League of Legends: I Just Want to Draw a Prize!

Some paragraphs are too long. Internet novels are different from prose. There is no need to pile up long sentences or large paragraphs. The rhythm should be loose and there should be enough white space so that readers can have a sense of immersion when reading. It's not good-looking. The protagonist's abilities are mixed but not refined. He sprays fireballs from beginning to end, and his teammates don't praise him even though he uses a one-time ultimate move. Instead, they are surprised that the protagonist ate too much after the war. Can you give it some emotional value? There are too many associations, and some chapters have more associations than the number of words in the plot.

It's a bit overwhelming

It can also be used to suppress combat power. Don't be stubborn, author. Look at the comments and see how many people are saying that you are suppressing combat power. The purpose of giving experience cards is to suppress combat power. Otherwise, what's the use?

The author wrote it carefully. The background of the story, regional characteristics, and the props in strange and different worlds were very interesting. I read it without skipping a word. I hope to work hard, continue to work hard, and maintain the standard.

It's good, but some paragraphs are a bit long

I like that the protagonist gradually becomes stronger. Some people say that he is overpowered in combat, but I think the talent of the protagonist is really a bit cheated (I have read the Naruto manga so I know what the difficulty is, and he has already had two ability systems in such a short time since he came to this world). The protagonist is an ordinary person from the beginning, and his personality is well described. Please don't compare ordinary people with those cheating shounen manga protagonists. The inner world, daily life and background story are all well done. It is a real world that leaves us with a lot of fun and a better understanding of the characters. At least this book is not a mindless and invincible novel at first glance. I personally like this type of book I mean, can there be more skills and tactics in combat? Otherwise, it feels a bit repetitive. Don't let your favorability rise too quickly, give it time and pave the way. The favorability of some books rose too quickly, and I wasn't used to those irrational emotional scenes. Don't have a harem just for the sake of having a harem (the most annoying thing). Personally, I feel that emotions are the characters and the soul of the book. If the characters are no longer reasonable, then the book can be stopped because there is no need to read a false story. For some deliberate things, like those plots made just for the sake of memes, you will understand if you inform them first. I personally am a rationalist. It really makes me feel sick to see a mindless plot.

The combat effectiveness is a bit suppressed, but it's not too serious. The author should have corrected it. However, the system's cooldown time is too long after pulling out a useless thing, which is really unsustainable. The rest of the story feels pretty good, and it can be seen that the author has carefully researched various background stories and timelines.

How to lock it! Emmm, it suits my taste. At least it's funny and not embarrassing. You can watch more updates.

It's okay, a bit toxic, but still watchable. But after reading it for a few days, I only have one feeling: I haven't finished it yet and will make up for it tomorrow [laughs][laughs][laughs]

I feel like I'm running out of books, so I can read this book while reading it.

Kids, I ran away after seeing Chapter 19, come on.

It's pretty good. I've done a lot of background research, but it's too short. Why can't you just let me read it with a million words?

It's very interesting. I hope the author can finish it well.

It's good-looking, and the memes are interesting. It's not a bad joke.

Very good, as beautiful as an eagle.

The book is very good and the author is also very polished

Feeling good now

Okay, quite interesting.

Le Ziwen is worth reading

It looks okay so far [I understand]

A rare product

Well, it's okay, it's pretty good-looking.

It's nice to look at, and there's nothing poisonous about it. It's very interesting, not too poisonous, and the author listens and has some ideas.

Nice looking and interesting, food and drink

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

One of the better fanfics in League, but it's too slow to update

I am a military commander, and this movie suits my mental state very well.

Well written. Updates are a bit slow.

It can be said that the author is very careful and the settings are very good.

It's pretty good. Except for only two chapters, it's pretty good. By the way, is it a single heroine or more?