
Doomsday: The Alloy Mage
末日:合金法师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- Ten Years into the Apocalypse, I Turned Earth into a Dead Star末日十年,我把地球改造成死星Alternate title on Fanqie
708Chapters
372Reads
6.7Score
182Shelves
91Listens
260.1kReads · all time
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The setting of spawning monsters at the beginning of the train is very creative, but if you have to get so many monsters and attributes on one train and gather the team at once, then the book is basically finished. If you can't continue writing later, you can only write about the outer world. The attribute crystal core should have a one in ten thousand chance. Gray should only increase the physical strength. A certain amount of gray improves the first-level attributes. The protagonist's destiny starts with the first one to open attributes, then coerces the survivors, recruits a small group that can be used, cleans the train, and barely rises to two and a half levels. At the end of the train, you encounter a first-level and a half monster. Clean it up and control the train to go back to your hometown. Don't go too close to the city. Go farther from the urban-rural combination. Then find time to gather a combat team to go back to the city to pick up your parents (personally, I think it's better for the parents to die to increase the hatred value from the zombies). After picking up the parents, go back to the gathering place and then start from the suburbs and advance into the city step by step to collect supplies and clean up the zombies. There must be a mountain near the train track. Set up camp on the mountain facing away from the track and establish a preliminary base. If you can fight the zombie wave, do it a few times. If you can't, do it. Just take the train and run away. Get two or so attributes during the cleanup process. Give them to the right subordinates, encounter monsters, supply supplies and collect women. Until the army stably enters the field, help out, get weapons by the way, and further develop the base and your core team. Until a large-scale zombie wave begins, run away, change places, improve while fighting, grow in power, and finally return to the starting point. Clear everything, build a fortress, wait until the sea starts to attack the land, and another wave of fishing and monster upgrades. Collect attributes along the way, and the team is established. Ten or twelve people T1 T2T3 is fifty or one hundred and fifty. Your personal T is minus 0.5 (The best thing is to get a one-billionth fusion crystal core. You are lucky enough to explode two attribute bits, becoming the only three attributes. All the major military forces in various countries only master two attributes). Then go around to clean up the obstacles in the official base. This section can write a lot of zombie tides, strange tides, until it is almost 10, which is around level 9.8. The first matrix is discovered by you and you accidentally touch it. If a person is teleported into the starry sky, you can start the second book. If you insert some natural disasters in the middle, it will be more interesting. At least a thousand chapters will be needed. In my humble opinion, don't blame me.
This is a high-scoring masterpiece, but the transition between the second and third chapters is very sudden, as if it was suddenly transported from an urban inspirational article about a middle-aged man looking for a way out to a post-apocalyptic supernatural survival article. However, it can only be said that the author's writing is really good. I feel that even if this is not an apocalyptic article, it can still be a good article if I go to work in northern Xinjiang. The character creation is also very good. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own personality. The protagonist is not suddenly inhumane, but also very sane. I haven't seen any obvious poisonous points in Chapter 84. It's really good. But the pace of this book is very fast. According to the setting described by the author, the zombies evolve quite quickly. For the needs of the plot and combat power, the protagonist's progress is also very fast. There is no sign of collapse in combat power, which is quite reasonable. But at this rate of zombie evolution, I think except for a few strong men and the protagonist, can anyone really survive? The author must grasp this point and not make the zombies too abnormal. Give a final rating Five stars for story setting, five stars for smooth plot, and five stars for characterization. Four stars for combat power control and five stars for text errors and omissions The rest is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. In short, I think that as long as the author keeps writing at this pace, he will end up with a masterpiece of post-apocalyptic supernatural survival writing with a score of 9.0 Or above.
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According to a post-apocalyptic novel, it is possible to get a score of 9, and the golden three chapters are okay, but the transition is a bit stiff, and the protagonist's character is decisive and decisive. I have seen many comment sections complaining about women. Although I don't know if she is the heroine, but this woman has actually done a good job, and the writing in a post-apocalyptic novel is not bad, so she should be rated 9 Oops, the more you look at the back, the more uncomfortable it becomes. The protagonist and the others must have been too miserable.
It looks pretty good so far, but I just want to complain about it. Hundreds of zombies on the train produced four elemental crystals. After getting off the train, there were about three to four hundred zombies that were cleaned up, and there were more first-level zombies than on the train. As a result, not a single elemental crystal came out. Is it suppressing the development speed? Other forces have not been written yet. Will there be an proliferation of elemental powers from other forces in the future?
The God of War in the community has always emphasized the need to go out. We are all brothers and have not been baptized by socialism. I can't even believe my parents now.
@ The names of Li Xu and Guo Xiang's abilities are written backwards. Li Xu awakened first as fire, and Guo Xiang awakened as wind. It was always the other way around. The burning fireball suddenly collapsed and turned into a red light and returned to his palm. Li Xu took a deep breath, with a relieved expression on his face: "I can recover about half of the energy. As long as the fire is not extinguished, I can 'eat' it back to replenish the energy in my body." Zhang Heng raised his eyebrows, a hint of appreciation flashing in his eyes.
Finally, here comes one that is enjoyable to watch, and the pace is so tight that I can't stop watching it. The only drawback is, give me more 😠😠😠!
As long as you get through the first few chapters, the following chapters are all excellent. I advise some readers not to just read the first few chapters and give up if they think they are not good. After watching it for so long, I always feel that some of the plots are too long-winded. It took more than a dozen shots to defeat a boss and I still didn't finish it.
Very interesting, the main character is neither a virgin nor cold-blooded!