[Multiple Heroines] [No-Brainer Power Fantasy] [Justice Served]
Su Mu was just playing a video game at home.
He made a snarky remark about the scumbag male lead in the original story, and the next second he transmigrated into the world of Galagimu.
The male lead in the original story, Ai Wen, is the ultimate scumbag.
The game’s female characters also meet truly tragic endings.
All he has to do is change their fates and save them from being hurt by the scumbag to earn generous rewards.
He unlocks the Fortune-Stealing System from the start!
He keeps thwarting the scumbag male lead.
And grows stronger step by step!
Ai Wen: “Why do I always feel like I’m living in Su Mu’s shadow?”
Su Mu: “Brother Ai Wen, you got what you deserved. That’s how it should be.”
As the story progresses, the female characters’ fates begin to take a turn for the better.
The sweet and innocent Dana: “Brother Su Mu~ You have to buy me lollipops every day from now on~”
The lively and spirited Chloe: “Brother Su Mu~ I want lollipops too~”
The strong, gentle café worker, Emilia: “Su Mu~ Thank you for everything you’ve done... Um... would it be okay if...”
The scheming goth, Melissa: “Su Mu~ Accept my confession~”
The shy, withdrawn Sakura: “Su Mu... If you don’t mind, could you play games with me every day for the rest of our lives...”
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It is much better than other agent fanfics. Other similar novels keep the settings of the original heroine as usual, and they are all messed up timelines. It is better to play the game than to read them. This one is so much better, all the original settings are pure,
I would like to give you a little more points. After all, this subject is too easy to block. Overall, it is still very good. There is nothing poisonous about it.
It's pretty good. It reversed the disgusting plot in the original game.
The female characters are basically pure and well received, but the character of the protagonist is not like ordinary people and is terrifying like a socialist successor. The entire plot is directed toward rescue, with absolutely no desire or desire, and is just about completing the system's tasks. In short, the protagonist gave me the feeling that he came to this world to do a mission, and he was just a passerby with no feelings or lust for NPCs. You can write more about the interactions and daily life between characters, and slow down appropriately to give a sense of immersion.
When I was playing the game, I really wanted to slap Alvin to death. It was such a waste. He even had to be called an agent to saw a tree. Damn, it's so cool to watch this now. Fight Alvin. Come on, the author. Please update more. I love reading it.
It's very interesting. The plot is past 4/5. The male protagonist in the plot is pure CS 🤦, but the male protagonist in the novel should have won everything if he traveled through time.
Does the protagonist have to eat it? If you have to eat it, I'll watch it Later, the male protagonist's behavior is both upright and upright, and he becomes a sanctimonious hypocrite. He criticizes others after doing evil things, even though what he does is exactly the same as others.
It's good to watch. I love to watch more, but it's a pity that it's too little and not enough 😏 I severely punished Alvin, this useless floor tile, and I was so angry that I laughed while playing [punch out]
It's good that the protagonist is very strong, but I wish the protagonist could be more emotionally invested and not really treated as a game. Don't advance mechanically based on system tasks. I feel that it would be better to add more filler and polish to the plot of this kind of article. Come on, author. Although this track is niche, it should not be bad if it is a softer romance novel.
Author, do you only write about agents? Or will we go to other worlds later, such as virtue, carnation, eternal world, etc. 🤭