Alien Aid Log: Turn in an Angel at the Beginning

The logic is rigorous, and it is also the only novel I have read that emphasizes the system. The others either didn't go directly to the reform or the changes were the same as not being changed (maybe it's my problem), but I think this novel shouldn't be so low.

It looks good, and the technology is basically reasonable. It doesn't soar on a rocket. The protagonist has a sense of existence, and it doesn't say that technology is the most awesome. If you can make fireballs or use Holy Light to buff yourself, don't add it and don't learn it. Use whatever you know is good.

You can read it when you're short of books. It's a classic book: Turn in the Country and occasionally follow the little head.

This novel has an online IQ, an ups and downs plot, well-drawn characters, a novel full of anti-oppression, faith, and Chinese romance. How come it only has a 6.6 Rating?

Both the story background and the plot concept are very good, the setting is rigorous, and the author really reads the comments and listens to the readers' opinions. The settings and small background stories added in the author's comments in each chapter are very interesting. Overall, in my opinion, this novel is very good-looking, and it is a rare food in a tomato [Blow kiss]

I have to say that this book is very suitable for my taste. Many novels that travel through countries will face a problem later in writing: the imbalance of plot weight between the protagonist and the country. Either the protagonist is a tool man, or the country is a tool man. But I personally think this novel is well balanced. Moreover, the protagonist of this book has a clear emotional line, which is not found in many so-called group portrait novels.

It's very beautiful and basically not toxic. The protagonist and the country do not have a sense of superiority to the other world, and will admit the country's shortcomings to the former leader of the Free Army in the other world. I think this plot is well described. But there is one thing. Is this a non-CP? There is still a female protagonist. The dialogue between the protagonist and the two gods is a bit ambiguous. It is best to reconsider the relationship between the three. Readers do not reject cp, as long as it is 1v1, the emotional line is normal, and there is no need for a harem. As I read it, I feel that there may be emotional connections between the protagonist and the angel at the beginning of the article and the god who was saved by the arcane. This is very bad and ruins the impression. You need to be clear about which one is the heroine and don't hesitate between the two. If there is no female protagonist, that would be even more wrong. Jealousy and longing do not belong to the normal relationship between men and women. Overall, the author's writing is very good and the flaws can be further corrected.

I have been chasing for half a year, and there are a few submissions that can persist in chasing updates. The countries written in them are very real. They are not blindly bombarded, nor are they the kind of harvesting machines that sell glass beads as gems. They are not a bunch of idiots. They can learn and improve. The background of the different world is also very well created, but the final boss is too strong at the moment. It depends on whether the scientific cultivation of immortality + magical weapons on the earth can catch up [face covering]

It's very interesting, the characters are well-developed, the plot is gripping, and the emotions are resonant. Keep up the good work, the author, and look forward to writing more good-looking novels!

Author, come on, you must keep writing. It must not be similar. Your novel made me see the taste of the development manual of another world. I like it. I love reading it. I don't understand. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is relatively smooth. There is even a small supplementary background story, which is quite humane. I think this is very good. Why is the score only 7.1?

It's very good. Maybe the content of Angels in China is a bit short and there isn't enough conflict to show. In fact, it might be better to add angel transformation in the early stage. Then add some memories of the protagonist in another world.

Thank you all readers and friends for your support. Regardless of good or bad reviews, thank you for reading my book. [Send heart][Send heart] There is a map at the end of Chapter 142 (and the map will be optimized as the plot progresses). In addition, the author has something to say at the end of some chapters, and there are some additional settings for the plot and world view.

Time: 2026/04/13, Chapter 241 in progress. So far, the writing is pretty good, the values ​​are correct, and the story is pretty good. At least I didn't find any inconsistencies or sloppy accounts. The extras are also very interesting, and there are maps. It can be seen that the author really put his heart into it.

The time-travel novels are very well written. I like to read them. All kinds of emotions can be connected. Come on author

I just picked up a piece of Catwoman, and here comes another one of Angel. I took a look at it and it was okay. Let's take a look at it slowly.

It seems that Communication and Brave Long Aotian are not compatible. The former usually writes group portraits, but the protagonist of this book looks very Long Aotian [facepalm] If the protagonist is an aborigine from another world, the setting may be better.

After a brief look, I can see that the author's book is based on an outline (at least I have read it). The world view setting is very interesting. The first book of this type I read was The Steel Torrent of Infinite Rivers. Although the setting here is not the first type of infrastructure in another world, it is indeed good. However, one thing about this kind of book is that in the later stage of magic, all people are cultivating immortals. I hope the author can also balance technology and magic well.

It seems that the rhythm is very good so far, come on, author

This is one of the best writing in the same genre. Support it.

The whole book is very interesting, at least it's much more interesting than the beginning of the book about cultivating immortals. The rating shouldn't be so low. The more you read, the more exciting it becomes. The slowly unfolding worldview and the short stories often written by the author are really fascinating. Looking forward to the emotional line between Stiya and the protagonist [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I really like Western Fantasy. This book seems to have no logical errors. It is a good book.

It's nice. Are there any books of the same type? I haven't given any rewards, so I won't say anything and leave.

A very interesting book. Keep up the good work.

When I read the title of the book, I thought it was garbage produced with the help of assembly line AI, but when I saw more than seventy chapters, I found that it was okay. The plot can be set up or down, and the important supporting characters have distinct personalities. However, I feel that the personal presence is weak, but the shortcomings do not hide the good points. It is a good book. Continue to observe, the score will be changed if the crotch is pulled later. After reading more than 300 chapters, it became a bit boring. It can be seen that the author has no outline and slipped away.

I came in with the attitude of "it's a two-world novel at 7:00, let's see what's so bad about it that makes it score so low." But so far, the 259 chapters I've seen are quite normal and pretty good to read. The author's short essays are also good. If I have to mention one shortcoming, it's that there is too little space about the earth. This book has a low rating probably because few people have read it. I suggest the author recommend more books.

The grass jelly that tomatoes finally grew out of is getting better and better the further you look at it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ[Love]

It's a great book. Although it has some minor flaws, the flaws are not outweighed. However, I still have a little question: who is the heroine?

Give you some encouragement [cool]

What I like very much is that it is very significant in terms of system reform, the logic is self-consistent, and the characters are distinct. I hope that God will not be written as the ultimate villain.

Well enough! Unlike other books that discuss double penetration in more than ten chapters! Annoying! Still available to watch