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The subject matter of this book is good, but the expressiveness is not enough. If 50 is the upper limit of emotion. The performance of 50 should be as enthusiastic and sincere as the performance of 100, but it is too green and bland, just like the situation where the normal favorability level is not full. I think it should be more like 35 and above. Above friends, if lovers are not satisfied, they will even take the initiative to engage in some ambiguous behavior, but there is no such thing. But above 40, I think they should be the sweeter daily type of lovers. Above 45, they should be able to live together. 50 Is nothing to do with each other. Above 50, I think they belong to a category that does not belong to the normal range, which is a bit abnormal. One is a yandere, and the other is a licking dog. The older you are in your fifties, the more serious the condition becomes. Also, the situation in the novel is not serious enough. Since it is a novel world, we don't see the so-called bullshit (female channel has this situation) and the overly classic pretense and slap in the face (male channel has this situation). However, there are not many and there is no sense of separation or even the inability to take on the role. It turns out that is the case in the novel. It struck me as a kind of youth romance novel that has gone too far with social elements and added elements from other channels. The above are only my suggestions and personal opinions, and there is no malice. However, I think the subject matter is quite good, and the characters and handling methods are also quite good, so that people will not feel that the poisonous spots and green spots are real.

It's very good to watch. There are a lot of foreshadowings at the beginning, which may make you a little confused. Except for the portrayal of the first few women, which may have some problems (because there is not much description of their "things"), the subsequent women are all well portrayed. Except for the lack of emotion, there are no other problems. When encountering a bad plot, the author will listen to advice and change it.

Kowtow first and admit your mistake [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart] The problem mentioned in the comments is poisonous. I changed it when I saw it. I'm really sorry to disturb you adults. This is my first time writing a novel. I was really not fluent with these at first. Please give me more love [cry][cry][cry]

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It's okay. Shuhuang recommends reading it. It happens to be New Year's Eve today. I wish you all a happy New Year [Like] [Note]

It doesn't have any major drawbacks, but it does have a few drawbacks. Overall, it's good to watch.

It looks good, write more, I want to see one dozen six (maybe six)

More and more people are reading this book, I hope it will get better and better

The author writes well, is there multiple female protagonists? Or is there a fake harem with only one female protagonist and the male protagonist together, and the rest are just pulling each other?

It's really good and looks good. The logic is good and I don't see any bad points yet. The plot is pretty good and interesting.

Skip the process and talk about the results

Ordinary high-quality grain and grass.

Not bad, a bit of fun

Still evil Shennong Jie Jie Jie

I would like to encourage the new author. There are many problems but they can be corrected.

50? Hajizuo what are you doing?

It's quite interesting, I think it's okay

The subject matter is good and the writing is good.

There are a few paragraphs that are not very well written, but overall it is quite good and worth reading.

Not bad, it feels like an urban sweet novel I checked and the results are pretty good, 170,000 words, 130,000 currently being read, excellent quality.

The writing is quite interesting, I recommend it.

It's quite good, the logic is clear, and the plot is well written. It's worth following.