Alias [If we have a clear conscience]
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Because the name of the contracted work cannot be changed, so let's leave it like this for now.
Newbie writing, OOC warning, he finale!
[Intent: Love gives us choices]
"Come here, my poor child"
"No, it's not over yet!"
"Traitor"
He stood in front of the door, and the colorful light slipped through the crack.
He grasped the handle of the knife tightly, blood flowed down the blade and fell with a "pop" sound.
Fireworks burned the night. In this temporary escape, they slept opposite each other, facing their undisclosed selfish motives.
I know I have a guilty conscience
Reader comments
The writing style is fresh, the language is magnificent and beautiful, and the writing is fluent (although some metaphors cannot be seen, maybe I am not reading it with my brain) and some descriptions read like a spring poem... The plot is bold and innovative (has someone finally written about Draco and Harry traveling to a new era, yay!) However, some contexts cannot be connected, and the boss can fix it. All in all, highly recommended! !
By the way, Boss's writing style is indeed very intoxicating, like a dream with colorful lights, but sometimes these descriptions lack the foreshadowing of the plot, which makes it a bit confusing to read and not plain enough... But I hope Boss will not give up on this book! The upper limit is really high! I will always support the boss! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's super good-looking, the plot structure is very good, and I will fill in the gaps later. I highly recommend watching it. I really, really recommend watching this plot. I didn't even expect it. It's a very novel plot. Well, it just shines in front of my eyes. It doesn't make people feel that it is just ordinary. There are other storylines, and there are others waiting. I'm very much looking forward to it.
I really like this novel. It is explained more clearly and organized.
The writing style is fresh, the language is magnificent and beautiful, and the writing is fluent (although some metaphors cannot be seen, maybe I am not reading it with my brain) and some descriptions read like a spring poem... The plot is bold and innovative (has someone finally written about Draco and Harry traveling to a new era, yay!) However, some contexts cannot be connected, and the boss can fix it. All in all, highly recommended! ! By the way, Boss's writing style is indeed very intoxicating, like a dream with colorful lights, but sometimes these descriptions lack the foreshadowing of the plot, which makes it a bit confusing to read and not plain enough... But I hope Boss will not give up on this book! The upper limit is really high! I will always support the boss! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's super good-looking, the plot structure is very good, and I will fill in the gaps later. I highly recommend watching it. I really, really recommend watching this plot. I didn't even expect it. It's a very novel plot. Well, it just shines in front of my eyes. It doesn't make people feel that it is just ordinary. There are other storylines, and there are others waiting. I'm very much looking forward to it.
I really like this novel. It is explained more clearly and organized.