Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Girls

I think the character created is pretty good, but it's a pity that it's more plot-oriented. There is very little interaction with the male protagonist. I haven't seen it sweet yet. Alas, I really want to see the male protagonist tease the female protagonist until she looks shy. [Shy]

I love watching it, and there are no big logical problems It's good to read, but it's a pity that there are too few of them. I would like to read some other books, but I'm afraid I'll die from reading this one.

It's also a good meal. This book focuses on describing the world view. It seems that the world view is relatively complete now, and there is nothing illogical. It also writes out the conflict points between cultivating immortals and the feudal dynasty. In the feudal dynasty, one family is supreme for imperial power, but in the world of cultivating immortals, personal force is supreme. In this way, there will be many people who rely on their own cultivation to do superficial things for the imperial edict. Finally, the author would like to introduce more interactions between the two little ones. Children love to see that [shy][shy]

The writing style is okay, and it is readable among the fairy tales, but there are some poisonous points. I feel that the author sometimes writes inexplicably, especially now that I am almost catching up with the big army. Starting from 157, there are more than 20 chapters. The male protagonist is single-viewed and the female protagonist is as if she is missing. I think most of my friends who like this label are like this when they read The Change of Marriage. I came here mainly to read about the female protagonist, but this book is actually more like the male protagonist cultivating fairy tales, and to be honest, one thing I don't like very much is that in such a long plot, the male protagonist is always with other girls, and the setting of being rescued and then having a bloody feud between the two is quite uncomfortable. It feels like the left and right brains are competing against each other. It makes me wonder if the author has been changed, but generally speaking, I recommend friends who are resistant to poison or who like to cultivate immortality + change marriage to take a look. I'll make a follow-up review when I catch up with the big group later.

The overall character creation is quite fresh, and the writing is good. However, the emotional connection with the male protagonist is a bit confusing at the beginning, but it doesn't matter. I have seen more than 100 chapters so far, and there is nothing interesting for the time being. It's just that the number of explosions is a bit too high. And I really have to pay half of that bet, it's such a loss, isn't it the author?

The writing is very good, the world view slowly expands, and the foreshadowing is slowly planted. The plot is very attractive, and it is updated quickly.

Overall it's okay, it just feels perfect.

It's pretty good, but I don't know when the male and female protagonists will get to know each other. I hope it will happen soon [laughing evilly]

Not bad, come on author, the score should be determined soon

The writing is really appetizing, at least it's pretty good among Tomatoes.

I feel very good after reading the previous part. Keep up the good work. I am very optimistic about you, the author. [Like] [Like]

The cover is nice, the heroine is nice, and the plot is nice. It's chapter 80 and I still don't know who the male lead is.

It looks good, is very delicate, and has no sense of violation at all. The only drawback is that it is not enough! [Full]

Is this single, hundreds or married?

It's indeed good, so is the cub of an ancient ferocious beast a unit of measurement? [Thinking]

Come on, it's very well written.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author.

So pretty! ! ! The setting is very interesting

Not bad, until now

It's nice to watch, but there isn't much excitement in the early stages. For example, the protagonist is bullied and then explodes. It feels like I have been coding for a few months just for a secret place.

It's still too short now, let's see what happens later

Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Don't be a eunuch [crying]

Not bad, but there are too many Riddlers

The author updates twice a day. It's already great. This is a new book. Those who think it looks good should stay a little longer.

Very good, feels like a perfect world

It's very beautiful. Give it a five-star rating and support it.

It's pretty good. There are no flaws so far, and the character creation is pretty good.

It's good to watch, but I have to wait until the male protagonist comes out to watch it [Learned]

Very nice, cheers author

Not bad, good cheers, author