[Multiple heroines] [Brainless and cool writing] [Justice]
Su Mu was just playing games at home.
I made a complaint about the scumbag male protagonist in the original work, and the next second I was transported to the world of Galaguimu.
The male protagonist Alvin in the original work is the ultimate scumbag.
The plot characters in the game also have very tragic endings.
Just change the ending of each female character so that they can avoid being harmed by scum, and you can get rich rewards.
Unlock the luck stealing system at the beginning!
Constantly stopping the scumbag male protagonist.
Becoming stronger step by step!
Alvin: Why do I always feel like I'm living in the shadow of Sumu?
Su Mu: Brother Ai Wen, you deserve it, and it should be so.
As the plot progresses, the endings of each female character are also changing for the better.
Simple and lovely Dana: "Brother Sumu~ From now on, you have to buy me lollipops every day~"
The spiritual and playful Chloe: "Brother Sumu~ I want a lollipop too~"
The strong and gentle coffee shop assistant, Emilia: "Sumu~Thank you for your efforts... That... Is okay..."
Melissa, a dark-faced goth: "Su Mu~ Accept my confession~"
Introverted and autistic Sakura: "Su Mu... If you can, can you play games with me every day for the rest of your life..."
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Reader comments
It is much better than other agent fanfics. Other similar novels keep the settings of the original heroine as usual, and they are all messed up timelines. It is better to play the game than to read them. This one is so much better, all the original settings are pure,
I would like to give you a little more points. After all, this subject is too easy to block. Overall, it is still very good. There is nothing poisonous about it.
It's pretty good. It reversed the disgusting plot in the original game.
The female characters are basically pure and well received, but the character of the protagonist is not like ordinary people and is terrifying like a socialist successor. The entire plot is directed toward rescue, with absolutely no desire or desire, and is just about completing the system's tasks.
In short, the protagonist gave me the feeling that he came to this world to do a mission, and he was just a passerby with no feelings or lust for NPCs.
You can write more about the interactions and daily life between characters, and slow down appropriately to give a sense of immersion.
When I was playing the game, I really wanted to slap Alvin to death. It was such a waste. He even had to be called an agent to saw a tree. Damn, it's so cool to watch this now. Fight Alvin. Come on, the author. Please update more. I love reading it.
It's very interesting. The plot is past 4/5. The male protagonist in the plot is pure CS [face covering], but the male protagonist in the novel should have won everything if he traveled through time.
Does the protagonist have to eat it? If you have to eat it, I'll watch it
Later, the male protagonist's behavior is both upright and upright, and he becomes a sanctimonious hypocrite. He criticizes others after doing evil things, even though what he does is exactly the same as others.
It's good to watch. I love to watch more, but it's a pity that it's too little and not enough [laughing evilly] I severely punished Alvin, this useless floor tile, and I was so angry that I laughed while playing [punch out]
It's good that the protagonist is very strong, but I wish the protagonist could be more emotionally invested and not really treated as a game. Don't advance mechanically based on system tasks. I feel that it would be better to add more filler and polish to the plot of this kind of article. Come on, author. Although this track is niche, it should not be bad if it is a softer romance novel.
Needless to say, there are multiple female protagonists plus all included. [Sinister smile]
Author, do you only write about agents? Or will we go to other worlds later, such as virtue, carnation, eternal world, etc. [Laughing]
I have seen the latest 72 chapters so far. Overall, this article is a long-running one. The author should not only want to write about a girl, but also want to write something that feels like a redemption story. The premise is that the follow-up can be written well. It is not harmful, but there are few updates. It only has two chapters in one day. Compared with other fan fiction, it deserves five stars.
I must keep writing it down. After I'm done with being an agent, there will be other things, such as eternity, carnations, Mythical Manor, etc., And my college life. Mr. Principal, this should be considered a step forward [laughing evilly]
Supreme Bone has no response🙄
Although, it smells like AI
I've read Chapter 45 so far, and it's not bad. It's much better than other agents. I hope I won't be disappointed.
Good-looking people can be censorious, but they cannot be CS
Agents play for eternity, well received
Sparasi, don't get cold.
Come back to life quickly, Vadasi can do anything!
Come on, author, don't let down the bond between us
Score high points, it looks good and makes my regrets go away.
Needless to say, it's beautiful.
Come on, don't dock your tail
The article is very good, but the update is a bit slow. Why are there no updates now?
The writing still needs practice, but the subject matter is very good, the author is not perverted at heart, and he is broad-minded.
After the author writes about Agents, will he write about eternity?
Not bad, not bad. I was so angry when I played Agent 17 that I didn't even want to take off. You cured our mental state.
It is much better than other agent fanfics. Other similar novels keep the settings of the original heroine as usual, and they are all messed up timelines. It is better to play the game than to read them. This one is so much better, all the original settings are pure,
I would like to give you a little more points. After all, this subject is too easy to block. Overall, it is still very good. There is nothing poisonous about it.
It's pretty good. It reversed the disgusting plot in the original game.
The female characters are basically pure and well received, but the character of the protagonist is not like ordinary people and is terrifying like a socialist successor. The entire plot is directed toward rescue, with absolutely no desire or desire, and is just about completing the system's tasks. In short, the protagonist gave me the feeling that he came to this world to do a mission, and he was just a passerby with no feelings or lust for NPCs. You can write more about the interactions and daily life between characters, and slow down appropriately to give a sense of immersion.
When I was playing the game, I really wanted to slap Alvin to death. It was such a waste. He even had to be called an agent to saw a tree. Damn, it's so cool to watch this now. Fight Alvin. Come on, the author. Please update more. I love reading it.
It's very interesting. The plot is past 4/5. The male protagonist in the plot is pure CS [face covering], but the male protagonist in the novel should have won everything if he traveled through time.
Does the protagonist have to eat it? If you have to eat it, I'll watch it Later, the male protagonist's behavior is both upright and upright, and he becomes a sanctimonious hypocrite. He criticizes others after doing evil things, even though what he does is exactly the same as others.
It's good to watch. I love to watch more, but it's a pity that it's too little and not enough [laughing evilly] I severely punished Alvin, this useless floor tile, and I was so angry that I laughed while playing [punch out]
It's good that the protagonist is very strong, but I wish the protagonist could be more emotionally invested and not really treated as a game. Don't advance mechanically based on system tasks. I feel that it would be better to add more filler and polish to the plot of this kind of article. Come on, author. Although this track is niche, it should not be bad if it is a softer romance novel.
Needless to say, there are multiple female protagonists plus all included. [Sinister smile]
Author, do you only write about agents? Or will we go to other worlds later, such as virtue, carnation, eternal world, etc. [Laughing]
I have seen the latest 72 chapters so far. Overall, this article is a long-running one. The author should not only want to write about a girl, but also want to write something that feels like a redemption story. The premise is that the follow-up can be written well. It is not harmful, but there are few updates. It only has two chapters in one day. Compared with other fan fiction, it deserves five stars.
I must keep writing it down. After I'm done with being an agent, there will be other things, such as eternity, carnations, Mythical Manor, etc., And my college life. Mr. Principal, this should be considered a step forward [laughing evilly]
Supreme Bone has no response🙄
Although, it smells like AI
I've read Chapter 45 so far, and it's not bad. It's much better than other agents. I hope I won't be disappointed.
Good-looking people can be censorious, but they cannot be CS
Agents play for eternity, well received
Sparasi, don't get cold.
Come back to life quickly, Vadasi can do anything!
Come on, author, don't let down the bond between us
Score high points, it looks good and makes my regrets go away.
Needless to say, it's beautiful.
Come on, don't dock your tail
The article is very good, but the update is a bit slow. Why are there no updates now?
The writing still needs practice, but the subject matter is very good, the author is not perverted at heart, and he is broad-minded.
After the author writes about Agents, will he write about eternity?
Not bad, not bad. I was so angry when I played Agent 17 that I didn't even want to take off. You cured our mental state.
Looks pretty good
It looks good but the author is a bit short