On Being Reborn as Someone Else's White Moonlight

The book is okay, the setting is good, and the plot is okay, but there are still some problems 1. The writing style can be seen to be a bit green, but I am a newcomer after all, so I can ignore it and hope to improve in the future. 2. Regarding the protagonist's IQ, even though he has no experience in the world and has lost his memory, I still feel too... Well, dumb. I hope I can make the protagonist smarter. 3. I don't agree with the protagonist's favorability towards the protagonist in the first world. The performance is completely inconsistent with the data. I hope it can be modified. 4. I always feel that the name of the protagonist in the second world looks a bit like a girl. I hope that the next world can start with a more masculine name for the male protagonist. 5. Regarding the protagonist not being able to defeat the strongest in the second world, I think the protagonist can already fire ten Star Destroyer Cannons. There is no way he cannot defeat the boss. Either strengthen the boss or weaken the protagonist. 6. I personally feel that the character of the second world male protagonist is a bit, um, soft, right? All in all, my personal feeling is that the second male protagonist not only has no common sense, but also lacks the feeling that a man should have. He is too lazy to look at it and feels a little uncomfortable. 7. I feel like I'm looking for typos 8. The subject matter of this book is very good, which is why I continue to read it. I like this subject matter very much and hereby support five stars. However, according to my standards, the book should be 2 to 3 stars. I hope the author can continue to work hard to become bigger and stronger and create greater glory. 9. I also write a book myself, but it's just a self-pleasure book, and I don't want to move it to Tomato, so I personally think I can still make suggestions, and I hope the author will adopt them. 10. When adopting it, I don't want to disrupt the author's rhythm, so the author can just take a look. If you can adopt it, please try your best. If you can't, I will also mark it for understanding. What else are you talking about? Brother, you are really cool.

It's good-looking, there are no overly complicated little events, and the pace is fast, but these are the parts that I like to watch. It's just that when I accompany the first male protagonist on a trip, I omit too much. It would be better if I write a little bit about the daily life of the two people, or local anecdotes, without writing too much.

The "heavy" in "I was born again" means again, "again" means again, "again" means again, "zai" = again, so, I was reborn = I was born again, because "again" refers to the second, so I was born again, which means "I gave birth to the second one" Therefore, "I was born again" means "I gave birth to a second child"

Sweet first and then sharp, the protagonist completely accepts boys after changing from a straight man to a girl. There are also a lot of single arrows + difficult to reconcile. The protagonist was originally a male, but he was assimilated. Now he and the male protagonist have a snake demon + a wolf cub and live happily. They keep saying that they can't accept it. The result is that they either don't resist, are shy or acquiesce. They practice it and are now the heroines of sadistic novels. In order to become Bai Yueguang, they made the male protagonist sexually repressed, and even had their souls shattered in order to sacrifice their spiritual roots to destroy their spiritual roots. The male protagonist (the male protagonist becomes an ordinary person), is this still the original straight man who just entered the heroine's body? And the protagonist changed from a glutton at the beginning (clearing a table of food in a few mouthfuls and still hungry) to eating in small bites after the sacrifice. I don't know what to say about the 10-year seal. I knew clearly that it couldn't be done, so I could only seal it and delay it. In the end, I didn't do anything during the period. Isn't this about waiting to die without any preparation? 😂, the first BE ending

I feel it's okay, mainly because of the content of this book. Although the writing style is clearly a bit immature in the first few chapters, it is improving steadily later on. I hope to continue to work hard to improve the writing style. Come on, keep making progress, but don't stop updating [Please update]

It's a good read and it relieved my boredom. Fortunately, I didn't miss it. Although there are only 15 book reviews now and I haven't even received a score, I feel that it has great potential. Come on

What do you mean? I just turned to Chapter 10 and I got stuck.

Well, my own book must receive five-star reviews

Giving it away too quickly (referring to directly accepting the male lead) makes it seem like the protagonist is not very smart. There are also more light-hearted and cute plots [blowing kisses]

Putting aside everything else, I think the story about the first male protagonist is pretty good. It would be even better if there was a story specifically about the first male protagonist!