My Maids Want to Improve so Much

It was really enjoyable to write, but it was a bit too magical. I have updated it to Chapter 102. Cecilia and Aatrox are no longer visible, and the relationship between the characters is a bit confusing. After the protagonist acquires new subordinates, he seems to have forgotten his previous subordinates. But I have to say that the suspense of the article is very well created. I think the only flaw is the character. The vampire's character was created without any foreshadowing, but it successfully attracted the protagonist's attention. But the fallen angels and elves spend a lot of foreshadowing on how to surrender. I think there is still room for improvement in character creation. I also hope that the content of the article can be allocated more reasonably to these supporting roles. Aatrox hadn't seen him in a long time. As a dark descendant sword demon with a long sword, he couldn't be seen. Hahahahahaha/ The overall story is really enjoyable, but for the sake of enjoyment, part of the narrative logic, part of the description of details and the characterization of characters are sacrificed. If these can be supplemented, then this book will become a very good and truly enjoyable novel.

Actually, if you tell the truth about this book, it is impossible to give it a five-star rating. But after all, it is a new author. I will support it and write it well. Let me talk about the problems with your book. There are very few people commenting on it, but what they said is actually correct. Among the inconsistencies in the plot, one person said that the maid's black hair and silver hair were changed randomly. In fact, after reading this, I felt that it was not a random change. , She has had two-color wings since Cecilia came out. I think it should be in two forms, but it has appeared more in the form of fallen angels than in the form of angels. You can actually talk about this at the end of the chapter, and then your writing style. You need to polish it a little. For the time being, it seems that there are no big shortcomings or poisonous points. It is much better than some new authors at the beginning.

A communist society is established in a magical world with a bit of Western European style. (I only read a little bit, if you think I'm wrong, just think so, I don't care)

Chapter 6 Let's eat, it's generous

Although the writing style is a little bit brainless, it's not embarrassing and it's just the right amount of fun. I'd love to read more [shy] After reading other people's comments, I agree with many of the problems. Let's not talk about the others. I only have one suggestion, which is not to become a stud novel. Although I also like to read multiple female protagonists, I hope that the pace of accepting other female protagonists in the future will be slower. I can write more daily lines with the current female protagonists. Of course, I don't mean to write about sex.

It's a cool article. The author should be a newcomer, but he will read readers' comments and consider revising it. Readers can set characters, and the author may adopt them. The article index is 4 stars (not boring). The kill index is 3 stars. I still have to abandon my brain when reading this article. I hope the heroine won't have too many. The combat power setting is 3 stars (it's easy to write and it doesn't break down yet). Overall 4 stars.

I feel that the writing of this novel is still good. Although I haven't read the novel for a long time, I personally feel that it is still very good. A good novel can keep me reading. Although there are very few people reading it now, I will always be here. Big cheers for the author✊[Laugh][Laugh][Laugh]

A very good refreshing article, the logic is quite self-consistent, and it is considered a smart one among the refreshing articles.

This Western fantasy harem novel is really crazy! The setting is novel and exciting, the female protagonists have their own charms, the whole process is high-energy and not frustrating, the pace is so fast, the fun points are so dense that you can't stop, you can stay up late to read till dawn without feeling sleepy, you can just close your eyes and rush into the book!

It was really fun to write! ! ! This is a cool article. Come on, author! ! !

It looks good, please write more. This is a happy article. It's really annoying like the ones written by others that are both refreshing and unpleasant at the same time.

Chapter 6 begins I just found out it was pornography

It's very good as a cool article

This is called cool writing [laughing evilly]

Why no one is watching [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Good looking, super good looking, invincible and good looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Ok ok ok

Shuangwen and the harem. Good review! !

I thought it was a knight errant novel, but I didn't expect it to be a Warhammer novel, but overall it's still very good.

The front is okay, but I don't know what the back will be like [laughs]

Although it's a bit messy, I like the content [laughs evilly]

It's a pity that I came late, and it feels a bit fragmented in some places, but the writing is still good and beautiful😄

The Tyrant novel is pretty good, he kills decisively and is not like the Holy Mother, but he hates evil as much as he hates it.

As a reader, I personally think this is a very beautiful book. I hope it won't be discontinued like other books. Wow Darcy can do anything [send heart] [send heart]

Not bad, not bad, good. Good-looking. Love watching.

Come on, author! Work hard to improve, it's really good, don't break it, don't make it unfinished