[A fun-loving protagonist + cultivation + no romance + ensemble cast + female lead’s growth]
Transmigrate as an orphan on the brink of death, get bound to a deification quest, and activate the Hidden Heiress Roleplay System.
Lin Zhi: OK, got it. I’ll stick to my script.
Top-grade ice spirit root + an incredible comprehension cheat. Six levels of Qi Refining in two months, then straight to first place in the outer sect competition.
Audience: She’s totally cheating!
During a secret-realm trial, a Golden Core monster suddenly appears, and the elite disciples from all six sects are sent tumbling head over heels.
Lin Zhi: Is this part of the plot too?!
At the critical moment, she pulls out a Mary Sue jade pendant and, gritting her teeth, recites her line: “Where is my guardian?”
Whoosh! Two late-stage Golden Core experts make a dazzling entrance, instantly take down the monster, then turn and bow. “Young Miss.”
Lin Zhi: ??? Aren’t you embarrassed?!
Impossible choices, inexplicable opportunities, a strange System, and mysteries surrounding her origins come one after another.
Lin Zhi only wants to cultivate in peace, but amid all the chaos, she eventually carves out an extraordinary path to immortality that is truly her own.
(A blank space is adding a little buff here, since a reader had a suggestion and I wanted newcomers to see it.)
This isn’t a power fantasy. It’s a story about the female lead’s growth.
The pacing is relatively slow, and as a new writer, I may not be very skilled. If you’re interested, that would be an honor!
One last timid request: please go easy on me, everyone. I’m begging you 🙈
It's not bad. The plot is relatively slow and not very exciting. The "Where is the Guardian" part is the most exciting. It could use a little more pretentious plot to make it more attractive.
I like this theme and the character design of the protagonist is also 🉑️. But I don't like the writing style very much. The author's writing style is good, but I think the description of the characters could be more detailed. And I'm not sure if it's my problem. I think the punctuation is a bit weird. Some sentences are broken when they should be, and some are broken in other places to make it look unsmooth 🤔 Great job, author. (Blank is really making progress. He is a very obedient author. The progress from the first few chapters to the present is really obvious.) I really like the five little ones fighting side by side. They have a good friendship. Lin Zhi's growth line is also good. From entering the Tao to the present foundation building, there is no exaggerated golden finger. The foundation building part is written in great detail. In the end, the perfect foundation building is achieved. I look forward to this story getting better and better!
It's not bad. I read the book title and thought it was a good story, but it's actually a story about the heroine's growth. It's currently equal to 88 chapters. I feel that it's just as good as "The Guardian" and nothing else. If you like the story about the heroine's growth, you can read it. If you want to read a story about the heroine's growth, forget it.
Come on, it's very well written!! It's just that I'm not very good at describing fighting scenes. You can work hard to do better. I believe you can. 😘😘😘 "Comparing one's heart" "Comparing one's heart"
It's good to read, don't stop reading it just because the author didn't think carefully about the chapter titles.
The writing style and characters are more to my liking, keep it up
Big boost for the author, it looks great and you have to have confidence in yourself!
It's probably just that the fight in a dungeon scene was a little too long, making it a bit boring to watch. Everything else is pretty good
It's very interesting. I like this kind of funny writing style. I look forward to more updates from the author🥰
Lin Zhihe, the system and system rewards are all cute