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This is probably the best novel of the same type that I have seen. First of all, the relationship between the brother and sister rises very quickly, and this rise in emotion is logical and reasonable. The emotional description is also very smooth. In novels of this type that I have read before, the male protagonist will try his best to hide the identity of the time traveler, and the younger sister will not be able to see through it. Then, while the male protagonist is acting and showing kindness, the younger sister will be scared and have random thoughts. Then the two sides started to pull together. I came in to watch you two pull together? This novel abandons these. Although the male protagonist wants to pretend to be the original protagonist at the beginning, the sister is not stupid and sees through it directly. Taking this as an opportunity, the sister's rapid rise in emotion has reasonable enough prerequisites. In addition, the author has a good grasp of emotional description, with step-by-step and foreshadowing, giving me a good sense of substitution.

Very good, the emotions are written very delicately. The author also has a lot of knowledge [laughs crookedly] You are not writing an autobiography, are you? However, I think there is something wrong with the title of the novel. At the beginning, I just wanted to read it casually to pass the time, because I thought the name was a joke, but the more I read, the more addicted I became [crying] [crying] [crying] I want a sweet story [crying] [crying]

This book is extraordinary. It's very good-looking, and definitely not brainless. There are many parts of the battle of wits, and it's fun where it should be. Redemption runs in both directions. The female protagonist is very smart, and the "male protagonist"'s "return to evil" is easily recognized. All I can say is that it's very sweet. It's such a sweet story. I really like it. It's so good and I love to read it. I finished it in one go. I hope it will be updated soon. Personally I feel it's at least 8.0.

Let's talk about the conclusion first. It's a high-quality, top-quality, super-large cup of the same type. Both the foreshadowing recycling and the logical arrangement are in place. Don't run away just because you are suspected of wearing something. The writing is also the best I've ever seen, and it's very comfortable to read. And Lao Zuo said it will be he, so don't worry. [Top post]

This book is quite good. It has a sense of proportion and politeness. To be honest, the character and behavior of the protagonist of a book are partly reflected by the author. The author also has a very good outlook on life. All in all, it's a bad thing.

I think how a book should be reflected from some tiny details. We always say that the true story is revealed in the subtleties. Ordinary details are the most boring and can best shape the situation and reflect the power of writing. In my opinion, this book is a very delicate book. It has foreshadowing, turning points, and ups and downs. It may not be suitable for some people's feelings. In popular terms, it is not that enjoyable, so it is criticized as a poisonous point. But I think this is exactly where the writing is good. It is a book that is refreshing at first glance. It is destined to be enjoyable to read, but it is easy for people to guess the direction of the subsequent plot, which is not conducive to the long-term development of the book. In a sense, I think this book is a very spiritual book, with a fireworks atmosphere. The author said that he was a little stressed by the criticism, and he understands it. After all, a book or a work may not have any feelings for the people who read it, but it is indeed very important to the person who wrote it. From a reader's perspective, I feel very comfortable reading this book. I chose to speak out just because I don't want to see such an excellent work ruined in the hands of some people who I think are shameless. Similarly, I believe that words are powerful. Although I don't know how many people will see my comments, at the end I still wish the author's works will get better and better. I wish you the best and see you at the top. No, I've written so much, why can't it be considered a long review? I read it too fast and I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading it, it felt like I was sucked. Please give me two more chapters. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body [crying] I don't know if any of you have read the New Romance of the Three Kingdoms. This author's writing is so good. I felt so happy when I wrote it. It suddenly dawned on me.

It's really good-looking, the characters have delicate emotions, and the plot is not abrupt. In terms of plot, the characters, whether they are decent or villains, all have their own reasons and positions. I just don't know why the score is not high. I think there are a lot of updates?

This is a really good read. The plot is engaging enough. It can be called a very good novel. Even though it only scored an 8. I think it can still be rated as a nine. The male protagonist is also very cautious in doing things. Xia Tingwan is very cute. It is a highly recommended book. Xia Tingwan is the best! Let me see it!

For me, who is used to reading villain and killing novels, this is a rare book of fairy grass. The two of them are like each other's salvation in the dark night. The bodies of people who read it are warm. I haven't recommended a novel in a few years. This is really good. I don't know if the author is a man or a woman. It has the excitement of male videos and the details of high-end stories, and the delicacy and warmth of female videos. Show them all to me [cool]

Objectively speaking, it is a very good romantic comedy novel. It makes people want to laugh at their aunt and roll on the bed. There is no poisonous point, although there is a bit of coincidence in Laifu, but it is a romantic comedy novel after all. The interaction between the male protagonist and his sister is very interesting, and there seems to be no sign of unfinishing at present. The male protagonist has also laid the foundation for how to deal with his old club. The characters are all very normal, and there is no dialogue that does not fit the character settings. The novel was written with the brain in mind. The first 70 chapters alone can almost be said to have a high score of 9.7 Or above. Although I don't know why there are so few comments and views, I am looking forward to the author's updates. I also hope that more book lovers can read this novel. [Like] I have finished reading the 100 chapters currently updated, and it has lived up to my expectations. The main line of love is intertwined with the hidden line of getting out of the quagmire. There should be no problem with the main line of love. There are no ethical problems in the first place. The male protagonist only needs to overcome his psychology. The heroine's yandere is not easy to write, so I hope the author will be careful when writing. As for the hidden plot, it only needs to be satisfactory. The author should remember that this is a romantic comedy novel. But for now, the hidden plot is very well written. The male protagonist has changed his mind and became a police undercover, which has laid the foundation for another two years. The advantages are huge and there should be nothing wrong with it. I had anticipated the success of this novel.

If you like Riqing, you can finish it after reading 163. What follows is a classic urban bloody novel. This is the best novel of the same type that I have read. The male and female protagonists have online IQs, and there is not too much nonsense. Of course, it is better to lose your mind when looking at the details. Don't overthink it, it is just a refreshing novel. The author's writing style is very good, the emotional description is delicate, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. It once made me think that he was a female author. After reading the comments, I thought it was right. It triggered my brain. That's why I emphasized not to dwell on it. Family members should stop when they see the 163 photos. The rest will be bloody. The entertainment industry and wealthy backgrounds all come out.

Qingqing Zijin, my heart is leisurely. Even if I don't go, will Zi Ning have no heir? Qingqingzi wears it, and I think about it for a long time. Even if I don't go, Zi Ning won't come. Frog Fun, the author's writing style is incomparable [Admiration], and it is considered a breath of fresh air among tomato novels. The emotions are written very delicately, and there are a lot of foreshadowings (one of which will be used later). Seeing Xia Tingwan and Lin Jianshen happily and healthily together and getting married, I, the pure love warrior, fell to the ground, so great! [Crying] The heroine Wan Wan is smart, affectionate (even half-way yandere, but in the end reason and the instinct to love him are restrained), brave (finally took the initiative to confess her love, and got a), so perfect; the male protagonist Jianshen has been lurking in the enemy (just to get rid of the sins of the original owner in the past, and to live a more innocent life in the future), protect Wan Wan, raise Wan Wan well, clear-headed, strong-willed, good at cooking, acting, and martial arts, he is also a peerless good man! The other supporting characters are also written with flesh and blood, including Laifu (the Scottish shepherd dog, but unfortunately he has no role later), Lao Li, Xu Yan, Zhong Ran... They are really well written. It even had the protagonist of the previous book make a cameo in the book, and even the old knight in Ghost Rider transformed into a new rider for the last time (sorry, that may not be an appropriate description). I stayed up late for several days to watch it, and watched it at eight in the morning... It was so good that I finished it without even realizing it. There are still some poisonous points, such as when the original protagonist Tou Qi competes with the protagonist for control of the body, but the rest is really not poisonous, and the flaws cannot be concealed. Finally, it is a pity that Wan Wan and the children who have seen each other are not written. I really want to see the two of them take their children to meet again the people, things, and places they have experienced, and summarize and reminisce. [Almost crying]

I picked it up tonight and read it in one night. It was quite good. The author created the characters very well and the description of life is also very realistic. The author's writing style is also good. Some of the plots in the book are also unexpected. Unlike other authors, the younger sister cannot tell that her brother has changed. There are no shortcomings except that there are some plots where the protagonist scares his sister from time to time and the awkward fight between the protagonist and his original self. I don't know how the author will write about the relationship between the protagonist and his sister. Just don't let it end badly. Come on, author (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

I should be the first to comment, hahaha. Hajixing's writing style is as good as ever and is of high quality. The story is still a bit short now, but it's already worth looking forward to the follow-up progress. With a little effort from the elder brother, he is like a brother and a father, and then realistically presents the most difficult side of the people at the bottom. The picture of struggling in the face of adversity is beautiful. The heartache for this sister's suffering and the guilt of the original person's actions, coupled with the attitude of wanting to escape at first and then thinking about changing, are really well written. (It also left a foreshadowing of returning home after earning enough 1 million. I am looking forward to my sister's reaction to her brother's change of attitude in the future) Then on the sister's side, first of all, she is a poor guy. The original male protagonist is really not a thing. Then he looked like a smart little kid, and saw that his brother had changed his core, but he didn't tell him, and then he began to be curious about this changed brother, and tried to accept him as he is now. So I am looking forward to the entanglement she will have when her brother really turns bad in the future. In fact, there are still many ideas to say, but Hajixing's ideas are still unclear, so I'll keep them for now. In short, I personally give Hajixing a five-star praise, and by the way, I urge Hajixing to update [laughing][laughing]

The writing is very good. I personally think that the process of the sister's falling in love with her brother can be lengthened a little longer, with more stories to support the story from hell ~ changing people ~ hope ~ heaven ~ falling in love ~ firm idea... The score should be above 8.5, And the subject matter can be limited.

The author's writing is okay. First of all, the protagonist is not a coward. This is the most important. Of course, being able to fight is one thing. Secondly, the protagonist is not bad in character and will adapt to situations when encountering them. I hope there won't be any bloody plot, and it is also clear that there will be a single female protagonist. Come on, author!

Pure love, no bullshit, no rotten peach blossoms, no embarrassment, double purity. This book is very good, if I must describe it. The emotional line in the early stage is like the tenacious plum blossoms in autumn and winter, restrained, a little bit thorny and icy. In the mid-term, it is like bamboo in peak season, growing quickly and steadily. In the later stage, it looks like roses in early summer, gorgeous and beautiful. It's just that my love-related mysophobia is too strong. After watching it, I couldn't accept time travel. The male protagonist is very good, but it's a pity that the male protagonist took the body of a scumbag and used a scumbag's body, which made me feel grudge. The book is good, but I am... Not good.

The gospel of sister control, the mutual redemption of two people is really beautiful. The battle of wits and coincidence are also well designed, with minor flaws but innocuous. Especially the anti-school bullying section I just finished reading, it was really satisfying. It's rare to see such an appetizing treatment of bullying. Very sweet, highly recommended.

This book is not like other books of the same type where you have to pay off the debt of the original owner, and you have to be suspected by the heroine and then be accepted. The heroine of this book is very smart, she can directly guess her identity, and she also decisively recognizes her own heart. She is not a sluggish person who has two strong characters. Although it is relatively late to officially get together, it is not as procrastinating as other books, and it develops normally. Both the male and female protagonists have long mouths and cannot hold back. The other line is also very well written, very logical and not too abrupt. The author will also give explanations so that you won't be confused. Ram! The ending is not rushed and natural, and the foreshadowing is well done. There are no big knives in the whole book, so don't worry

I am a military commander and not good at speaking. To be honest, after reading so many books, I have struck gold, but I have also eaten a lot. There are only a handful of books that I can write reviews on, but this book made me make an exception. When I finished reading this book, I was in a comfortable zone, like drinking a cup of tea. It is very light, but it quenches my thirst. The aftertaste is very comfortable, not as bitter as strong tea, and not as bland as boiled water. Personally, I feel that the emotional description in this book is the biggest highlight. It is very delicate, just like eating a piece of home-made cold cake. There is no industrial saccharin that is deliberately sweet in ai online articles, nor is there a large amount of bitterness in so-called sadistic articles. Instead, it melts in the mouth and is sweet with moderate sweetness, which makes people happy and not greasy. The most important thing is that it is not too long. It is a medium-length web article with more than 210 chapters. It has just the right weight. There is no suffocating feeling like chasing a long web text, and there is no sense of loss like a short web text that is exquisite but not full. The length is just right, and one bite is enough to linger on for a long time. Of course there are flaws, but rough jade has to be polished, and I think the same is true for books. I can feel that the author spent a lot of thought on this book, and created a flawed but still comfortable work for himself and the readers. I think this is enough. In the current era of a bunch of industrial quantitative products, it takes courage and cost to write a book like this by hand. It's good. At least the positive emotional value this book brings to me is enough.

In my opinion, the writing is very good. It completely depicts the original appearance of human nature and life. The writing style is really good. Although some parts may still have no clue to me, or may be foreshadowing later, but it does not affect the overall picture of this novel at all. The characters are fully fleshed out and real enough.

After reading this book, I felt that the reality is somewhat unreal. The real thing is that the sentimentality of love and the struggle of human nature are vividly written. The unreal thing is that there is no such happiness in reality, but is full of all kinds of regrets and sadness. The love between Lin Jianshen and Xia Tingwan really touched me a lot. From the initial "mutual acting skills", to the later mutual struggles, and finally to the two-way mutual acceptance, there were pain points and laughter points, and they all left a lot of touches in my heart. Overall, I was deeply moved by the struggle of the male protagonist in the quagmire and the unrelenting support of feminism in this book. The author's writing style is also very good. He uses a lot of verses and uses them just right. This book is really good and highly recommended. Finally, I hope the author can write more articles like this. I really want to read [Blowing Kiss]. I wish the author and everyone a smooth life, success in their studies!

Long live the people! We must have writing style, we must have depth, we must be knowledgeable, we must be knowledgeable. The career line is very serious because there are too many small details, which makes me a detail person really enjoy it. The emotional scenes are even better. Don't make you laugh, Sister Xia. You, Sister Yaowang, will lock you in the basement later and you won't be happy about it. But your hero is eager to pamper his sister and wife. It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality product. There's no writing, no routine templates, just love and understanding. Long live the great people! A perfect book worth reading by anyone

It's really good. I've read similar genres before, but this one has more delicate emotions and well-developed characters. The plot sometimes makes me get involved in it for no reason. This book is still not a good book. I saw it accidentally, and the author didn't have a bad name [laughs], so when I saw this book, my first impression was really good. I highly recommend it (not a compliment), it is short and concise, it reminds me of the book [Send Hearts][Send Hearts] by Little Butterfly

A very good book. There is the author's self-evaluation on the last page of the book, which is quite objective. If you want to get into the trap, you can read it first. There is basically nothing to say about writing, foreshadowing, plot, and character creation. These are the basic characteristics of a good novel. The author has a very good advantage: he knows how to detail the story well. In the closing chapter, the author knew that he had not written an emotional scene for too long, so he deliberately shortened the battles in several chapters. It can be said that the pacing was very well controlled. Another point is that the author can write from the vulgar to the elegant. This is different from those authors who write relatively obscure fragments and can only publish them privately. This does not mean that these authors are not good at receiving benefits, but it is also very difficult to write the fragments in this book that can be published and can be understood by readers instantly and are relatively literary. As for the poisonous point, I feel that the fantasy part about fighting each other is too strong, and it is not appropriate to put it in this kind of urban emotional article. The author also writes about the operating logic of gray and black areas such as casinos and electronic fraud parks, which is very realistic. Reading the novel and deeply feeling the warning effect of those people sinking step by step and ruining their families and their lives is far more useful than reading those slogans every day.

Pavilion Master Da Da's brushwork is delicate, and the male and female protagonists in his paintings have rich and colorful emotions. Among them, the confrontation between Wan Wan and Ah Shen was exquisite. Recalling that Wanwan and Ah Shen were on a date in a tourist town, Wanwan transformed into a beauty in Tang suit and danced for Ah Shen the dance that was only for him, and sang the song Zheng Fengzi Jin that was only for him to listen to. Alas, who is not confused! When Wanwan mustered up the courage to show off her love to Ah Shen, the feelings between the two were uncontrollably amplified and then collided fiercely. At this climax of the plot, my heart also melted - who can resist not liking Wanwan, this cute little kitten, I love you too Wanwan [send heartfelt message]. Thanks to the author for allowing me to experience the youth of having such a beautiful girl from Ah Shen's perspective!

Highly recommended. I think the author arranged for Lin Jianshen, the heroine to be drugged to death, to take revenge himself. It's a great setting. Let Lin Jianshen no longer be Lin Jianshen, but another independent person. Two little bitter gourds make a plus from a minus.

A rare work. The logic is clear, the thinking is reasonable, and the foreshadowing is appropriate. I personally think that a good work does not introduce new settings arbitrarily, and what the characters do at a certain moment can be explained based on previous developments. In this book, there is almost no situation where the character's abilities are forcibly promoted or reduced in order to write a certain plot; in other words, the author seems to have constructed a world rather than performing a puppet show. At the end, the author was worried that the language style of this book would be a little off-putting, but the actual reading experience was completely different. Quoting the right content in the right situation is obviously the icing on the cake (and the content quoted should not exceed the scope of high school Chinese, so it is quite restrained). In other texts, the meaning is clear and the sentences are fluent. To say something a little offensive, there are many authors on 🍅 who lack sufficient writing skills, and it is easy for problems such as inexpressive words or even wrong sentences and misuse of words to occur. Great to see this level of writing here. Finally, the author's attention to detail is wonderful. Regardless of the many foreshadowings and recycling, just take the plot of Lin as a chef, filming a short play, and Yu going through OA approval. Either he has really understood it himself, or he has actually engaged in related work. It still feels the same, the world written by the author seems to have actually happened.

I haven't seen such delicate writing in a long time. As the author said, there are indeed some flaws in the plot of this book, and some plots still need to be polished. However, if there are a thousand readers, there will be a thousand Hamlets. The shortcomings that the author admits to in some plots will not be seen in the eyes of readers. It may be more in line with my prediction of the development of the story. In short, this book is a good book with no flaws. The writing style is really eye-catching, the rhythm of the plot is also moderate, and the description of emotions is more detailed. It is easy for people to empathize. I hope the author will get better and better.

Let's talk about the key points first: urban, pseudo-bone, gangster, undercover, the main plot is romance, but there are also many other contents (please mind straying in), some sweet and some cruel. At present, Chapter 147 has not really come together (the male protagonist does not admit it), but the author said it will soon. Some of the descriptions are highly literary (those who mind may be mistaken). The heroine is super detailed and super smart. Except for the male protagonist being a bit silly in front of the female protagonist, his IQ is online in other scenes. Advantages: The writing is delicate and beautiful. Compared with the same setting book, it is more detailed and beautiful, and the development speed is more reasonable. There are a few scenes where the heroine does some killer moves (especially the dancing scene). Controversial points (not to mention the shortcomings, everyone has their own opinions, and I think it is pretty good): It is not all about sweet love and daily life, and some other urban things are added. Some of the content is highly literary and some readers may not like it. It's said to be a time travel, but the original character's personality wasn't completely dead at the beginning (actually, it's logical, and it's considered a foreshadowing), but it didn't take many chapters before he died. The female protagonist was bullied after returning to school (but she fought back, and the male protagonist ended up) In Chapters 160 and 161, they are finally together. The two people's confession to each other is the most beautiful. They rush to each other in both directions and are also redeemed in both directions. Both of them can't let go of each other. In fact, they can't let go. He is the sunshine and she is also the dew.