Quick Transmigration: Ten Lifetimes of Atonement, from Scumbag to Devoted Husband

I have read a lot of fast-traveling books on Tomato, some with good plots and some with bad plots. This book is much worse than the good-looking ones I have read. Some of the plot designs are very illogical, but the author's writing style and background design are also written with the male and female protagonists' three perspectives. I can read it. In the first article, if you want to write about killing your wife to save his future, you have to write about the male protagonist not abandoning his wife and children after becoming famous. Instead of writing about the male protagonist making some small changes that don't look good, you have to write about him falling in love with the female protagonist while calculating, rather than suddenly. If you want to write about the female protagonist's growth and independence, you can't write about things that can only be done with the male protagonist's permission. In the second article, you have to write about domineering CEOs and celebrities. You have to write about the cold and domineering male protagonist who gave in during the three-year marriage with the female protagonist, instead of Directly write about the male protagonist changing directly in order to complete the task. You have to write about the male protagonist doing a series of things and silently paying for the female protagonist, instead of writing about the male protagonist's change through some complicated and illogical things. It is difficult for people to read such an unreasonable change and interpret it as a fast-travel redemption novel. In short, for this kind of article, you need to write about the changes that the male protagonist made because he fell in love with the female protagonist after time travel. You have to write about why you fell in love with her, and write about how good the female protagonist was before you crossed over. Then, after wearing the clothes, the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist as a reason, and thus changed. Instead of a cold tragic background story, after the male protagonist traveled through time, it was changed to a story about doing tasks and pampering his wife. You want to write about love but only write about small things. What do you want? It writes about the independent growth of the female protagonist, but it particularly highlights the importance of the male protagonist. I gave it five stars because this book has just been opened and the writing is not very enjoyable. However, compared to some fast-travel novels that are arrogant and destroy the three views, the writing style is positive. I want to see outstanding stories in the following small worlds. The identity and character background of the male protagonist in each world of the fast-travel novel should be highlighted, instead of changing the tasks in the same way. I hope this book can be written.

In the first story, overall the growth of the two people is remarkable. Except for some sentences that are easily misunderstood, the flaws are not concealed. The second story is a little disappointing. There are problems with the overall framework and logic of the whole story, and there are many bugs that make people confused. However, it can be seen that the description of the emotional line has made some progress. When the author wrote the emotional scenes between the two parties, most of them looked very natural. Praise👍🏻. Keep up the hard work and look forward to better works from ୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧.

I have finished reading the first story. The characters are very three-dimensional and the writing is great. The male and female protagonists have their own growth lines. Their roots are tightly intertwined in the soil, but their branches stretch and grow towards their own sky. The intention is very clear: A good salvation is not to protect you from wind and rain, but to guide you to learn to hold up the sky by yourself. The growth line is so invincible [like it], and the love line can't be left behind. The label says sweet pet, but it's not sweet enough. Author, after reading it for so long, you should let them kiss.

I've finished reading the first story, it's great!! The author's writing skills are very good, the story is smooth and the logic is clear. There are no rhetorical flourishes, and the words and sentences are all appropriate. The story is not particularly new, but the author writes it very smoothly. The protagonist's character emerges naturally, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating.

The system settings feel unpleasant, but this is the third world. I believe the author ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

Currently I like the second story of Tugouwen!

Bringing people into the play and empathizing with the characters,

The 1V1 from the perspective of the male protagonist is very interesting. The female protagonist has some quirks in the later stories, but the two of them are evenly matched. I also hope to see more stories about this pair of CPs

It's well written, and the emotions are very delicate.

Very nice and nice (♥∀♥) nice and nice