“I… transmigrated? Super God Academy? The world where angels, demons, and Taotie swarm through the skies, and Earth gets crushed like an ant?”
Cold sweat instantly soaked his back. He jerked his gaze toward the date in the lower-right corner of the computer screen.
The Tianhe Battle in Juxia City, countdown: three years!
Just as despair washed over him like icy water, a cold, precise synthetic voice, unlike anything produced by a living being, sounded in the depths of his mind:
[Compatible Host detected… Civilization Seed bearer confirmed.]
[God-Tier Civilization Rise System activated.]
[Initially bound civilization: Huaxia. Ultimate objective: Guide civilization beyond eternity.]
[Beginner’s mission issued: Within 24 hours, create a verifiable object that surpasses the average technological level of this era by 50 years. Success reward: 100 Technology Points and the basic theory of “Information Black Zone.” Failure penalty: System unbound, memories erased.]
A translucent pale-blue interface unfolded before him. An enormous technology tree, most of it grayed out, shimmered with enticing light. Beside several dim icons at the very bottom were words that made his heart pound: Dark Alloy smelting, basic genetic enhancement, quantum chaos communications…
Lin Feng took a deep breath, forcing down the turmoil in his heart as he surveyed the crude instruments and raw materials scattered across the lab bench before him. The knowledge from his previous life surged through his mind, faintly resonating with the System interface.
Three years… No, maybe it wouldn’t take that long.
He wiped the cold sweat from his brow. His bewildered gaze quickly sharpened like a blade, and his fingers brushed over a draft about the structure of a new carbon material, something its original owner had dismissed as worthless.
The author should not just focus on research. Those technologies must be developed and popularized as soon as possible. Otherwise, why not put them in the laboratory to see? And don't be influenced by the narrow concepts of the Super Seminary. If a super gene goes to theocracy, isn't it elitism and feudalism? Our advantage is popularization. When people do not need to do things for basic physiological needs, can true communism be realized? Everyone goes to do what they want to do
The pace feels too draggy. Moreover, the perspective is too small, and it basically revolves around the protagonist. It always gives people the impression that the entire story is based on one base, and each picture continues to strengthen the sense of urgency. But the overall content feels very narrow. It lacks a sense of grandeur.
Such a start to Super Seminary is quite interesting. If you think about it, the only drawback is that your writing is a bit too slow. It would be better to enter the text faster. Change the timeline and let the glory of China shine again in the world.
Use less AI expansion. Reading a bunch of descriptions is boring. It is clear that the details can be described in just a few sentences, but you have to add a lot of rigid modifiers. It does not increase the level of detail, but makes it very uncomfortable to read.
Overall, the writing is pretty good, but there are two problems. First, the pace is a little slow. For example, the chapter about Karl's research tentacles is a bit redundant. If Karl wanted to study it, he would have studied it long ago and would not have put it into the present. Another problem is that the perspective is a bit single, and the overall feeling is a bit like a one-man show. Many places give people the feeling of talking about themselves, and the overall look is a bit fragmented.
If you're still waiting for someone's angel to come and bring justice, tell him directly that the devil is next door to me, why don't you go and fight him? Are you following justice? Saw us fighting the devil. Still watching. [Punch hard]
It's this kind of infrastructure novel again. It starts with dozens of chapters about construction, and there aren't even dozens of chapters where the characters don't even show their faces, fighting wits and courage against the air... Less than half of the entire book will not be officially contacted. Is this kind of fandom really good?
The opening scene explodes.
The young man pretended to be cool. The first battle at the beginning was a fight between primary school students. The gluttonous invaders massacred the city. When the Beijing came to counterattack, he pretended to be 13 and shouted, letting others focus the fire first and wasting his own energy. A real battle would only involve sneaking in silence and blasting away directly.
I can't complain. We are reading novels. I understand.