[Single heroine Butterfly Ninja] [Low system presence]
Kitsuki Maru felt that he was probably the worst group among the time travellers.
Apart from giving a novice gift pack at the beginning, the system stopped making any noise after that.
The system did not give powerful power and did not make Kitsuki Maru invincible.
There isn't even language proficiency that comes standard.
I was only given a knife, a piece of clothing, and a cat.
There was a language barrier, and he couldn't kill or rob.
Kitsuki Maru began wandering for half a year.
Until he was taken back to the Butterfly House.
Reader comments
It's okay. The reason for abandoning the game is that the first point is opposite to InuYasha's character. If InuYasha has a bad temper and is free and willful, then the male protagonist is timid and cowardly, and he won't like it. It's too frustrating. The second problem is the perception of strength. I can break the ground with one punch without giving 30% of my strength using the breathing method, but I still have a weak character... The third problem is that I like Kanae more than Shinobu. At this time and when she first appeared, I thought she was the heroine or one of the heroines.
Tomato's backend is really annoying. The book reviews are incomplete. He only shows praise and only good ones!
Readers' dissatisfaction with the plot cannot be seen in the background!
So much so that I only realized in the past few days that so many readers were dissatisfied with the plot.
I am already revising the outline, and I would like to apologize to readers who feel unhappy after reading my book.
Sorry, it's my problem. I habitually oppress the protagonist when writing.
It was the same in the previous books, but no one read the original book, so I wasn't aware of the problem.
Terribly sorry.
The outline has been revised overnight, and there will no longer be any deliberate attempts to mess with the protagonist.
In fact, the outline of the current plot has been revised once. I originally wanted Naruto to clip off Kitsuki Maru's legs and let all the wind go out, but I read the book review that night and revised it in time.
There is some water in the current plot because I am thinking of a new outline.
Please forgive me!
But the updates will not be reduced, there will still be 3 chapters per day.
7000-8000 Words.
Yes, brother, keep writing.
Brother, do you still want to write?
Take a look, just take a look [Like]
Pretty good in fan fiction
I think it's okay
Come on, author, I haven't seen InuYasha and I think your writing is pretty good. If you reveal your identity at the right time, you might be able to write better. Come on.
It's okay. The reason for abandoning the game is that the first point is opposite to InuYasha's character. If InuYasha has a bad temper and is free and willful, then the male protagonist is timid and cowardly, and he won't like it. It's too frustrating. The second problem is the perception of strength. I can break the ground with one punch without giving 30% of my strength using the breathing method, but I still have a weak character... The third problem is that I like Kanae more than Shinobu. At this time and when she first appeared, I thought she was the heroine or one of the heroines.
Tomato's backend is really annoying. The book reviews are incomplete. He only shows praise and only good ones! Readers' dissatisfaction with the plot cannot be seen in the background! So much so that I only realized in the past few days that so many readers were dissatisfied with the plot. I am already revising the outline, and I would like to apologize to readers who feel unhappy after reading my book. Sorry, it's my problem. I habitually oppress the protagonist when writing. It was the same in the previous books, but no one read the original book, so I wasn't aware of the problem. Terribly sorry. The outline has been revised overnight, and there will no longer be any deliberate attempts to mess with the protagonist. In fact, the outline of the current plot has been revised once. I originally wanted Naruto to clip off Kitsuki Maru's legs and let all the wind go out, but I read the book review that night and revised it in time. There is some water in the current plot because I am thinking of a new outline. Please forgive me! But the updates will not be reduced, there will still be 3 chapters per day. 7000-8000 Words.
Yes, brother, keep writing. Brother, do you still want to write?
Take a look, just take a look [Like]
Pretty good in fan fiction
I think it's okay
Come on, author, I haven't seen InuYasha and I think your writing is pretty good. If you reveal your identity at the right time, you might be able to write better. Come on.
It looks good. The author will update it soon.