgrade to level 10 (except for spiritual power, and the heroine has not used it yet). The hero has never told the heroine his identity, and the cards drawn out are all the hero's storage rings (contracted) After that, the male protagonist's realm is gone. He can't defeat level 50 monsters physically, and the items in the storage ring are gone. Moreover, the current upgrade speed is both fast and slow. The fast one is because he upgraded to level 10 in two days (a level 15 dungeon, when the protagonist was level 1, a level 30 beast tide, a level 30 dungeon, and finally upgraded to level 10). The slow one is because the female protagonist still has to adapt, and the better she is, she may not be able to upgrade if she fights dozens of monsters at dozens of levels.

The interaction between the Immortal Lord and the female imp is quite interesting, the rhythm is good, and it is very comfortable to watch. Worthy of praise. Xianzun's little control is indeed serious. If nothing else, it is really difficult to stretch a bunch of bellybands, Le. The opening is a classic Awakening opening, but the setting is novel, so it doesn't feel boring.

Advantages Top-notch character: The female protagonist is a typical 'arrogant female brat', full of tsundere attributes, bad and cute; the male protagonist has online looks and an invincible personality. The atmosphere is good: the plot is very sweet, the speed of the car (Xiao Se Se) is well controlled, it is not pure white or pure black, and the taste is excellent. Insufficient In the early stage, the male protagonist's combat power was set too high, which led to the plot advancing too fast and being a bit exaggerated. Fortunately, around chapter 70, the combat power system began to be repaired, and the plot returned to normal. Summary The character design is very good, it's a lot more fun, it's not a bus to kindergarten, and the pace is a bit faster

The characters are well portrayed. The heroine is a genuine tsundere loli [laughing evilly], and the protagonist is a person whose strength has been sealed by the law of heaven but has explosive combat power. At level 10, he can fight a level 50 boss. [Thinking] At present, I personally feel that the level 10 breakthrough mission is very good-looking and very visual. On the contrary, after finishing the breakthrough mission, it is just a dull and refreshing article [face covering]. Overall recommended for lolicon fans to watch

It's very interesting, really very interesting. The author's writing is very good. The characters are perfect. Xiao Xiao's appearance as a little bitch is very impressive. The male protagonist has memories of three lives, and he is really doted on. The fighting force is not serious. Although it is not the kind of invincible novel, it is still quite good. The world view is well created, (more The world blends together, and the combat power system has been changed twice but it is still very clear.) I read the author's book in one day. It is very interesting. I sincerely recommend those Lolita friends and those who like to have a childlike face to come and watch [smirk] [snicker] [smile] (4500 veteran certified, pretty good [laugh] [laugh] [laugh])

Level 100? Could it be…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Brothers, open your martial soul Ma Hongjun, level 93 power-attack Phoenix Douluo [Anger] Zhu Zhuqing, level 93 Netherworld Douluo of the agility attack system [anger] Dai Mubai, level 95 attack type White Tiger Douluo [Anger] Ning Rongrong, level 94 auxiliary system Nine Colors Douluo [Anger] Oscar, Level 92 Food God of Cookery Douluo [Angry] Xiao Wu, level 96 strong attack type Soft Bone Douluo [wrath] Tang San, level 100 Poseidon [wrath][wrath][wrath][wrath][wrath]

It's still good. I give five stars for supporting it. Although the plot is generally not expected to last until the later stages. I feel that it will be over after the seal is lifted. If there is a world view added to each stage, it will be like a matryoshka doll. The power system in the front is relatively confusing. I support watching it without thinking. It is still a good sweet story if you just don't think about it. Some comments said it is embarrassing. I think it is because of people. In fact, I didn't feel anything poisonous after reading it. The overall evaluation of this book is around 8.0 To 8.5. It is possible that the plot could be slightly revised.

It looks good, I love it, I love the little girl purely, I am destined to be married for the third life. It would be great if I could write about the sun never sets and female levitating [sending my heart] (college students love to read it) What? The score is only 6.6. A person must be conscientious and conscientious! My conscience has been eaten by dogs [crying]

This book is indeed suitable for girls to read. It is only suitable for girls to watch. Because according to the setting in this book, it is too easy for the male protagonist to level up. And the author did not think of these problems. For example, clearing a secret realm. Although it is 10 times more difficult for the heroine to upgrade than others, it does not say how long it will take to upgrade. Take the secret realm as an example. If the article is written by the male protagonist, how many times a day should the secret realm be refreshed, or the secret realm should be refreshed every day. And the male protagonist's fighting power is so terrifying. The single-level leapfrog span is huge, the concept of the final article. It's the relationship between the male and female protagonists that heats up. And love. It's push. The biggest key factor for strength improvement. Not because of strength and time. Come on, cultivate slowly. Emotions, the summary is that boys see a level 20 breakthrough. It should be a bit unbearable. Break through to level 30. Even more strange. According to my personal judgment, especially in terms of the emotional line of level breakthrough, level 10 breakthrough is exactly the relationship between both parties. Level 20 breakthrough. It breaks the upper limit of physical contact. Level 30 means you are in me, you are in me, and your feelings are sublimated. You should be pregnant at level 40. Level 50 refers to various emergencies during pregnancy. A level 60 child is born. Level 70 guides new parents to their daily lives with their children. Level 80 is the growth process of a child. At level 90, this kid has grown up. Hit the peak at level 100. Family happiness. Live a happy life, full of children and grandchildren. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon], the reason for the five stars. I actually suffered such hardship. To raise the rating. Bring in the male readers in the back. How many floors can a bag of rice carry? A bag of rice has to be carried across two floors. I gave you one bag of rice too much. I washed a bag of rice. (／_＼)Big resentment(／_＼)Big resentment(／_＼)Big resentment

Okay👌🏻People with some common sense will remember that there are two types of confusion in the eyes, and they come from two causes, either because of walking out of the light, or because of walking into the light. This is true whether it is the eyes of the human body or the eyes of the soul. People who remember this, when they see the confused and weak eyes of others, they will not laugh at them at will, but will first ask whether the person's soul has just stepped out of a brighter life and cannot see the surroundings clearly because he is not adapted to the darkness; or whether he has just stepped into the light from darkness and is dazzled by too much light. He will regard the situation and mood of one as happy and feel pity for the other. Or, he may want to laugh at the souls who walk from the netherworld into the light, but this is always more reasonable than laughing at those who return from the light world to the dark cave. ——Plato's "The Republic"

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The tsundere female protagonist + the very doting male protagonist, the Immortal Lord of Love, the quality is very good, the writing is smooth, and there are no typos, but some people may not be able to accept it at the beginning [laughing]

It's so good-looking, it's my favorite single heroine, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is the best, and the plot is also very good-looking, so good-looking, okay [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart], the only shortcoming is that there are too few [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

Why does such a beautiful book have such a low score? I take back what I said before. I can only say that I recommend reading the first dozen chapters. After that... Blue screen

Trouble! The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very in line with my interests [OK] It would be better if there were some daily play scenes, teasing the female protagonist from time to time, eating ice cream or something... [Smirk] All in all, there's nothing wrong with it, and I highly recommend watching it.

The author is a newbie, and he made some newbie mistakes in the previous parts, and the data was a little overweighted in terms of combat power (but the plot was not compromised). The author later became aware of his own problems, and these problems did not appear later. And... The sweet loli Segao! ! ! Very sweet, very sweet, very cute, super cute interaction

Come on, big brother who writes about barren trees

I just like this kind of sweet, with a little bit of knife in the plot, anyway, it is good-looking, this knife is not that knife, it is just the need of the plot, it is good-looking, but there is also the multiverse thing, it is okay, qb is like, the world view does not need to be huge, it is almost enough, like a fast travel kind of world, there are more than ten or twenty chapters, it will be boring if it is too much, after all, sometimes I prefer sweet daily life, hahahaha, come on author.

Female brats who like to ridicule people can only say so in reality. But in the novel, it is recommended to use more [shyness]

It's a very good novel, but it's too little and too slow to be enjoyable. Can you please hurry up? I'm going to investigate you.

Come on, it's quite good-looking, but it needs to be foreshadowed and set up. A good book must be complex. It's very monotonous now, but it's still very good.

53. I don't see any poisonous points yet, and the emotional line is not bad (anyway, I saw it was Aunt Xiao [sneaky smile]). Even the Spiritual Contractor feels quite weak, but just seeing the source of the world being plundered should make Xiaoxiao stronger. It's worth looking forward to, author.

The lady who writes about the emperor's uncle, please don't let anything happen to you. I'm waiting for your updates every day. The plot is very exciting, but I like eating meat very much, so please revive me immediately. I can watch ads. Please.

First of all, I downloaded it and didn't read it for long, and then it was pretty good.

Not bad, not bad. The only drawback is that the old routine is too simple, but it's not bad...

There are strange and unclear plot extravagances that do not affect the plot. All pretty good