Fellow Taoist, Why Is There Black Smoke in Your Human Emperor Banner?

Feng Aotianliu's novel about cultivating immortals is very good. The female protagonist is ruthless and stubborn, and the female characters are well represented. It does not stress the strength and does not rely purely on the system. Overall, it is a grassroots growth history, which is very resonant. What's not good for me is when a man forces his female partner to marry him without caring about the woman's wishes and thinks he is affectionate. And I think this direction is more suitable for no cp and no male. At first, I thought it was a plot without emotional connection, and the heroine was too cold when faced with the heroine being kidnapped to get married... She would put others into the Human Emperor Banner without asking for any reason, and be gentle to the man who was attached to her. . Editor 3: I endured the nausea and came back to take a look. I still felt that the female supporting character's plot was quite vicious. Although this is just a story about a strong female character and does not require the author to favor other female characters, I still felt quite uncomfortable with it. Other than that, I think this book is pretty good.

The writing is really good. This is the smoothest book I have read among the many fantasy novels I have read in Tomato. There is no messy and forced drama to highlight the protagonist's plot, and there is no deliberate description of the character's appearance. It looks very comfortable and smooth. So far, the world view and some settings are quite complete. It is a combination of games and traditional cultivation of immortality. It not only abandons the childishness of cultivating immortality in games, but also combines some characteristics of the game with the concept of cultivating immortality. This is better than other games that cultivate immortality (including male videos). Needless to say the writing style. But there are also some shortcomings. I hope that the author can make progress together with the protagonist. At more than 110 chapters, there are still relatively few female characters in the book. Whether it is indigenous people or players, they all hope to have more (I am not asking the author to write "girl-loving" novels, but I just suggest that there should be more female characters with charming personalities. It doesn't matter whether they are good or bad. Because whether it is indigenous people or players, it is unfair to have more men than women). I don't know if the author has the habit of reading book reviews. I hope the author can see that if he wants to get a higher score, this is the best choice. Add more female characters, so that the ratio of male to female characters is balanced or there are more women than men. Also, try not to write words that insult women. Hong Cibei's smashing the pot is a good counterexample. Don't say it is a writing habit. In the female video market, the beneficiaries are women, and the readers are more women. No matter what characters say words that insult women, it will not leave a good impression on the readers. Even if the book cannot be changed, even if the book survives, the end will be even worse.

Super pretty [crying] The super orthodox heroine is practicing fairy literature. She is moving forward diligently step by step. But the Holy Mother has her own way. What is wrong with this heroine? She is not bad at all [crying][crying][crying] How normal and normal people love themselves more! ! ! We, Bai Yue, are very upright. We will seek revenge and repay injustice, and we will never let go of those who have offended us. This is how we are normal people! ! ! Some articles write about the Holy Mother under the banner of evil girl. My dear Bai Yue is such an upright and lovely baby [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] There is no trace of the male protagonist at all! Sisters, feel free to rush! ! ! The villains are also very smart and are not just here to deliver food!

This book is very beautiful, but the rating is so low, so I specially rated it: 1️⃣Senior brother and sister, there are many girls who use these details, siss can feel free to join 2️⃣The rhythm is very fast and refreshing, one wave after another rises again, the heroine must retaliate, she is smart, bold and ambitious, it is a very refreshing novel. Finished reading it in one sitting. 3️⃣The supporting characters are well portrayed. Not a flat supporting character. Every character, even the villain, has something fresh to him.

The biggest advantage of this book is that the protagonist never hesitates and has no messy moral burdens or psychological activities. How can it be so refreshing! ! ! Anyone who wants to kill her, anyone who stands in the way, regardless of male or female, will be killed. If you can't kill her now, you will always kill her in the future. Just do it. The author never writes "if so and so..., She/he is not afraid of..." Or that in order to protect himself, the protagonist has no choice but to..., And never writes a series of hypocritical "disclaimers" before the protagonist goes to kill. This is the coolest place. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Also, the author should not mention those words that need to be changed. The inexplicable words or phrases will only affect the speed of my reading comprehension. Is it really necessary to pursue and find fault with the author because of a few words in order to achieve equality between men and women? It doesn't matter whether you are male or female, they are all stepping stones for the protagonist. You will not let them go just because you are a woman, nor will you deal with them more harshly just because you are a man. Before gender, we are individuals first [smile][smile][smile] In short, reading novels does not need to affect the reading experience. To please the so-called "female market" and "female-friendly", it only needs the protagonist to be friendly [thinking][thinking][thinking]

It's really beautiful. The heroine is not kind at all, very ruthless and neat, but she is grateful. It has the flavor of a traditional fairy tale. She has always been a lone wolf and has been working hard to become stronger. The supporting characters in it also have their own origins and personalities. They all have ambitions and use various means to compete for opportunities. It is particularly refreshing and there are some very touching plots. The author is really very experienced in writing and the logic is not broken at all. I highly recommend it. The rating of this book is definitely low now. I will never discriminate against books with low ratings in the future. It is very in line with my appetite. The plot is exciting and ups and downs. I was attracted immediately and kept reading. The only pity is that it is a serialized novel. After finishing it, I was really excited and wanted to read it. The author came over and quickly continued writing. I hope it is not a high start but a low start. I hope that the current style can be continued all the way in the future. When the author writes the story he wants to write, he can also attract a group of readers with the same concept. Let's make this book better together. ㊗️Everyone can be rich and prosperous.

This book is really good. I'm the kind of person who doesn't want to read it if there are some flaws, but I will take a quick glance at it. However, I can listen to this book and read it seriously. I have to say that the writing is really good. It really describes the world of immortality, not just good and evil, or the illusory setting of neutrality. In short, it is quite good. At least I am reading this now and hope to keep it in the future. . . . Well, I hope the author can change some of the word-sensitive issues, so that the rating can be long and there is no harm. Let me add that if you want to see the plot and don't care about these words, you can follow it. Supplement: There are quite a lot of ups and downs in the plot at the end, and many people will abandon the book because of this. Moreover, the connection between the ups and downs is not very good, which makes it a bit confusing. The emotional construction in some places is not very good, which makes the actions of the protagonist a bit difficult to understand. I feel that the author's description of the protagonist's shaping is a bit difficult to write, so it is okay to read it as a fake novel. The shaping and writing in the early stage are pretty good, but the connection in the later stage is a bit difficult, so be careful.

Despite the confusion, I still gave it 4 stars. The early reading experience was quite good. I only remembered to read it after reading the beginning. Because I didn't like the description of Mr. Yang in the early stage, I skipped it the second time. The ratio of women to men is 1:1, but the ones in high positions are mostly men. The heroine is a decisive and murderous person who will use any means to climb up the ladder, but she happens to encounter people who want to kill her, so she kills people and licks the bag without any moral pressure. It is very good and very satisfying, if you can accept it. Some of the insulting phrases have been criticized very loudly and have not been changed, and some minor ones have been changed. If you have a strong female consciousness, you can withdraw here. Later on, there is a plot where the female supporting character is forcibly married and the heroine is raped and sucked by a leech man. I haven't watched it yet and I plan to finish it quickly before commenting on it. To put it simply, readers who are not very aware of women can read it, while readers who are strongly aware of women can stop reading this book review.

It's a good-looking and interesting story about a female cultivator. I haven't seen such an interesting plot in a long time. The heroine is ruthless and not soft-hearted at all. She is decisive and clean in doing things. The game system setting for the player is interesting and novel. The golden finger is reasonable and very fun. The heroine takes revenge without leaving any consequences. There are many adventures and the female characters in it are also normal.

100 Faint! 💯Faint! Finally there is a female author who is free from love and love! Not to mention that the plot is very exciting and old topics are written with new meanings. The heroine is also very refreshing and doesn't mess around along the way. Enjoyable

It's super, super beautiful, it's a treasure. There are many powerful ("powerful" that the protagonist encounters in stages) flesh-and-blood women in Da Da Da. What's even more surprising is that the character's image is described in great detail instead of describing the character's appearance in detail. Instead, the character is sketched out in a few words, and the overall image of the character is simply revealed. I really like this narrative method, and it makes me read so smoothly. I finally don't have to think about the character awkwardly. Women are not flat or stereotyped. In such a dark world of immortality, there are no permanent friends, only permanent interests. No one will give up benefits because of friendship. There are preconditions for giving up benefits. What benefits can you bring to me? Everyone is cultivating immortality seriously to survive, and finally we are no longer playing house.

It's nice to watch, nice to watch, the heroine has revenge and kindness, and it has nothing to do with the heroine, but as long as she gets in the way, she will kill her directly. There is no nagging, or feeling that she has killed someone, or whatever, and there is no sense of violation at all. It feels like the author gave the heroine a character who has never been to school since she was a child and can't even write a poem. Then, the heroine travels to the world of immortality, where she kills people and seizes treasures, so it doesn't feel too inconsistent. The description of the world of cultivating immortals is very realistic. Killings and looting treasures are everywhere, and there are even massacres of cities. It is not like other novels where cultivating an immortal teaches morality to others. The heroine is also a complete casual cultivator. It was really fun to watch.

I really like this kind of worldview where interests are paramount, fighting and snatching. There is no pie falling from the sky for no reason, everyone has their own calculations, and the writing is great! ! ! ! ! The plot is compact, non-fiction, interesting, cautious, and I love it~~~

It was only after I tied it that I realized that the rating was so low, but it is really good to read. It is rare to find another good non-CP book. The heroine's words are very three-dimensional. She is very competitive and seizes opportunities and is very self-interested. It is particularly good. Moreover, the heroine does not have various descriptions of appearance or adjectives such as "slender". Overall, it should be an upgrade. It's not a cool novel, but it's not aggrieved either. The author's writing is good and detailed, but it's easy to miss the description of the time period if you read it too quickly, but it doesn't affect the reading. And the author has a lot of little humor, such as Mission: Impossible, which made me laugh so hard. The fly in the ointment is that there are still a few RN words such as "what the hell" and the like. There are a bit too many male NPCs but not to the point of being an eyesore. However, when there are group chats related to large areas in the past, there are always "brothers" and "dude" and the like, which is very unpleasant to see. I feel that this is not included in the chat records of the water group. It doesn't matter what the names are. There is also "The Son of Luck, the Daughter of Luck", which is a good article. I hope it can go further and higher. I feel that it would be better to change it to "The Son of Luck, the Daughter of Luck" or "The Son of Luck, the Man of Luck". Do not use neutral words. Oh, anyway, why did I discover it so early? Now it's tied and there's nothing to watch.

I like it very much. Maybe the golden finger of the heroine is not very powerful, but anyone who dares to suppress the heroine will die or be disabled (similar to the concept of God, I don't have to be strong, but I can't be weaker than you). It depicts the ferocity of the cultivator (yes, it is brutal! The jungle of the jungle kind! A feeling that many female cultivators lack), so it is quite exciting to watch. The feeling of satisfaction is that the heroine will definitely get it if she puts in the effort. It does not mean that you will be given a golden finger if you fall down (each has its own feeling of satisfaction). The ratio of male and female strength is relatively balanced, and the ratio of male to female is not unbalanced. After all, the heroine is now golden. I hope to see more outstanding and powerful women in the future [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The author's plot is very interesting, and the writing style is also good. The most important thing is that she will listen to and change some common insulting words for women, unlike some people in the comment area who said that we are too busy and ignore us. It's really good-looking. I highly recommend it. I really prefer novels about evil women, not the kind of righteous little pitiful people who are disguised as evil women. Although the heroine is also quite pitiful [love]

In fact, overall it's not bad. In addition to the problem of words and sentences, there is another point for me. Personally, this content is not particularly satisfying to say that it is refreshing, but it is not particularly frustrating to say that it is frustrating. I breathed a sigh of relief to my chest, especially when I saw a bat hatched from the egg. This bat was obviously the heroine's spiritual pet. As a result, I didn't even have the right to name it. It's so uncomfortable! You still have to coax it, it's obviously a partner, it's all about female novels, why don't you want to make the heroine feel better? In the previous plot, the heroine also had the heroine lying on the ground and doing something small, because she couldn't defeat the enemy, so she just tolerated it for the time being, and sooner or later the enemy would be eliminated, but this kind of character who is a friend but not an enemy can't be beaten, and it's hard to say. The best thing about this novel is that the heroine is very decisive and the tender scenes are also quite good.

It looks good, it tastes delicious, it feels good, hahaha, it's great, it's great, I'm gone! It's a fairy tale with a very real sense of being alive, and the heroine's character is also very good. It's very clever and refreshing! I won't reveal the plot, but I suggest you avoid looking at the comments (some of them are quite interesting) and the table of contents. Reading the whole article is full of surprises! Uh-huh, what a weird emotional line

It looks good, the writing is good, the writing style is good, and the writing is smooth. Read it in one sitting. The female protagonist is decisive in killing. What I like most is that the male-to-female ratio of passers-by is relatively normal. It is not a male-female kind. Although it is only a small detail, it is very comfortable to read. I don't think there are any insulting words (if there are, there should be very few, because I have no impression). Those who love to watch immortals can enter. This world of immortals is quite cruel. This is the second time I've watched the main character Renren Huangban. I used to prefer the story about the young man's moral integrity. This time it allowed me to experience something new.

It's a very good book, but I read a lot of comments about the inappropriate use of gender-neutral words. I think this exists. Many "zi" are only described as men, and some words are "masculine". But I still think this is a good book. The heroine is very charming and has a good image. It is one thing not to use neutral words, but I think the score of this book is really low. I think in This is already a very good novel about a female protagonist who studies immortality in Tomato. I haven't clicked it before because of the ratings, but I didn't expect it to be so good. I hope the author can hone his writing skills more and be more sensitive to neutral words. This book will become more popular. I really like the female protagonist. She is really a very attractive woman. I hope more people can read it instead of being buried because of improper use of neutral words.

Upgrade flow, normal people, no unnecessary boring appearance description, no house fighting, only improvement in strength, very good, there are gains and losses, successes and failures, it is a little progress, you will encounter strong enemies, it is not a complete story, there are no surprises.

The following is just my personal opinion: I think it's still very interesting. The level of immortality usually rises very quickly. I was not used to seeing it so slowly at first, but when I thought about it, this speed is normal. The heroine seems to be a growth type, emotional but more self-interested. I was very happy to watch the fighting. There was no situation that made me feel aggrieved. The heroine was getting stronger step by step. . Lone wolves are really rare! ! ! It's just a temporary team, and you won't stay in a certain team forever. I'm looking forward to the author's updates, it's so to my liking... [Love] [Love] emmm... I just saw the latest chapter. The protagonist should have gone back in time and changed his destiny. He thought that the author would add something later that would completely eliminate Shinto. However, going back to the past was not better than the first episode. . . Yuan Ying is not a good match either, and his relationship with Long has become even worse, and some opportunities have disappeared. Anyway, in my opinion, it is obviously better and more enjoyable. I feel very aggrieved when I see it now. I really think the protagonist should be the best in everything, so what is this latest chapter about? . I'll read it next. If I can't go back, I won't read it. I've followed it from more than ten chapters to now and it's pretty good. I don't know why I want to do this [Petrochemical] ps: This is the third series. Later, others said that the plot was very frustrating. You sister Yue also suffered more. It seems that the change in the plot is very abrupt. She is obviously getting better, but she has to fall into the quagmire and experience more suffering. Anyway, I feel that the subsequent plot should be quite chaotic, and it feels like a head-butting torture.

In the name of happiness, this book is really good. I am only following three books now, and this is one of them. There are almost no surprises in the whole book. The heroine is decisive in killing and never shows mercy. She is also capable of killing (evil) people and stealing goods. The heroine adjusts her mentality very quickly. I like this. , It can be considered a bottom line, and I am very kind to the people in my birth point. I left the village for them in the first place. In fact, I personally hope that the heroine can take less care of them. After all, the initial malice towards the heroine or the "original body" is actually true. It is not harmful to them. It's normal, but there is no need to interfere too much. Of course, the author may also be writing foreshadowing. After all, the village is called "Death God Village". The heroine will not say that she is too sad or too happy along the way. She has a normal upgrade route and a lot of regular enemies. Compared with ordinary or even other closed beta players. It's quite strong now, and it may be even better later. Now that I look at the whole text, there are basically no insulting words or swear words. In short, this is a very good book. From my point of view, it should score 9 or above in the end, and there is a high probability that it will not be a scam. I believe in the strength of the old writer! [Laughing]

It's really good to watch. The main character of the main character is very strong. I feel like a boy watching it. I really like this kind of description that doesn't describe too many female characteristics and only focuses on strength. The world view and upgrade system are also very neat. The protagonist of the cruel world of cultivating immortals has a little warmth. Each secret realm is particularly interesting and not boring at all. The supporting characters are also very plump. The protagonist is not against the sky but always full of satisfaction. The more it gets better and better in the later stage, it gives the author a lot of chicken legs [crazy]

It's a super cool story, the kind where the heroine is frustrated but returns it immediately within three chapters. It's a bit strange that the wild boar in Novice Village suddenly becomes friendly, but it's good that someone loves her. It's a bit funny and a bit sad for the modern little poor person who hasn't heard of Jing Yesi.

It's okay. It's not mindless. It's more realistic. It's pretty good to watch. But can the author change the words that insult women? It affects the perception very much. You can replace them with other synonymous words. [Sending my heart]

It's very good. It's my favorite book I've read recently. There are so many people saying that the heroine kills people for attribute points and giving bad reviews. I can only say that I, a person who doesn't like to read dark novels, enjoyed reading it without any discomfort. First of all, the heroine went in to harvest attribute points during a fight between two families. The family named Lin was originally going to kill everyone in the heroine's village. The heroine killed him. There's nothing wrong with you, the other gang, the Wang family, has no grudge against the heroine, but what's the matter, both families have identity tags, and the heroine only has the Lin family identity tag she got by killing the Lin family who came to the village to look for trouble. There's nothing wrong with killing the Wang family to fish in troubled waters. In the end, they all become immortals, with their heads in their belts, and they do things that harm others and benefit themselves to improve themselves. What's that? How many players who die at the beginning have no chance of surviving if they want to do things that harm others and benefit themselves?

Playing with Good Guys can only be said to be one of the most exciting times. It started in the Novice Village of the Mortal World. The pace was slow but very peaceful and warm. The heroine was living a good life. Starting from nothing, she gradually adapted to and understood the world in the company of the fallen former genius Mr. Yang. She experienced some warmth and coldness in human relationships and then grew up with more ability to protect others. She happened to accidentally discover that someone wanted to harm the village, so she decided to leave and go to the world of immortality after saying goodbye. She continued to grow while escaping from pursuit. The process is intertwined, and no plot is written in vain. When killing people, they are clean and neat, and they never hesitate to eradicate the roots. Everything is a dispute of interests. The heroine has never wavered and will not leave any hidden dangers. Many times it is dangerous and dangerous, but the heroine survives tenaciously. It is very touching to watch. Wow, the heroine has always been a good baby. I like her very much. She has never read a book or enjoyed a good life. So far, she has fought hard for everything. She has a very charming personality. She is very nice and cute. I am very happy to see someone loving her. Although I have already tied it now, the creation of the heroine has always been super successful. It is not a simple reversal of the so-called strong female character. If you can beat it, you can hide and develop it and then reappear to kill the enemy in time. The heroine will not have any moral constraints. She will kill all the way and do all kinds of killings. She will not be soft on her mortal enemies. But the heroine herself is a very warm little girl. I love her very much. I hope she is always well [crying]

Good looking. It's just that the characters are all too flesh and blood, and then they have life and death, which makes it a bit sad to watch.

It's very beautiful, and the characters, setting, plot, and characters are all very well drawn. And this is similar to what I saw. There is one detail. In the entire article, when I see women, there is no such thing as "a female stream". No one despises the heroine because of her gender, appearance, etc. It was very enjoyable to watch. Women are the ones most talked about. There is basically no love. There is love in the early stage, but in the end it is actually about profit. It's more of a family relationship, a master-disciple relationship, a brother-sister relationship. Out of 100 points, I give it 120 points.