Main Attack: Starting from Becoming Long Aotian's Wife and Starting to Cultivate Immortality

There is no meal replacement in the whole network, American Gong + Upgrade stream + "Mr. Wife", although Gong is a scholar, he is not stupid at all, not a virgin, he has brains, is very good, and I also like Shou's personality. He is the kind of responsible and motivated, trusts Gong very much, and he will do whatever Gong wants. I have been looking for meal replacements in the past two days, and I found that other articles were so stupid and greasy that it was hard to swallow. I also asked Long Aotian to help me. I don't want to see what Long Aotian wrote: "The skin can be broken by blowing, and the lips are red", okay? ? Fighting monsters until you hit the dog's belly 😡, this author's writing will not be like this. I like the author's details about the calluses on the hands, and the character should be decisive. It is very comfortable to read. There will be no villains far beyond the protagonist's ability. The protagonist is not aggrieved, and the two trust each other and help each other. Support and build their own little family, but there is so little every day. I read it in one go, and there is no detailed account or word count. I hope to beat the horse, haha, but I feel that I will accept it quickly. [Laughs] What should this little love brain do when he finds out that his daughter-in-law has become a man-in-law? Long Aotian: I should buy men's clothing for my wife

The main attack + Long Aotian has the right and great authority, boss, you must continue reading more and more. [Send heartfelt] The writing style and rhythm are good, I like the upgrade flow, and the characters are not pretentious. I look forward to the follow-up plot, and keep reading. Come on^3^

It's equal, good-looking, and Nian'an's typical Long Aotian identity, but it didn't give me the kind of second-rate feeling that would scream "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi." After his parents passed away, he was mature and responsible, living alone. Of course, he was very considerate to his "wife" Aqi. I think the two of them are a young couple who warm to each other and get married first and fall in love later.

Boss's writing is very good. Don't let bad reviews affect your mood. Although you may not be able to do it, you can read the good ones and follow your own pace. Don't be anxious and take your time. I like to read this kind of long-flowing writing. There is a main line and an emotional line every time. It's good. Look, as you fight monsters and upgrade, you gradually see your own heart and confirm your feelings, and you secretly get jealous without confirming the other person's feelings. This kind of named jealousy is the best to watch. An An and Qiqi are the best to watch when they are jealous of each other [Shy][Already planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Shuang Wen Miao, although I don't really like to deliberately reflect the upper and lower stereotypes of characters, for example, the attack must be high, and not just one or two centimeters higher. In short, it is a classic Long Aotian plot. Both characters are very strong, but Long Aotian seems to be stronger. I accept this well. Sorry, I just like to see a little contrast. The writing is not bad.

Super pretty! ! The beauty of this article😋😋🥵🥵 Shou is Long Aotian! A super cute innocent puppy who blushes often and is in top love. Gong is the husband and wife. Although he has just entered the world of cultivating immortals, he is actually from Long Aotian. He is a mechanical weirdo and can learn everything quickly. He sits at the same table with "someone who knows a little bit" [full] The plot is refreshing and not procrastinating, the writing is online, and everyone in the comment section is also very interesting. I haven't seen such a friendly comment section in a long time😌😌 The only drawback is that it is! This is a serialized article! ! Oh my God, it's terrible, but it's my life to follow the serial. I will follow the serial all my life🥵🥵

Summary: Overall, it's very good-looking. It's rare to write a female-driven story in the same way as a male-produced one. The plot line is clear, and the character creation is not obviously broken. After reading more than 300 chapters (I can't bear to finish it), there are no big surprises so far, but sometimes the plot is dragging. The author may want to write some details, but it seems very tiring to write too many details. It's just that the emotional line is a bit unique in its slowness [laughs awkwardly], and Lei enters it slowly and cautiously. In addition, the strength increases very slowly. I think the author is trying to clearly describe the protagonist's growth line. After all, it is a growth stream. Book lovers who like invincible streams should be cautious. You can't stop reading this kind of article. Once you stop, it will become boring. The emotions become more and more inexplicable, and the plot becomes more and more "classic". From the chapter "Golden Holy Treasure", I have already guessed the follow-up, and my expectations are instantly cleared. As expected, it is also the same template after reading it, and I am a bit tired of it. If you like it, keep reading. It's just my personal opinion. It's up to you.

It's so beautiful. I really feel that the writing is very fluent. It's smoother than some high-scoring novels in Tomato. It's really good to read. I really like Xiao Nian'an. He's such an innocent little dog. He's so cute and cute. Ming Qi is also good. The two get along so cute and cute. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. The writing is really good. I feel that Xiao Nian'an is really a pure Long Aotian type. He has a sense of tenacity and is also very friendly towards women. When he told his wife that he was free to go out, he felt that he respected his wife. Ming Qi was also very kind to Nian An. I hope Nian An can continue to be sweet after discovering Ming Qi's gender. They are really cute [blowing kiss]

I really like this setting, and the writing style is more male-oriented, and the emotional lines are written superbly, but it does not make people feel mindless and only serves the relationship. It is well balanced. I hope that both the attacker and the recipient will realize their feelings sooner. It is best if the recipient has realized the truth and the attacker thinks he is pretending well, but it is best to go slowly if the recipient does not expose it. I can't bear the pain.

Very pretty. It's just that the emotional line is too slow, and there are no signs of enlightenment now. Just talking about the growth route is pretty good. The two protagonists mainly focus on cultivation. At present, it seems that the protagonist's development path should be like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Is this considered a farming article? But I really want to see them fall in love, let's exchange feelings quickly [crying]

I have been following it for a long time, but the plot behind it is long, boring, and the emotional line is slow. It makes people want to give up after watching it. However, its setting is relatively new among fairy tales. If you like slow-paced and slow-flowing movies, I recommend watching it.

Can such a wonderful upgrade stream really be seen on Tomato? [I'm about to cry] The plot is complete and detailed, and the characters of the two protagonists are not superficial or awkward at all. It is simply soothing to the whole body!

Still serializing, less than 100,000, but the writing style and plot feel like a starting point, the writing is strong, it is not a day's work, Long Aotian's taste is very good, it has satisfied my appetite, I like to read [laughing] Write a comment to the cook to light up the cook's fire🔥 I love you boss, please trouble me 10,000 words a day, let me eat it

The plot is quite smooth, the horse-falling is quite sudden, and the emotional progression is also very interesting. However, the label of Long Aotian is not obvious. Although he is Long Aotian, he will not resist when he is suppressed all the time. Even if he has the ability, he has to surrender resources and be exploited. , And then resisted and struggled in the name of loving his wife. It can only be said that the character of loving his wife has risen. Long Aotian's strong character and the coolness based on it are shattered. Long Aotian is an accessory of loving his wife. It can only be said that female videos are still authoritative.

They are two strong people. They have three-dimensional images, and their personalities are multi-faceted, like grass in the cracks of rocks, like spring rain. They can be tender and a little melancholy, but also firm and strong... The change and deepening of emotions is not just the direct expression of love between the two or it happens overnight, but the accumulation of trivial mutual care and concern in life. There may be hesitation and sadness, but in one incident after another, they will subconsciously give without reservation. After the final reaction, it has become an indispensable part of life. Maybe it's an innocent puppy and someone with a tough mouth. I think there is a saying that suits them very well. Hugs make up for the regret (a feeling) of not having a heartbeat on the right side of the human chest. Regarding the current state of mind of the two people, I feel that a hug is closer than any kiss and is more like a kind of confession and acceptance. Many people expect the horse to fall, but they actually hope that "Qi" can help them understand their own hearts. (My personal opinion is a bit one-sided, I apologize for everything)

Wall crack recommended! ! ! From the current point of view, there are no popular highlights. Even I, who is more picky about writing and attributes, can read it. The two protagonists are both leveling up. Seeing the two protagonists slowly becoming stronger always makes me feel like a child has grown up (so touching, woohoo bushi). This type of writing is easy to lose the combat power. I hope that the combat power will not expand too ridiculously after writing. Longlong's innocent appearance is very cute. Please post more posts from the protagonists! And Xiao Yuyao is also a very lovable little girl, and her interaction with Longlong is also very cute. I hope she won't betray her later. I really like this kind of girl www

Long Aotian turned out to be an innocent and cute baby, and he was also responsible for supporting the family with his "wife". I really like the story of both parties growing up together, and there is no frustrating plot.

It's quite good to watch, and the plot is quite enjoyable, but the emotional line is a bit slow, and half a million words have not come together yet. So far, the early stage is much sweeter than the later stage. It looks like an ambiguous period at the beginning, but more like a brotherhood at the end [facepalm]. An's affection for Qi was obvious, while Qi looked a little more stern, wondering when they could be together. I'm a little impatient after watching it, so I'll wait until it's over before continuing to watch it [Sending my heart]

Blow! I don't often write book reviews, but I really love this one! The plot is grand but the emotional details are intricate. The beginning is a bit stiff in some places, but it goes very smoothly later on. I really like the author's plot, the refreshing flow of cultivating immortals and upgrading, and there are no super awkward scenes where the protagonist recites fixed lines. The character design makes me eat, the beautiful man and his wife are so sexy! My writing skills are also considered upper-middle-level, and I can look forward to the future!

This article is so cute! Some book friends who commented on it said, "This "cool" is not "cool" at all." Maybe my understanding of the concept of "cool" is different from yours. I feel that you like to read the kind of "cool" that favors men and women, exaggerated, fast-paced and tense. Now that I have seen this, I personally think that the "cool" of this article refers to the smooth development of the plot without too many murders and betrayal of morality and hatred. Revenge of hatred is full of difficulties and obstacles. In most cases, the two protagonists can explore the path and direction of cultivation on their own and can control the situation and have forward thinking. The style of the article tends to be relaxed, humorous, passionate, slow-key and growth-oriented. It is true that the overall pace of the article is more daily and slow, but it is still open to question whether it is procrastinating and not getting to the point. This depends on the overall direction of the author's writing and the word count. As for me, I like Qiqi and An An very much, whether it's their characters or their interactions, and I also like the author's idea of ​​innovative writing routines for male porn (maybe this is what he meant?) At the beginning! Why do some people give up halfway but I don't? Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I go to school on weekdays and have a lot of chapters stored, so it's easier and more comfortable to catch up. It's really healing to watch their daily interactions when I'm tired or stressed ~ So maybe some readers who gave up really did not feel comfortable reading this article because it didn't meet their expectations of a "refreshing article" or they didn't feel comfortable reading it at all in one day! But book friends who like to watch Beauty 1 Long Aotian 0 and cute interactions and are interested in upgrading fairy tales can give it a try! The author has probably established a stable writing style. He has completed one or two volumes, and there may be many more volumes in the future. Moreover, the third volume has already made clear progress in the emotional line (celebration from all over the world! [Blow kiss]). At the same time, with the current text, the author has probably laid a lot of foreshadowing, setting the main line for the following chapters and helping to improve the world view. At the same time, I am also looking forward to how the subsequent plot will develop [shy]

The characters of the two protagonists are very charming, which is my favorite type. The plot line and emotional line do develop very slowly, but I feel that this is not a problem of the author's level, but that the wife herself likes this style, which I personally can accept. But one thing I feel a little uncomfortable about is that I have read nearly 300 chapters. Among all the characters that have appeared so far, the villain with the most scenes is actually Shen Qingqing. She has no background, no spiritual roots, no chance, no special physique, and she just bears the name of a false destiny. Such a small character is actually the biggest villain at present. From Novice Village to Tianxuan Sect, she has been slapped in the face repeatedly. To be honest, I didn't expect this character to live for so long. I'm not saying that I feel sorry for this character or that I'm whitewashing this character, but I just feel that this arrangement is inappropriate.

Disclaimer: Only personal opinions This is the most beautiful book I have ever read on Long Aotian Shou + Immortal Cultivation + Main Attack! ! Doesn't anyone like to see Long Aotian being suppressed? It's very refreshing and crispy, okay? . And I think I can't find a novel in Tomato that suits my taste like this one. The whole story is about living an ordinary life and sometimes a little excitement. Moreover, Xiao Nian'an's blushing character is so cute. I really like this kind of thank you. If you like dog sculptures, you can also try this book. I cried and I can't comment, but reading this book made me very happy. . It's too hard to wait for the second update every day. I'm about to start school.

A very interesting book, both strong and focused. This is the first main text I have read. I couldn't accept main text in the past, but I can read this one [heartfelt]. Personally, I don't think there are any big surprises in the writing and plot. Aotian is very protective of his "wife", and the relationship between the young lovers is very natural. In the article There will never be a situation where a word appears repeatedly. Hahaha, can anyone understand me? Sometimes when a word appears repeatedly in the text, I feel very annoyed. [Feelings] This is my first time writing a book review. Some of it is not comprehensive, but all in all it is a very good book [Feelings]

Os: Let's take a look and wonder if the author wants to update a two-million-word novel. It's very, very good-looking. The two strong characters are super pure. I hope to keep this slow pace. I don't really like novels that blur the main line of growth in order to write about emotions, and the whole novel is full of weird intimate scenes. The pace of this book is relatively slow, as if love develops over time while growing up, it is very tender. It is not written to write an intimate scene between two men, but focuses on the growth, talents, opportunities, and promotions of the two protagonists. It is heart-warming☺️☺️ The two characters are also very cute and very pure. Probably one is pure and the other is more pure. I hope that when they get together again, their characters will not suddenly become a domineering boss and a spoiled wife. It is best to have two strong characters. Finally, I still hope that the text will be longer, and I especially want to see the growth type of long-form videos.

Yummy yummy yummy yummy. Both of them are very cute. Although the emotional line is a bit slow to heat up, it does not affect the deliciousness at all. It's so delicate that I can't stand it anymore. Can the author see himself when he looks in the mirror every day? Because God has no form at all. After watching too many fast-food love stories, I have become addicted to this kind of chaff. It's just a natural fall in love, and the development of the emotional line is not abrupt at all. Woohoo. It's a pity that I have to go to school tomorrow. It will feel bad if I can't see you for a week. Finally, the author, I love you. (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎

Good-looking, dual strength, main attack, attack is brought with it, even if Shou is the male protagonist Long Aotian, the attack is not inferior at all! It looks so cool, I feel like I am my wife's (male) slave, and I haven't lost my horse yet! Looking forward to falling off the horse and starting a happy life after marriage~

Both of them are so cute🥰Gong doesn't realize how excited he is, and slowly falls under Shou's love brain attack. I look forward to the day when Gong loses his horse hahaha, but if Shou finds out that Gong is a man, will he be abused? I'm a little worried😟(๐•̆·̭•̆๐) Then the two of them are looking for each other. I am very satisfied with this review, and the writing is also online. I like it! The emotional line is too slow, so I ran away

I don't know why I really like the feeling of two people coming together from a small place to a big city. It really pokes at me. The two of them are a little looked down upon by others, but they are excited and nervous at the same time, holding each other's hands. I love it for no reason. The whole article really pokes at me. Shou is a really upright and kind-hearted good boy, and Gong is really hard-working. The feeling of working hard to become stronger, and after the two people learned the truth about the substitute marriage, there was no cliche plot, but they chose to grow up together as each other's family. The feeling was actually quite warm. They doted on each other and relied on each other to grow up together. The emotional line was also very smooth. The love didn't know where it started, and it felt like it went deep. I like it very much.

Oh my god! Watching this young couple really makes me happy! [Blowing a kiss] Ssangyong Aotian is the most awesome! [Sending Hearts] Don't say it's not easy for the two idiots, say it's not easy for me. More than 380 chapters of Qipai wood have enlightened me. Now I just wait for An'an brand wood to enlighten me, and then the two of us can cultivate our emotions and cultivate together! Mingqi, you must not let go of this Nian'an puppy! Nian'an Puppy Plastic is going to be bullied by our evil Mingqi! [Cherish it carefully] (Laugh evilly, cross it out. What are you talking about in public!) In addition, the author is awesome. He has the perseverance to read for so long, and his writing style is also top-notch. I have never forgotten this book since I was in my senior year of high school. How could such a hateful school break up my book and the author's (?). The plot is so exciting and the emotions are beautifully written. I will definitely follow this book to the end! [Shy]

In the blink of an eye, I have gone from eighty to nearly five hundred chapters. It seems that I started reading it during the winter vacation last year. This is the first time I have followed a series for so long, but it is really good! The character design is not cliche, and it doesn't turn her into a spoiled wife. In short, it's to my liking. I read a lot of book reviews, saying that the protagonist's emotional line is slow, but I actually think it's okay. Don't you think the two of them were cute during the period before they fell in love? Also, the protagonist is feeling aggrieved. How should I put it... The protagonist is at the peak of foundation building so far. In the previous article, he was also in the middle (or late) stage of foundation building. Didn't he also counterattack the golden elixir? You can't let Yi Zhuji kill Nascent Soul, right? Isn't this a cool article? I think this book is the kind of growth flow where the two protagonists accompany each other and grow up. If you want to read cool articles, turn right when you go out. Everyone's taste is different. A thousand readers will mean a thousand Hamlets, so don't bother. Wish 99