HP: Starting Name Is Lestrange

Why can the hand bird fly＋Sexis I already understand

It's good-looking. The heroine is an alchemy professor at Hogwarts and a descendant of Professor Snape. When I read the original work, I felt that Principal Dumbledore and Harry were miserable. A centenarian and a minor had to defeat the Dark Lord. Professor Snape worked three jobs and only received one salary. What kind of steel workers are they? I think the three of them are the three most three-dimensional characters in the original work. I look forward to the follow-up plot. My wife wrote it very well.

It's very interesting, and the subject matter is very novel. However, some parts have a bit of an AI feel, such as involving some professional terms that do not exist or cannot be understood. I really admire the ability to write these professional terms, and apart from these fragments, the writing style of other parts is very natural. Have you used AI to polish it? If not, I apologize. The writing and imagination are very good, please go to the author (˝ᗢ˝) ops, I'm sorry that when I re-checked, I found that the expression was not quite right. I mean, some of the clips looked a bit like they had been polished by AI, while the rest were very natural. They should have been written by the author himself. The writing style is very good (ˊᗜˋ*)

The emotional line is super delicate, the teacher-student and family relationship between Sir Xi and Deng and Professor Si, and the silent sister-brother relationship with Harry are really interesting. For me, Circus's personal setting about time feels very integrated, as if it is really a parallel world. Very nice! ! !

It is a very interesting HP fanfic. It does not simply follow the main line, nor does it completely pass by. It cleverly opens up a new space in the world of the original work, logically enlarges the perspective, and adds many original plots and characters. It is quite interesting and dare to write. The main plot itself is also interesting enough, and time can always be spent. The heroine is very well designed. She is a completely reliable adult and an excellent teacher for the younger generation. Finally, I have a book that makes me feel that Hogwarts is a good school except for magic. On the family side, the relationship between several people was well maintained. The ratio between the protagonist's halo and the group portrait is also very good. It will not cover up the light of other characters because the protagonist is too strong, nor will it cover the moon because of the stars. During this period, a little bit of Chinese elements were also added, not much but important enough to make it look very friendly. I can't tell why it's missing one star. Maybe it's because of my personal reasons. It's missing something I can't explain. I can't stand it after seeing it. This has been the case recently.

It's really, really beautiful, the teacher-student relationship with Dumbledore, the family relationship with Snape, and the friendship with Vera The heroine is really a good person, very powerful, has her own anchors (Dumbledore and Snape), the ending is he, no one died, and I am very happy to see the cooperation of the four major colleges. You can see the charm of many people in this work, see a school working together, there is no distinction between colleges, and the heroine's views are really good, whether it is about "public opinion", "fact", "viewpoint" or other things, in short, it is really, really beautiful. In addition, I am very happy that little Barty has found someone who can heal himself. It is so well written and I like it so much. The heroine has no CP.

It's very beautiful, the subject matter is very novel, and the emotions are very delicate. Unknown to everyone, I carried a heavy bag and walked forward silently. Maybe many people thought that I was making a contribution to the world, but I knew very well in my heart that I was doing it for the people I love.

It's very interesting. It uses a relatively unique and somewhat obscure explanation to describe the protagonist's interactions with everyone in Hogwarts. The more I read the fanfic, the more I hope the content will be more colorful, and I don't want to read too much the same content. For the protagonist designed by the author, there is no disharmony, no time travel, no rebirth, it is very natural. He has a unique perspective on each character, with no preconceptions and no obvious preferences or dislikes. For those of you who are used to watching romance, the development of this kind of family and friendship is also very good. I wish the author better and better. Full of inspiration and long article.

This is an HP fanfic with a very novel theme. When I read it, I really marveled at how the author has such a big brain. The theory in it is very advanced. I feel like a professional scholar. The character of the protagonist is plump and not collapsed. Not only the heroine, but every character in it is very plump. I really like this novel! ! ! I feel like there is nothing to criticize at all, and the writing is super, super good! Thank you so much to the author for writing such a novel! Really really like it!

This is really an excellent book among the Tomato HP fanfics, but it doesn't have much traffic. I have read Tomato's God-Building Project, and I feel that it must have been affected by this. The author's writing style is very comfortable to read, and it is very smooth. The love between teacher and student, father and daughter, and friendship are also very good. Serxis, the Eagle Soaring in the Sky, I wish you freedom forever.

The heroine has a good character, the pace is tight, the language is not sluggish, the description is very good, and the characters in it are also well developed. Even though I talked about Draco at the beginning, I didn't mention it much about the inexplicable things later on, and then I felt very affectionate towards Harry inexplicably.

——Early Warning—— I came here for ggad, so I will review ggad first. Well, what do you mean? In fact, it is a book that portrays Deng Duoduo more accurately. It is correct to write Deng Duoduo as a human being rather than a god. Gellert is not too OOC. Although ggad does not explain what happened, it is also quite delicious. Compared with ggad, it is true. In fact, there is no solution. Unless we go back to the beginning, Arianna is not Silent. ————It can be seen that I am not very good at writing emotional lines———— Deng Duoduo and the Sri Lankan heroine may be a little OOC when it comes to topics about happiness and themselves, but maybe they also said it? Maybe? The transformation of Vera In fact, what I want to say to you is that it is normal to have an idea but be soft-hearted when writing. That is the overflow of your love for them. You are really great. There will be relatively few descriptions of Duoduo's personal work. After all, he is not the protagonist, but I am indeed a little curious about Duoduo's daily work (it's selfish) For those who say it is AI, you can't just think that AI is good because you can't understand the academic content? After all, I have actually seen my friend rub worldview technology and various theories with his hands, and it made me dizzy.

This is one of the few HP fanfics that has been on my reading list for a long time. I really like the author's description of emotions, which are very delicate, whether it is with Albus or with Si Jiao. As a professor of alchemy, Sirsis also guided and taught students. Maybe the whole story still has some room for improvement, but overall, it's really good.

I cried so much that my eyes were swollen, it's just that something happened to my teacher After mentioning Decorah in the early stage, her relationship with Harry suddenly disappeared. But overall it's very nice to watch, but there's not enough CP space for Little Barty. I really like her relationship with Snape and Dumbledore. It's very heartwarming.

Great fanfic, all the emotional lines are so touching. The family lines about Sri Lanka and Dumbledore made me burst into tears. It's super good! Super pretty! ! Recommended recommended recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

Very good book But I don't know why not many people watch it😇😇😇 Laoda must hold on! 🥰🥰🥰

Very nice and reliable

Super awesome, worth watching

It's really good. I hope the author can keep writing.

It's really good to watch. The main character is just stuck in my fantasy. I always wanted to watch him be a professor. It's great.

It's very interesting. The relationship between the heroine and Severus is very good, and the teacher-student relationship between the heroine and Dumbledore is also very good.

Very interesting, very logical and very coherent It really gets better and better the more I watch it. The back part is very exciting and interlocking. I want to know if Vera and Barty Jr. Have been together [Sending my heart]

The logic is clear and closely followed step by step. Good looking, Love to watch, See more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !