Stealing Pens: the House with the Strongest Connection in Laojiumen

Okay, this author is also writing about awesome Foklas, okay, I just told my whole family to call me to resign, to drop out of school, and to read this novel full-time at home, okay, I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how beautiful his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to read 200 chapters every day. This thing is awesome. Doubao helped me generate bikini photos of the author. Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and os finally allowed me to eat something delicious. The author updates twice a day and it is very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It is very well written. Li Zhiyu and Chen Pi are both awesome Klass. It's awesome, ok, ok, I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

Family, do you know how beautiful this is? I've seen a lot of fanfiction that steals pens, and it's boring until I read this one! It's not surprising at all, the plot is quite interesting, and it's fun to watch! It piqued my interest in stolen pens! Madam, please don't stop updating.

The writing is good and beautiful, but the character design is somewhat different from the original work. The part where Zhang Qishan has Faqiu Zhi is a mistake in principle, because Zhang Qishan does not have Faqiu Zhi at all. Zhang Qishan is a collateral line and cannot be exposed to Faqiu Zhi. Faqiu Zhi can only be learned by direct lineage. This is the reason for missing one star. If you can accept that it is not OOC, the author wrote it very well and the plot is particularly interesting. I recommend reading it. The author is really good. He has changed it back to [shy]. It is worth reading!

It looks really good to me now! I think the characters are really well created. They are not just callous and indifferent. The Qi Ba Ye area is really warm. As for their plot, I also feel that it fits well. As for the writing style, I really think the writing style is really good. Very good ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎, I really like it, and the author also made the image of the characters in Laojiumen, which I feel is quite consistent (´இωஇ｀). I don't feel anything at the moment, it's very serious OOC or something, it looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

It's very beautiful, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the original people are very vivid. The writing is very comfortable and can be read. What's more, I think it's very valuable that the plot settings are very smooth and reasonable. There are many fanfics that make me feel uncomfortable after reading them. I don't know why the character in the setting suddenly behaves like this, or how such a thing suddenly occurs. I feel that the smoothness is similar to Xiang Liu's book, but it's a pity that the back of that book is not good-looking. With Chen Pi and the people in the Nine Gates, especially the sense of intertwined fate with Chen Pi, I also really like to see this kind of daily human relationships, time becomes closer because of the details, it is very reasonable, it is very touching, and then the heroine's own ideas are very good, very logical, and it is really well written. There are still too few chapters, and I feel that the previous ones are all written. Great, please keep updating the author again. I may think of reviewing it later, but I have a very big concern, that is, I am really worried that the transition from the Nine Gates to one era to another era is particularly easy to collapse. Many really good fanfics collapsed at this place and started to lose their appeal. I hope this one will not The most important thing about a novel is that the first few chapters and introduction can retain readers. You won't lose money if you invest in it, just read it.

It is rare to see something that is not a time-travel + system. The heroine from this perspective is more integrated, does not violate the harmony, and truly writes the weight of the old nine gates. Moreover, the CP between the heroine and Chen Pi is so good that it is always unclear. But I still care about your feelings. The sugar explosion is a fine grain not to be missed. Well, dear author, you should write 25 hours of novels in 24 hours now [KISS]

I came across this by chance today. It's really super beautiful. After watching it all afternoon, I finally tied it. [Shy] The language is very delicate and reads very smoothly. Every dialogue and thought feels natural and smooth, not obtrusive at all. [Heartfelt] The image of the heroine is also great. She really writes about the process from confusion to perseverance, not a thin and cold one. Blood may only have that kind of innocent and ignorant plane, but it builds up a super distinct three-dimensional image through one event after another. The most important thing is that every step the heroine makes can feel that she is very smart, whether it is the writing style, the plot or the character image, every aspect is impeccable, it is really awesome [Adoration][Adoration]

The writing style is really good, the wording is very precise, the structure is clear, the transition is natural, and the characters are not OOC. Xiaoyu and Chen Pi are like two homeless kittens hugging each other for warmth. It is warm and tortuous, but it is not enough [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][ Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart ][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][ Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][ Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart]

After reading it for a while, I felt that the writing was delicate and the pace was okay but not very fast. Maybe it was because I didn't read many chapters. I think the images of the protagonists and characters are gradually becoming richer and more distinct, and are not generated with just one click. Let me tell you what I think now, and I will add more when I see it later.

After seeing the introduction, I originally thought it was a cliché plot, but as the plot deepens, it is more worth watching. There is no main plot right from the beginning. This is exactly the difference from other books. It does not make me feel cliche. Instead, it feels more unique and arouses my interest. And even if there is no main plot narrative, I quite like it and it resonates with me. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] And the author is like me, a junior high school student who can write so well, it's really amazing. Never mind, it just looks great.

The character creation is very detailed, maybe the rating was low when it first came out, but it is highly recommended. I want to ask, if these two really get along, then my daughter will always have to eat the longevity knife, and will she have to eat the big knife in the future [I'm about to cry]

This book is clearly priced without CP, but the author's writing about tangerine peel is ambiguous. If you mind, please don't read. In addition, like me, I turned off comments for suggestions without CP. Everyone in the comment section of this book is in need of love.

I stayed up late until 4:30 in the morning. Let me put it this way, the writing style of this book gave me the illusion that I was reading a paid article. I was lucky enough to find a treasure. This author's writing style and plot are so good that he has no problem writing a paid article. The quality is outstanding and it is very interesting. I highly recommend it! ! !

Nice! It took two days to tie it! (No spoilers below) The first thing I want to say is that I have never read Tomb Raiders Notes, but this book is really friendly to people like me. Even though I have not read the original work, I still enjoyed it and there was almost nothing I couldn't understand. Then the author's writing style is really delicate, which is what retained me. There are so many details, so the characters are also portrayed in detail. You can clearly feel the characteristics of each person, and the characteristics of these people are also thoroughly reflected in each incident. Then comes the plot and the creation of the heroine. I won't comment too much on the plot because I haven't read the original work. I don't know whether the plot is in the original work or the author made it up himself. But the plot is really awesome. You can see the growth of the heroine in every big and small event. It makes people feel that the author has a thorough observation of human nature. The psychological journey of each character is reasonable and understandable. The heroine, our Xiaoyu, has won my heart. This sober but affectionate character, this kind of pyrotechnics with a bumpy growth path but being accompanied by others really attract me. There should be no spoilers in this book review, right? Recommended for friends who haven't gotten into the trap yet to come and watch it!

There are no small OC situations that are common in fan fiction. The writing is very good and the true feelings are revealed (this is my personal feeling, because I really think the author's writing is very good. Of course, well, my personal feelings do not represent everyone's feelings, so you still need to see many other situations by yourself. I think he really writes well)

Super pretty! No loss in investment The writing style when writing about daily life is amazing, and the sense of pictures coming to my face almost makes me feel angry, haha I also like the pulling feeling. Anyway, please update quickly (ง •̀_•́)ง I almost never comment. It's really beautiful🐮

I'm really not bragging, this is one of the few books I like. I have a very high standard and will not read it if it's not good at all. This book is super good! Really, there is only one book that I like the most so far, but it is not this one, but it can become my second favorite. It is very good-looking, and there is no CP yet. The other CPs that write CPs do not pay attention to the plot, but the emotional line of this book is really good, not too much, not too little. I like it very much (not to belittle other books, just a personal opinion, don't say it about me). I hope the author can update more, it is really good, I want to keep reading!

This is one of the few articles that I haven't skipped a chapter. The writing is very good and the characters are very three-dimensional. It is not a cool novel that just uses golden fingers. The transitions in the article are also supernatural, with a sense of reality that feels like it is really happening. I was just casually browsing, but I didn't expect to find such a treasure. Ask the author for more information

This book is really good! Because I don't write much book reviews, this review may not be able to reflect my love for this book (actually, I suddenly thought of writing a review in my life). Although I haven't read too many Tomb Raiders fanfics, this one is really my favorite. The writing style is gentle and the characters are portrayed very well. I particularly like this heroine. Her character directly hits my XP. She is capable and rational. The pace of the writing is not particularly fast, but the flow is slow and slow. Of course, I also particularly like this. She is not a time travel, but a local, and there is no system. There are really too few such stories. I don't know why when I read some time travel stories, I always feel that the heroine is too abrupt in this world (there are also very good time travel stories, maybe because I have met so few). Don't just look at the ratings. Not many people have read this book. It will definitely increase in the future. Everyone's taste is different. You can read a few chapters first and then consider whether to continue reading in the future. I'm still not good at writing long reviews, so I'll wait until later to follow up. In short, come on, author, I really can't save a single chapter. I hope this book can be read by more people [Sending my heart]

I don't really like the story of Lao Jiumen, but this is really one of the few fanfics that I think is well written in this area (the expression is a bit convoluted🤣). It's really good. I like Xiaoyu's character and the interactions between Xiaoyu and important characters such as Chen Pi, Ba Ye, Wu Ye, Fo Ye, Jie Jiu, Er Er Hong, etc. The daily descriptions are also very warm. From the first chapter, I felt that the author wrote very well. You can try to read this novel. You won't lose money if you invest in it [Cool]

Nice! The plot of "Hang Zhong Hong" is full of ups and downs, and I don't want to stop at all. The characters are also very perfect, and Xiaoyu is also very awesome. Big cheers for the author! ! ! (Show them all to me- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-)

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Damn [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Don't stop updating, it's hard to find such a good book [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The writing style is quite good and the narrative is also good. I just hope there won't be CP. I just want the family to be warm and welcoming. I hope there won't be CP. 🙏

It's really super good to read, and the plot is also very good. It's the kind I like. I've read a lot of fics, and this one is very good. I really want to read it! ! ! [Shy][Learned][Learned][Learned]

Look good❤️Come on, teacher! Not enough to see! Where will you write? Will you write about the second tomb? But this plot is indeed too much, haha. I just think the teacher's writing is very good. It's so good that it's not enough. As long as the teacher keeps updating, I will always support him [blowing kiss]

This book is simply awesome. The descriptions of the super-good-looking characters are super three-dimensional, and some of his descriptions are also particularly delicate. The writing is very good. Like like like like like like! ! ! ! ! ! ! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Come on!

It's good-looking, not cliché, the plot is exciting, the heroine's growth line seems very natural at the moment, and it's finally possible to see normal writing and exciting content, but there are too few, and it's tied immediately, and the author's wife is the one who exploded [Please update][Please update][Please update]

It's a very good book. The writing style is outstanding in Tomato. I like the character of the heroine very much. She is calm, self-possessed and values ​​love and justice. She is smart, cautious and eager to learn, but she also has the impulsive and erroneous side of a child. She is a group pet junior who has been cultivated by the big guys of the Nine Gates. The current Jade Faced Yama is also fragrant [shy]. Please don't care about this rating and take a look. By the way, the person who sent the fax was very dissatisfied. I thought it was for loading and almost took it away [face covering]

The main plot is very slow, exaggerating the tender attention of the major forces of the Nine Gates to the heroine, but the feelings are very delicate, eloquent, sticky, uneasy, and caring. The role of Chen Pi continues the feeling of the old Nine Gates in the drama version, which is fascinating.