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The idea is good, and it can even be said to be very innovative. The detailed settings of the game are also remarkable, and there are no obvious loopholes. The shortcoming is the lack of writing. For example, the plot of Aotai Line is actually very enjoyable to pick up and re-read, but the writing feels a bit lacking. It feels like it is not enough. It should not be too detailed and written too much. When it comes to the place where readers should feel happy, it is not written in place. The author must insist that writing can be done, and persistence is very important.

Hao Kan, the writing is very interesting, and the protagonist is no longer a human being, and his physical fitness is still in the human category. There is also the mechanism of the Secret Garden, which encourages players to work as a team and encourage players to save people. Players (if any) will be more united and will try their best to rescue mission targets or fellow travelers. It is very comfortable to watch along the way.

I love you very much, the author [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart], but now I am a little embarrassed. I forgot to give such a beautiful and handsome author a big review before [grievance] Although objectively speaking, the author's book is as big as other people's... What is objectively speaking, objectively speaking? All I need to know is that I like the author's books very much [laughs][laughs][laughs][sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

Must be five stars! ! ! The writing style is indeed getting better, and the plot is not boring at all. The personal chapters of the cave diving are actually written in a way that makes people feel. It is the kind that if you like it, you will like it very much, and if you don't like it, you can skip it. Oh, I personally like this genre very much, but the most touching thing is the author himself. He is really a very good person and has a great personality. It can be seen that he really reads the book reviews carefully. For example, at the beginning, some people said that the mudslide chapter at the beginning felt a bit immature, so he revised the new story very carefully, but it is written by Personally, I feel that the new story is not as good as the old story, so I made a few suggestions. Of course, I didn't expect to change it, just to express some of my personal thoughts. But I was very attentive. Not only did I reply seriously, but I also quickly revised it back to the original chapter. There were so many 10 pictures, and it was not sloppy at all. This track is also unique, and the protagonist's performance is not unbearable. In addition to the protagonist's highlight, the others also have their own charms. Although they are all temporary teammates, it still makes people feel very touching. But I can't imagine what it will be like after the nine-star mission has begun. [Thinking] In short, the writing is very, very good. You have to work hard, you must work hard, and the most important thing is not to give up [love] [love] [love] Oh, by the way, and this is one of the few books that is not toxic to me. The story of the protagonist in real life will not make people feel funny or annoying. The girls in it are also normal and great girls, especially the protagonist's sister. God knows this is the first time I have seen a novel. How touched is the normal male protagonist's sister in it [Blow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss] I really believe me, the male protagonist's sister is also very good, and the sister will not participate in these dangerous things, she is just an ordinary girl who studies very well, is very smart, and is very sensible. , That kind of family where all the relatives are normal and loving [love] [love] [love]

The beginning wasn't great, but the author is getting better and better, and the updates are very exciting👍🏻

After watching it, I feel like I watched another episode of Secret Garden😋😋😋

It's nice to watch. I'm happy to fight against natural disasters like this. By the way, can the author post a picture? It would be better if there is a schematic diagram. Oh, yes, there is another question I forgot to ask. Is this article free of CP? So far it looks like, hopefully

The delicacy of the story and the relaxed rhythm of the narrative show that the author is really writing the book with heart and is fully capable of completing it. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep writing with this quality. Oh, I should [cry]

It's a good book, but I only liked the review of The Secret Garden.

A very good book on extreme sports! ! The plot is promoted through constant adventure tasks, which is not boring at all. The author updates very quickly, writes very rigorously, daily life is not boring in the middle, and the pace is appropriate and not procrastinating. I also have a good grasp of cool points. I really like the plot of the protagonist heroically saving people in the transition from daily life. Big cheers for the author!

Save money: Highly recommended! ! Very high quality article. The low rating may be due to the new book, and I heard that if the Tomato rating is too high, the book will be restricted. So don't look at the score, brothers, I've appraised it, don't miss it if you pass by. Now that I have read the diving chapter, I can't describe my feelings at the moment. This well-written and well-conceived article has been elevated to a spiritual realm in the diving chapter. The stories before the diving chapter are in line with what I have always known. Most of the victims were caused by blind self-confidence, lack of awe of nature, and so-called inspiration. Only at the last moment of their lives, they will reflect on their suicide behavior. Unfortunately, it is often too late. But the mission of the diving chapter tells about another special group of people who are "seeking death". Their behavior is indeed reckless, but what I see in them is not irresponsible willfulness and lack of thinking about their own lives and actions, but... Love, a kind of courage that can risk one's life for the one you love. People who die in pursuit of excitement often have only endless regrets left in their last moments. They cry bitterly, pray humblely, and swear to never make mistakes again. But unfortunately, there is no regret medicine in life. When they made that reckless and life-threatening decision, everything was already doomed. But in the diving chapter, people who died in pursuit of their love, no matter when they were in danger or when they knew death was imminent, their hearts were peaceful, and their love made them not afraid of death. This is also the first time that I hope that these people seeking death can survive. Unfortunately, there is no miracle in life, but fortunately, love allows life to continue.

Regardless of the rating, I may have seen hallucinations when I read the book. I remember that in the morning, my teammates were beaten away by the high tide. How come it turned into a mudslide at night, my teammates also changed, and the writing also changed. It was scary.

The author is simply a model in the author world, a superman, and inspiration for updates comes uninvited.

The setting is very novel and suitable for those who have watched Secret Garden. The author may want to show a thrilling, thrilling nature adventure, coupled with some mystery. However, the text in the first few dozen chapters seems not to be expressive enough, and it does not have a sense of immersion, and it does not look like a lively character. It is recommended to use more useful descriptions to make the characters' emotional fluctuations more obvious, their personalities more prominent, and the surrounding environment more atmospheric and surprising. The safety of the adventure lies in the equipment and personnel and other plans, but the fun of the adventure lies in the unseen scenery, unique people, smart and special animals, wonderful and unknown plants, the twists and turns accompanied by dangerous experiences, your own emotional ups and downs and various responses.

Well written👍It's a pity that there are too few comments in the chapters. It's like watching a video but there are no comments, or cooking without adding MSG, which is almost meaningless. Write more about the protagonist saving people, I love watching, Legendary Hiker [laughing]

Very well written! There are flaws but there's also shine Let's talk about the flaws first. The writing of Aotai Line is indeed a bit bland. The first reviewer mentioned this issue. The second one is that there is no plot to return to reality after the cave dive chapter. There is no real-world exercise, but you keep buying abilities in the system. The Flash Is Cave Diving chapter is very, very, very good! Hearts of Stone, in particular, made me cry several times. Other than that, the chapters are also pretty good and deserve five stars.

Your rating is A- Your previous writing is relatively immature, but your subject matter is relatively novel, and there are no problems with your later writing, and there are quite a few more, which is pretty good. The rating was changed to A+ (finally guaranteed😋😋) Reasons: 1. Your handling of details is much better than others. I also prefer this kind of text that has a certain sense of reality. 2. The following story is based on real events, and at the same time adds storytelling. The group portraits are very well written, and the characters depicted are relatively three-dimensional. In other words, the following story is no longer limited to survival. I really like the personal chapter of the diving story. It's really well written. Although you were weak in the first few chapters, your subsequent chapters made up for it, giving it an A+.

The Secret Garden series is everywhere [Chigua]

Extra points for extreme sports themes, extra points for rigor, and extra points for each supporting character who dares to challenge (zuo) and challenge (si). I also like the extra points about the geologist and the documentary director.

Not bad, good looking😋😋😋

It can be seen that the author is a bit green, and the amount of updates he does not make up for this.

It's interesting. It can be regarded as opening up a small branch in extreme sports.

There is a shortage of books, so you can read it, it's not bad, I look forward to writing better [you taste it carefully] [laughing evilly]

It's good to read. I feel like the author is getting better. I like novels about human beings helping each other in difficult situations.

How shameless, keep up with the big army To be honest, it was relatively dull at the beginning, but then it gradually got better (trust me, you don't need to look at my reading time before it was not this account. The three accounts add up to about 3,000 hours)

It looks great, but can it be changed back in the first game? The feeling of hiking at Wangjungui is not as good as the Hongdong Peak before.

Give yourself a good review (o^^o)

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch If you like reading group portraits, this one is very good. Basically, the characters in each copy have their own personalities and experiences, and the author's writing does not have too many poisonous points. The protagonist obtains his abilities through his own efforts and some help from the system. There is no sudden cheating or anything like that. If you like the semi-invincible story about the whole school, you can read it.

A pretty good one

It's great. I love reading it. I'll take a look at how many hours I've spent reading it. I'll come back to review when I see the latest chapter. I want to check the license plate. There is nothing wrong with the license plate. You can see it.