After Tong Mo Was Reborn, He Decided to Learn to Be a Good Person

The grinding head written by the author is really easy to restore. Especially the three pictures of Sayuri amazed me. Every "dong-dong-dong" is the sound agreed between two people. As the son of God, he dances on the high platform. As a pillar, she fights for the people. The beautiful lily shines brightly in the darkness before dawn. This lily kept blooming and blooming, until it reached the dawn guarded by the flame pillar. Every breath of Yanzhu and every swing of his sword illuminated the entire night. Even if you face an enemy 10,000 times stronger than yourself, never give up. Humanity is the hymn of life. The author's feelings are very delicate, as if he were treating the child as a lotus and carving it carefully. The texture of each petal, each drop of water causing ripples, must be clearly depicted. The special show is also particularly good. Sometimes, before I even reacted, I was on the other side. Just like the long years that have passed since childhood, in the blink of an eye, people are old, their pearls are yellow, like small snowflakes, and they are like the first generation of maids. (Sorry, I forgot the name. M(._.)M) Perhaps there will come a time when the lotus flower carved by the child will break through the thin layer of ice, grow flesh and blood, and fill the pond. Life goes on and on. There will come a time when you will enter the world and live for it. Grateful. (≧∇≦) Well, this follow-up review is actually written solely for the author's praise. The author is still performing steadily. But I still have to say it. In fact, the author's tips at the back are really good. If there are any unclear points in the text, they will be written in the prompts. And while reading, you can also learn some historical information about that era. In fact, I always thought that there was no sugar in ancient times, but I later learned about it when I saw the Golden Pot Sugar in the author's instructions. And you can also understand the author's intention from the hints at the end. Likewise, I would also like to praise the author's update speed. That's all for the current review. I am very grateful to the author for recognizing my comments. (Happy.٩(๑^O^๑)۶)

Damn, the author is awesome, Claes. I really like this kind of delicate and touching CP-free article. The original stories in it are also very good... I cried when I read Lifespan Theory... I will give it an eighty-star rating. Good cheers for the author! I will always support you! So pretty! [Cry][cry] The content of the story is so rich and interesting. I was so immersed that I thought I had updated almost 200 chapters, but it turned out that I had just updated to early 100... The plot is very novel, different from the Mo Mo Tou novels I have read before, and the understanding of the characters is amazing. Sure enough, the author is Kami Sama... [Kneel down and bow down]

Wow, it's great. I found a treasure when I was shopping. Both the grinding and the portrayal of passers-by are great. The whole life without CP is the most delicious [crying], exploring the emotional ing~

Very nice! I just finished reading the story so far in one hour~ First of all, it is very reductive, and the little changes in Mo Mo Tou's emotions are written very well. The first emotion I learned was sadness from missing, crying bitterly. Secondly, the author's writing style is very good, the two montage-style narratives are excellent, and the mobilization of emotions is even better. The story of each supporting character is just right without feeling too much, and each of the three-dimensional characters is well created. By the way, I really like the idea of ​​reorganizing relationships without blood ties. I really like the fact that Mo Mo Tou's relationship sprouted from a series of family relationships. And the most important thing is that there is no CP, no leather case, and no time travel. It's great that everyone is the same person! Finally, let me give you some hope. The author has already used the plot point twice in the plot [the person who brings family affection is killed by an evil ghost, which touches Mo Tou]. Although the writing is very good, I hope there can be a new way of writing. After all, Mo Tou has learned to be sad ()

It feels like this is the one that suits my taste the most except for the Tongmo book that was not disliked today. . The writing is good and the characterization is spot on, not OOC at all.

Delicious😋Love to eat I am completely polished here, so I am definitely not OOC. Snowflake, Mewmewmaru, they are also very cute! Everyone is very, very good! The leader is so cute! And! No CP or anything is the best!

I haven't read a few chapters yet, but this daily routine is so good and the leader is so cute! ! ! The tag perfectly matches my imagination. The CP-free Tongmo himself was reincarnated, slowly understanding emotions, and the daily life of a leader! ! !

Very delicious! Although he is still a baby, he already has a clear rhythm. The original characters are flesh and blood without being too overwhelming. The emotional changes of Tong Mo are portrayed very delicately. The plot is interesting and the timeline is grasped just right. What I like most is that there is no CP and the interaction is fun. Now most of them are interactions with humans. I don't know if I will interact with other ghosts. I look forward to seeing you first haha On another note, the boss is really very prolific, I hope the traffic of this book will be better [Love] The description of Xiao Qinye is very interesting. I feel that if I write this way, very different things will happen. In addition, this book is very harsh on the longevity theory. Is there hope for Xiao Xuehua to reunite? For now, it feels like a dumpling ending, right? If this is the best, I like this

It's tied! A super nice book! Looking forward to updating to completion! The writing style is very good, with a long-lasting melancholy flavor. Tong Mo's original hollowness only understands but does not feel the emotions that are gradually developed later, and he constantly has and loses bits and pieces of hard ice... The emotions are delicate, the corners are smooth, and the interspersed narrative descriptions are particularly amazing! If you can figure it out, it's no better than watching videos or movies! The original characters are three-dimensional and lifelike. Character deaths and consequences do not feel abrupt or perfunctory. The original characters are deeply understood. The foreshadowing is also very good, and the plot is exciting and reasonable. The characters are not OOC but have an original flavor, and all the changes and chain reactions are just right! All members are CB and have no CP, which is even more praised! The whole book tastes like sour and sweet lemonade! The basic skills are very strong! Maybe it's because not many people started reading it so the rating is so low, but it's a treasure! Give Tomato more traffic! !

The writing is so good. When I saw there was no rating at first, I thought it would be boring. But I found out that it is really beautiful. I will keep following it for more updates! There is no serious OOC feeling at all, and there are many interesting stories besides the main plot. When Sayuri and Maejoji fight, the change of perspective has a very novel feeling. I can imagine the contrast between Momotou and Sayuri's respective scenes. I just hope that the author will not stop updating suddenly like other fan fiction authors...

It's super delicious, the brushwork is delicate, and it has a full sense of fate. The god portrays a childlike character, and the god has no joy or sadness. Past and present life, past and present are intertwined and intertwined. The author is God.

I don't understand why the rating is so low. I think the writing of this film is really good. The writing style is delicate and I don't think that other articles are going too fast. The character's psychology is completely non-ooc. After reading several chapters, I either asked for a psychological committee or went crazy because of the cuteness. In terms of writing techniques, the author has a technique that is really wonderful - the blending of multiple scenes, full of a sense of fate and layering, a personal and spiritual shock, warm and interesting, highly recommended! ! ! (It is recommended to read it several times to prevent missing some details. The author is very diligent, but sometimes updates are interrupted due to being squeezed by capitalists. Please forgive me)

I particularly like it. It is a work that brings both sadness and joy. Although the big frame is warm, there are soft knives between the lines. The middle part makes people feel sad, but it is not sad. It is just from Inosuke's perspective. I feel very distressed. "Father" died once, and "Father's" son also died. Although the teacher briefly brushed off Inosuke's reaction, it was It gives people unlimited room for imagination. Seeing the complicated feelings and psychology of the butterfly sisters towards the leader, on the one hand, I feel a little pity, and a little angry that these two girls did not go back. Even if they took a look at Kotonoha and the others, it would be okay. To be honest, I never thought he would die, so I never made preparations. When I heard the news of his death, I couldn't help but be shocked. He even He died when Tong Mo was asleep. He didn't even know when he saw Tong Mo for the last time that the person in front of him was actually his best friend. However, the last gesture made me personally think that Makijuro also knew that his friend was a ghost. So it can be seen that Makijuro also knew that his best friend was not dead. This made me feel psychological comfort, but for his death , obviously in the original work, I don't like this alcoholic father, but in this article, I have strong feelings for him. This may be the change brought by the leader. No one will not like the cheerful Mr. Owl, and then there are the Tokito brothers. To be honest, I thought they would get help from Tong Mo, and the brother would not be killed by ghosts again. The two of them joined the ghost killing together. Team, the result was beyond my expectation. Seeing their plot, Muichiro still turned into a child with intermittent amnesia, which made people feel very heartbroken. But between Ichiro and Hei Shimo, from my personal understanding, I felt a little family affection, which made people feel very relieved. Of course, the two brothers gave me a premonition that Infinite City should be more beautiful than I imagined. Sad. In short, this article makes people feel warm as a whole, but the plot makes people feel sour. I feel sorry for Inosuke who lost his "father", I feel sorry for Giyuu who had a conflict with his best friend, I feel sorry for the Tokito brothers who separated, and I feel sorry for Tongmo whose family left him one by one... I feel that I can't finish saying so much. In summary, I am very grateful to the teacher for his hard work. Although Although I like to make dumplings, sometimes imperfection is also a kind of perfection. I am afraid of the soft knife that will stab me next, but I secretly look forward to the day when the truth is announced. Although in my opinion, the identity of Tongmogui may be difficult for them to accept, but I personally think that some children should feel happy knowing that their "father" who has always been with them is not dead. (What I'm thinking about here is Inosuke. Anjuro and Tongmo don't have that much interaction, so I can't imagine it.) I don't know what the teacher's next plot will be. I'm looking forward to the day when Inosuke knows the truth. Of course, this is not my wish. Hahahahaha. I said a bit too much. I don't know if the teacher will read it. Thank you again for your hard work. I will always follow you~

Although, I feel like very few people recommend this book. Why! Come and see everyone! I beg you! Come read this one! This book is a little different than the others, that is, being involved in the world and understanding. Of course, the leader has not changed in essence. Sayuri and several generations of maids are a destined trajectory, and time is inevitable. I think the plot is appropriate but also feels very regretful. At least I didn't think before that the sentence "Hang yourself with a hook and don't change for a hundred years, otherwise we won't see each other again" can give me such a big blow (to the extent of being frightened every time). Everything is natural, peaceful and eloquent. The second thing is that I don't think it is OOC! ! ! The feeling of the leader written in the second chapter is more of a feeling of "like a lotus that cannot touch the water, or the sun and the moon that cannot stay in the sky". He is a person in the story, but he is essentially a bystander. He has jumped out of the story, maybe because he has experienced it once before? The same is true for other characters, the transformation is natural, everyone is a good person, and there is no deliberate death (but the teacher also gave me a feeling that I am about to be BE, I hope the ending will not be wow, everyone can live their own lives) CB is the best! No CP is the best! I love no CP! Finally, the teacher's writing is really good! There is gentleness between the lines (I feel that the teacher must be a very good person), so I beg you all to read it! This book is really beautiful! Check it out! (I'm in trouble, I'm ready to watch it again) I've talked a lot about it, but the main point is, I beg you to come and watch it!

After my serious appreciation, this book can be said to be the strongest one in the historical picture of my long reading. Everyone's emotions are very delicate, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. Originally, I didn't read many books with original characters, but I found that the original written words can really arouse deep emotions and have strong charm, especially the character Sayuri. I kept crying for that chapter that night, tossing and turning and couldn't sleep. This also laid the foundation for the subsequent recovery of the leader's emotions. The whole thing is not obtrusive at all and fits the character very well. Moreover, the characters in this book really have their own goals in life. The most important thing is that they are selfish. They are not like other books that are too perfect and appear to be very flawed. Take Sayuri again as an example. In just a few chapters, a complete character is created. Sayuri will He has his own selfish motives and regards the leader as his younger brother, so in the final information, the gesture concealed the information. This is what I think is the most shocking plot, and the various people who have been passed down to serve the leader have also changed from generation to generation. Time passes very quickly, but it is also very slow. The leader will also have that kind of emotional slowness, which is definitely the most delicious when he gradually becomes understanding and gradually gains feelings. But at the same time, he will also have his own ideas. No matter what, he is a ghost. He will not betray the boss, and he also wants to redeem the believers, so he will not want to become a human. He will always stand firm and maintain his own ideas. For me, he is a truly rare "person". I will definitely remember this book! !

Ok, the leader is also a very objective and good person (what a ghost). He is so cute. Miko is also very cute. The one who is most unhappy is still Yuriko (Sayuri). It can be said that it is because of her existence that the leader learned to be sad and longing. Xiao Yuehua is also very cute. Before she died, she taught Chi Eri a lot about the leader. She is really gentle. The same goes for Chie-chan. She is indeed a very organized girl. She is indeed a brave and strong woman who can maintain the operation of such a large church by herself. ٩(*´◒`*)۶ And Miheko, she knitted dozens of scarves for the leader, saying that they could be used until the leader dies. Miss Miheko must have never thought that the leader can actually live a long time (つд⊂), The same goes for Miaomiaomaru. In his last life, he really died in the arms of the leader. He died in his sleep. After going to heaven, he worked hard and returned to the leader again (*^ω^*). He is indeed the best, right? In this life, Xiao Qinye is also a strong mother. She led the pigs over two mountains alone and braved the heavy snow to arrive at the Eternal Bliss Sect. Along the way, she had to worry about whether her mother-in-law and husband would catch up. But fortunately, the ending was good. Her unhuman husband ate her vicious mother-in-law, and Xiao Qinye was finally able to live a stable life✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ , the pigs here are still very arrogant. In the original work, the leader only said that he wanted Kotonoha to die beside him, but in this novel, the leader has inadvertently let many people die beside him ╮(‵▽′)╭. The people around him are so happy. It is true that he is really happy to stay in the Eternal Paradise Sect ヾ(´∀｀.ヾ) I have so many regrets, I can't count them. The longevity theory is still too advanced (இωஇ), but it's so beautiful. Oh my God, I really love this book to death, and there are so many words in each chapter. I really like it so much. This is already a perfect existence that surpasses other novels. Hahaha, it's a pity that there are so few people who have read it, and I can't get the rating up. , But the quality is far better than the rating, praising eternal bliss! Praise the leader who is gentle, patient, and extremely smart! Good cook, good cook, good food, good food! I really look forward to every update from the author. This is really a state banquet, my God! ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ, Everyone is so gentle, so beautiful, my God

It's the type that keeps getting better and better the more I read it, so I finally couldn't help but leave a comment. The writing is very good, and the author is very good at describing emotions and interactions between characters. It is heart-warming to read 🥰 and every update is full. It is very satisfying to read 👍 Although the whole book is warm and humorous, it still has a strong color of sadness or loneliness. There are few similar books that can write this feeling. I will taste it again and again 😋💖✨

Very nice to watch, I would give every original non-leather case literary thumbs up. The drama and daily routines are both very good, and the author's writing style is also comfortable. I pray every day that such a beautiful article will be written smoothly!

Teacher, you describe the characters so delicately. Sayuri, Shangji and other interspersed characters, their stories are well described [crying] and also highlight the displacement of ordinary people in the background of the Warring States Period. It really made me cry. . I am really relieved to have sad emotions. . Come on, teacher, I will follow you! Four-star prime score (? Actually, I never quite understand how many points to score, so I'll give it 4 points) Second comment: Oops, the double line in Chapter 25 really made me cry. Teacher, can you write more in this way? I really like it.

It's really, really good-looking, really good-looking. In fact, I have not read the original work. I was simply attracted by Momo Tou's appearance (of course, it may also be attracted by his identity as a "leader" [laughs]), and then I read the fanfic. After reading some fan fiction, I got to know Tong Mo a little bit. He seems to be a pure villain who has lost his emotions since he was very young and cannot understand everything, and is even indifferent. But to be honest, after learning about the relationship between Tong Mo and the Butterfly family, I feel sorry for Xiao Ren, but I don't seem to have hated Nanny Tou. Maybe it's because the three senses have followed the five senses [shy]. I feel that for him, whether he is a human or a ghost, it may be just a way of living. Of course, this is just my superficial understanding of Tong Mo. But after reading the author's article, I found that I really love this kind of warm, all-in-one petting! The heartthrob has no cp game! ! Therefore, the author must work hard and follow Xinkouya! ! ! (Because I am really impatient, I will give up after a short period of time. Half of the books I have read have been read to death by me QAQ) Good news, I finished reading it in one sitting. Bad news, QAQ has caught up with the main force. The author's writing is excellent! Come on! !

Needless to say, full marks. I read half of the book in one day. The author is really not good at writing stories. The emotions are written so well. Everyone, even the minor characters, are brought to life. I am really shocked to have written such a story about Tong Mo. I don't have to think about what kind of person the author is to write such an article. I typed a long comment and then I deleted it. It was so touching that I don't know what else to say. I was so excited that I commented after reading it halfway through... Please come on, author.

Oh my god, your writing style is great, but you just don't treat me as a human being. Give me a sweet date after a slap in the face. . . When he stabbed me, the knife stabbed me as if it was free of charge. My tears were worthless, and when I was given sweets, they were so sweet that I couldn't understand. The transitions are also very well written! Mo Mo Tou gradually understood emotions in the company and farewell of relatives and friends. I really cried to death! ! ! [Crying][Crying][Crying] I hope you can continue to work hard. Although school starts tomorrow, I will definitely find time to read DaDa's articles. They are really good! I also hope that more people will read Da Da's article. It's a pity that such a good work is not popular [I almost cried] and the final ending must be he! ! ! Master, please live happily, please live happily, no longer face death and separation, and be able to never be separated from your best friend without any scruples.

Ah, this book is really very good-looking. In my heart, I can say that it is as good-looking as the book Tong Mo Is Not Hated Today. But I personally really hope that no one loses in the ending... I really hope that both the Demon Slayer Squad and the Demon Side can survive. . ! But my bottom line can be flexibly changed. I can accept any ending, but I have a stomachache... I have read more than 120 chapters so far, and I can't guess the ending... T^T

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looking good! (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐 ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗ Mo Mo Tou just continued to show his face in front of everyone, and when it came to the big battle, it turned out that they were all acquaintances () The author's writing is good, but it's too foul to have two lines running in parallel😢 However, Daodao is very relieved and looking forward to the upcoming plot! And the author should also pay attention to his health! '- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

The writing style is very good, and it also closely matches the character of the original author. Although it feels like there will be a big knife in the end that is not good (?), The process is really shocking and delicious. All the jokes are written to my heart (xp), such as family love, sexual transformation (bushi), no matter the ending, it is completely delicious🤗

It's super good-looking. It's a great way to learn about emotions. It's just a lot of small family knives. It hurts my heart. But this book is the best among all those who like to learn about emotions! The author is extremely doting on Mo Mo Tou! Nice! ! !

In fact, the writing of this article is good, the characters are not OOC and very interesting, at least that's what it seems from the beginning. There is no CP, but how can I say it? Well, I actually chose not to read it when I saw Chapter 71, because when I read the fanfic of the child model, I just wanted to read it in the hope that Tong Mo would be happy. After reading Chapter 71, according to what the author said, we can know that he will get feelings, but it does not mean that he must be happy. It is okay, how should I say? Because the requirement for me to read fanfic is that Tongmo must be happy, so I can't accept it. Is it because I read another fanfic before and was too kind to Tongmo? If you don't mind a little bit of knives in this article, then you can read it, and the writing is very good, very, very good, very, very, very, very good, but I can't accept that Tong Mo may have been wronged, and I am a bit of a thunder leaf. Everyone has their own opinions. Through the comment area, we can also know that this article is really good.

A warm and sadistic fan of the leader [crying] (The author said everything is to let Tong Mo have feelings, so I can't say what the final ending will be like) I cried [almost cried] Miwako is the church manager, Sayuri (Yuriko) is the sister, Kotobuki (Kiyoshi) is the close friend, Chie-chan (Chieri) is the eldest child and later the manager, Xiaomei brother and sister are the "son and daughter", Mr. Owl (Makijuro) is the best friend, Rinhui and Kotonoha are the "mother", the two little butterflies🦋 are the children that he raised, and the piglet is the piglet hahahaha The leader of this article is a compassionate and gentle God✋️😭❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 Your elder brother Ichiro is gay, your elder brother Aotake is gay, your brother Zenitsu is gay, and your elder brother Aotake is also gay (reconciliation before death, souls meet after death😶) OS, I thought that the leader is here, will keep them safe, at least make them human again... I gave the gold beads, little 🈶 gave up🥺

Nice! Tong Mo's character is relatively reductive, not OOC, and his writing style is okay. The process of Tong Mo becoming attached to human beings and gradually understanding and learning emotions is very touching. [Sending Hearts] Looking forward to the follow-up development

It tied the knot in one go, it's really beautiful! The delicate emotions in the article and the step-by-step process of Tongmo feeling emotions are very touching. There are also the unforgettable sisters Sayuri and Miwako [crying] Although it is a little bit of abuse, it is not the kind of abuse that is too "open and closed" (it's hard to express [thinking]). The feeling it brings to me is the kind of faint sadness when reminiscing. The author actually grasps the sad parts very well, and the sadness he brings is not very depressing, and there are some funny parts (such as getting along with Yi Wo Zuo [smirking])