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Personally, I feel that Al is used in the middle part. If it is not there, it means the author is careless. (There are many contradictions in the article.) I wrote this comment very carefully! ! ! The subject matter is very good, but the people are still the same, but they seem different from the original work. Isn't it the point of fandom to let them have different endings within the established characters? What's the use of just changing the person's name? There are several issues: 1. Logical contradiction (during the 100-day celebration, it was said that the newly joined potter was given a set of ceramics, and later it was said that he was one of the first ghosts to be transformed) 2. The OOC is too heavy (Ji Guoyuan is not that smart...; The power of the ancestor of Wuhan Ghost is not that weak) Does the author see anything that could be improved? I'm not saying that everything has been improved, but I just feel that there is something wrong with it🤨. After all, there are so many words, wouldn't it be strange that only a few people post book reviews... (Personal opinion) There are many points for good writing: 1. A lot of CP is very sweet! Please turn on the stove when it gets dark! ! ! 2. The writing is very good. (Of course, this is based on the premise that AI is not used) 3. The rhythm is very warm and the feeling of flowing water is long. So overall I still like it very much! I would like a response to my personal question! ! ! ^_^

You! ! I kneel down! A very warm book [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates] Sometimes I think about how wonderful it would be if the ghosts' experiences were really saved and brought to happiness as described by the author. There is no bloody life here, and there is a deep bond between treating each other as family. I was particularly touched when I read Naru's chapter. I allowed her to vent her emotions and told her that no one would laugh at you because this is "home", a place where a group of poor people without blood get together to warm each other. In the colorless and tasteless Paradise Church, there was a picture album with strokes that reflected people's emotions. When they first arrived at a home where they didn't know each other, they received a pipa string made with vampire magic that was stronger and would never break. . From the first three ghosts sitting by the campfire at night eating dried fruits and wild vegetables, they gradually found a place to live, and more ghosts with tragic experiences joined in to form a warm home. Especially like it. . Especially beautiful. . 🥹🥹

It's very beautiful. Everyone in it is very gentle and gives me a feeling of compassion. Some characters may be a bit OC, but it's really worth watching. (◦˙▽˙◦)

The author must work hard, I will be your fan. We are always behind you, as long as you look back. Don't be afraid, author, keep on writing. As long as you are willing, we will always be with you. ＼(`Δ')／ ————Fans who love you Is the God of Wealth here?

It feels quite good-looking, with such a warm atmosphere, and the author's writing style is also okay. If you can't stand the first chapter, you can skip it. Personally, I feel that the part where Li Fan talks to himself is a bit awkward, but the rest is really warm. Overall it is highly recommended!

Good-looking (○｀ε´○), maintaining humanity and warmth Wo also wants to join this family! ! ! !

It's very individual, so it must be perfect

A book that warms your heart after reading it

This book saved me a lot. I saw a harmonious picture of ghosts. It has always been the type I wanted.

I think it's quite interesting. I've read more than ten chapters so far and I feel very warm🤟 I really like this book. It contains basically everything I know about. Tongqin99

A very nice book

Look at me, my heart is soft,

Super delicious

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It makes people feel warm when they see it

A very warm and cozy book

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The novel is rich in content, vivid and interesting plot, vivid and full of images, and delicate in description. It is worth reading.

It's very beautiful. It's like weaving a super big web. It's just like weaving a super big web. It's so exciting every time I watch the updated plot. It's very immersive.

The author's writing style is concise and clear, and the narrative rhythm is tight, making people feel no delay in the reading process.

He is very good-looking. He wants to save everyone. He is a very kind person. Everyone likes him very much. I hope they are all well!

The author's ideas are novel and ingenious, the writing is relaxed and interesting, the characters are full and natural, and it is very immersive. It is a good novel.

Warm, quiet and peaceful, no need to use too much brain, I like it! Super recommended! Still looking forward to the follow-up.

The plot timeline is a bit OOC, but the advantage is that the plot is very heartwarming and still worth watching.

Rare writing style, very skilled author, very deep character creation, and a huge story line

The plot is really good, with a touch of sadness and happiness

It's so delicious, everyone is so happy and warm☺️, and the young couple is also sweet. I hope the author will keep on producing😋

The plot is coherent, the writing is very good, and the ideas are also very good

This is a good book. I haven't seen such touching writing in a long time.

I've been watching it for a long time and I really like it.