Identity V: Off Track

I really like the big story 😢, whether it is the plot rhythm, character creation or the atmosphere of the text, it is very touching. . . Every dialogue is natural and not stiff. The character's personality is established as soon as he opens his mouth. Each person's thoughts and psychological characteristics are delicate and real 😢 😢 😢 It is particularly immersive to read. It really feels like seeing the characters acting and talking and thinking in front of their eyes. The plot connection is smooth and comfortable, and the transition is just right without delay. I really understand what the teacher said about bringing the characters to life. This is one of the few fifth fan fictions I have read that is so good. It is that the understanding of the characters is a bit too "getting to know each other for the sake of getting to know each other." Especially the part in the hidden prison (don't scold me [petrified]), but overall it's very beautiful. The author is awesome. It's so beautiful that my old Feng Feng is flying [Admiration]

I really like it!!! The writing style is very delicate, and the description of the environment and the action are all very detailed!!! The foreshadowing is also very good, and I am full of curiosity. If I insist on saying it, I will wait for a big update, which will be heart-breaking and uncomfortable [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

The description of the battle is very good. It makes me feel as if the battle scenes are right in front of me. The development between CP is very interesting. Yu Kan Yuan Yuan Jin has a symbiotic relationship with Kan Kan, so Yuan Yuan Jin will try his best to keep Kan Kan alive. No matter what the cost, he is the Norton who wants to live the most. Hidden Prisoner Alva and Luca both thought they had despicable emotions that had been buried in their hearts for many years. However, it was not until they expressed their feelings that they discovered that they had already liked each other, but they had just missed each other for many years. Funeral. Xiang lost his emotions and memories for Yueyue. Joseph thought that as long as Aesop could recall his memories, his emotions would come back, but this was not the case. Joseph painfully and humbly hoped that Aesop could fall in love with him again. It was very delicious and very good. I hope the ending is he Jie Mai, the two strengths are absolute tacit understanding and strength!!! When Naib's self-awareness and program instructions collided wildly, he was able to gradually regain his consciousness because of Jack's words "You are the one I love." Jack would not be afraid of any threats when Naib was on the verge of collapse, and wanted to protect him even if all his blood was shed. Everyone is working hard to keep everyone alive!!! The writing is really good, but the food is a bit jarring. They fought with all their strength in every battle, which made me always think that maybe we would be separated after this battle, but you all survived strong, which is really great 😢 So white, who are you? The group portrait depicts them as energetic and passionate. How come they are written so well? 💕

The teacher's writing style is really delicate. Why is there no rating?

😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 It's so delicious, I love it (≧∇≦)ﾉThe emotional description is so delicate🥰

Very thunderous and beautiful

The author's writing is great. I haven't seen such detailed writing in a long time. 👍👍👍❤️

Super nice (true and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure, substantial book review)