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I hope the author can write at his own pace. I haven't seen such a story in a long, long time, which focuses on the main line, daily life, friendship, and a possible developing love line, and each part accounts for just the right proportion, and is delicate and can reflect the characteristics of each character. The most important thing is the beginning of the war zone. The attitude and change of the masked people towards the suspicious heroine are very real. After all, if she is a spy, it may kill them, and accepting her rashly is a joke with their lives. This article is a piece of cake! Thin! Bran! ! ! ! ! [Congratulations] I wanted to give full marks, but I saw someone saying that if the fanfic score was too high, it would be banned, so I had to endure the pain and give it a 4-star rating.

The emotional line is thin and long, which makes people feel very comfortable. This is how the plot should develop. In other words, the current emotional line is not obvious. It is mainly about the growth path and the running-in between the team, which makes it feel very alive. The characters of Team 141 feel very stable to me. Each character has its own flaws, but they are all within control. This stability makes me feel that these are top-notch soldiers, and I don't feel that they are just new villains from Arkham. Y/N also has a very motivated personality. She will study hard even if she is not strong at the beginning, and she is cleverly designed to be good at technology, which also avoids many problems. Overall, she doesn't feel like a spoiled wife or a Mary Sue. She is a very good character.

It's so good-looking. This is the first COD I have collected on Yangshizi. The plot is not sluggish and the inner descriptions of the characters are also very delicate. I don't know why there are so few comments here. If you put this book next door, it will definitely get a lot of likes.

It's so nice to see the family, König's emotional changes are described very delicately! This is the most three-dimensional description of könig that I have seen so far. It is not just a door panel of social terror! He is also a professional commando who slowly opens his heart to accept YN, cares about YN, is obsessed with YN, and cannot live without YN! Progress step by step, family members! Top quality! Must not miss it

Seeing so far, I don't have any shortcomings. I think the 141 team is relatively rigorous. Regarding Xiao Ke's character setting, I think it is very suitable. An assaulter and scorer warrior in the front must have very careful observation. So far, I think the overall plot progress is very good. Madam, are there any other cute characters in the follow-up? Actually I can still eat it. Have you considered writing a new article about k's mother (hehe) or other people's wives? This writing style is really good and very delicate. I like it! By the way, if I write new articles, can I write 200,000 words in one day? (Eye moves) I don't mean anything else. I just think that a powerful person like my wife can definitely write 200,000 words a day.

It's very real. The process of getting acquainted with everyone and establishing connections is gradual and unpleasant. The same goes for the relationship development with Xiao Ke! And I think there are very few Ke OOC parts in this book. It really fits the development process of falling in love with Ke, and the sense of immersion is maximal! The author is very professional!

Super beautiful, thank you teacher [Adoration]

The description is very professional and the emotions are warm [blowing kiss]

The author's emotional lines are very delicate and flowing! It's been a long time since I've seen such a slow but comfortable natural flow of writing! Furthermore, the author writes the task execution in a very professional and logical way, with a sense of coexistence of rationality and sensibility! It's great to watch!

This book is really great! ! ! ! ! ! Trust me! ! !

Very delicate portrayal of emotions, not deliberately sweet for the sake of sweetness

The writing is exquisite and the characters are well described [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] The author loves you so much [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Tell the story carefully and well. I really like how smart and hardworking I am.

Beautiful war, fascinating

Great, great, great, great!

The writing is delicate and beautiful.

It's delicious, it's delicious, it's delicious [shy][shy][shy][shy]

I can't do this anymore [shy]

Xiao Ke, Xiao Ke, why are you so cute🥰🥰🥰🥰

Delicious, delicious Xiaoke is so cute

It's so well written, and the extra is so heartwarming that it makes you want to cry.

The character's personality is well understood, the writing is also very good, and it's very comfortable to read.

Super pretty! ! ! Great writing! ! !

It's very beautiful, it's a long-lasting love

I like the relationship line with Xiao Ke, and the main plot is also very interesting. It's great to watch👍👍👍[Adoration]

It's quite interesting, but the description is a bit long and not concise, but the plot progresses reasonably.

This book is so beautiful and has a clear structure. O(*≧▽≦)ツ

Very detailed and well written, go go go go go! ! ! ! ! ! ! Come on for more! ! ! !

It's very beautiful and warm. I like it very much!