Slave God***********

The writing style is okay and the logic is clear. If written well, it will be a good article. Question 1: The protagonist's current image seems to be behind the scenes, but he is personally involved in many things. Currently, it is all up to the author. This may seem a bit mindless, but the protagonist is the type who likes to plan. If it goes on for a long time, there will be a sense of fragmentation. The early stage is okay, but you must pay attention to it in the middle and later stages. Question 2: A very classic tomato-style novel that takes one step at a time. For example, the protagonist breaks into the blocked area in the last chapter. In the next chapter, the reader realizes that there is no blockade because the wild place is too big. This creates a little poison. Some readers just ran away from the previous chapter without reading the explanation. Moreover, this must be the author's own solution and cannot be dwelled on. This kind of problem has appeared many times, and this is how the negative reviews of the author come about. Question 3: Pay attention to the number of female partners, otherwise later in the writing, there will be a situation where the female protagonist is not found in the early stage and later in the investigation. The speed of recruiting girls is too fast. If the author did not deliberately fill in the image of the female partner later, he would really be scolded for giving away the girl. Question 4: The protagonist's moral obsessiveness should be as subtle as possible, or gradually reduced to reflect growth. Many times it feels more like the author himself wants to say that the protagonist cannot always rely on the protagonist's halo, otherwise it will most likely end badly or become a big deal. Question 5: The portrayal of the heroine's pre-subjugation image is currently very simple, resulting in a lack of excitement in the heroine's change of attitude towards the protagonist after being subdued. This aspect depends on the author's own ideas and can be discarded appropriately, but please note that this is part of the audience for slavery literature. When reading the book, I feel like I am taking one step at a time. It is not that the protagonist has gained some kind of power, but that he will encounter things that require this kind of power next. Maybe it is the unique style of Tomato novels.

It's very beautiful. I can't write too many words, so I can only copy [smile]. The picture of our Genshin Impact is clear and beautiful. You can open a game and play it on your mobile phone. You will never get tired of playing it. It is very useful for killing time, enhancing friendship, and relaxing your mood. You can see that after opening it, the picture quality is like 3A. When placed in MiHoYo, it becomes bigger and taller, and it is highly absorbent. After opening it, it is a larger and thicker Teyvat. You can see that it is not bad no matter how you play it, it does not drop frames or drops, and it is no problem after being used seven or eight times.

Regarding the transformation, it may be because it was not clearly written before. Firstly, every time the protagonist transforms, the women know that he is the protagonist. Secondly, they have the spiritual connection with the slave mark, so they can see through the protagonist's disguise. In their eyes, the appearance of the protagonist has not changed. Regarding the poisonous points, the author's poison resistance is very low. The woman accidentally exposed herself and was looked at by passers-by. The author felt that this was a very poisonous point, so read it with confidence. This is my first time writing about the issue of transmutation. I didn't handle it well and didn't write it clearly, but I have to write it because I have to lay it out for the rest. It's my problem to make the brothers feel uncomfortable.

Not bad. None of the poisonous points in the comment area are poisonous points in my opinion. I can only say that you don't like to read this kind of book. That's not the author's problem. The author's writing position is quite clear, otherwise it would be nondescript. The heroine is a servant, not a wife, so the scale is relatively moderate. I have also written articles, but this scale is difficult to grasp. In fact, I have been scolded for writing, and I have also been scolded for shallow writing. Now I personally accept this scale. It is like a dish that some people eat salty and others eat bland. The writing style is average, but the writing is cool. It's enough if it's cool. Just don't be tj. I'll write at least three to five hundred chapters.

Come on, big brother of crab roe cake [shy]

It was a great pleasure to watch it, and I don't have to worry about getting girls. I have finished reading all these chapters now, and there are almost a thousand people in the harem. The car is going very fast, and the supreme bones of the car resonate with each other [laughing evilly] This is the little emperor's uncle! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] I forgot to give a good review after watching it for so long, now I've added it [I've learned it]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The reason can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. [Shy]

I hope the author will not stop updating. It will be perfect if it can update more than 500 times.

From the current point of view, as long as there is no stomachache, you will win.

It's really pretty, but forget it if you're here for TJ or something like that.

Tomato's underrated masterpiece [laughing]

There's nothing wrong with this book, he just wants to enjoy it to the end

Just my personal opinion, this book is really good

Cool article, too short. I'll give it four stars first. Will review later

It looks pretty good. I've only watched a little bit so far. I hope it doesn't end too soon. It was a big surprise that it was the author of Lord Shadow, but at present the world view is too small and the realm division is too simple. Will there be a higher realm in the future?

Super beautiful, saves the book shortage

Invincibly cool writing, the plot is non-toxic

It's nice to look at, but it doesn't leave any traces of girls.

Looks good😄, don't give me points yet

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very beautiful and highly recommended

Veteran driver! Very good

My favorite type

Awesome! Suitable for my taste[Adoration]

It's super easy to sneak in.

Brainless and cool article, cheers for the author

When will it be updated?

"Go boldly and make your way with your fists and feet." But the fact is that if you use fists and kicks to break in, you can only break into the police station.

This is so cool, I'll go for it, definitely 18+ Later on, my hips were stretched