Two Realms: Pokémon Helped Me Reach Immortality

Both worlds have roles. Problems in one world can be answered in the other. However, I personally feel that the cruel aspects of cultivating immortals and the world of Pokémon can be written in more detail. I feel that it is too smooth sailing now [cool] There are too many scenes in Hua Chanye, and the upgrade speed is frighteningly fast. The logic has not yet been explained. It is a branch of the spiritual grass. To gain the heart of the grass and trees in the world of cultivation, you must embrace the thighs of a big family and absorb the power of the grass and trees in a specific year and place. The protagonist is to travel between two worlds, buy talismans in the Immortal Cultivation Chronicle, and squeeze the power of the plants and trees in the Pokémon world. If you want to obtain the Bai family's territory in the Immortal Cultivation World, you can only wait a few years. That Hua Chan Ye lacks all resources and has no way to obtain the heart of grass and branches. She is always written about her hydrology. It is better to write her to death before entering elementary school.

Very good. I originally thought it was the kind of brainless two-world transmission, system invincibility text, but it turns out that it is not the case. There is a foreign world plug-in, but it can be restrained. It is used very carefully in order to prevent others from discovering it. [Thinking] [Thinking] The protagonist is very cautious, very tolerant, and decisive in killing. He has IQ and is not a virgin. [Punch] [Punch] The character is very suitable for me. Appetite, the protagonist's world is a fantasy world of cultivating immortals, and he can travel into a Pokémon world (a world that is a fusion of modern Pokémon and Pokémon, not a purely primitive elf world). As far as I can see, it is a five-star good book. Although the pace is a bit slow, it is well written and has the potential of a divine book. The author should update it soon. Don't be too late. This kind of subject is rare [laughing][laughing]

I have recommended this book several times, but every time I read the beginning and threw it away, thinking about some messy elf writing. Until this time I patiently looked at the back. OK OK! What a cyber cultivator, a cyber cultivator dressed in elf writing, whose writing style is very slow. No other cyber cultivator writes with such passion, but I think the author handled it very well. I almost missed it. This should be in the category of cybernetic cultivators. I was almost confused about the niche literature written at the beginning. Modify the score. Hua Chanye's promotion is simply unreasonable. His qualifications are incredible, but how can he make up for the resource gap? The author doesn't write it clearly, even if it says that the protagonist is funded, or she turns on the resource link, it can be understood. If it is still written like this in the future, I think the book may not exceed 8.5 Points.

Magnificent imagination, Hu Hu's "biological alchemy furnace", the Purple Jade Overlord Flower that transcends two realms of time and space to obtain its essence, the fairy version of Eevee..., The magnificent fusion of immortality and Pokémon is the ultimate collision of ambition and rationality against the background of dark and cold reality!

The overall look and feel is okay. I have my own ideas about the themes and ideas across the world, including creating my own Pokémon in the later stage. The main world is a world of cultivators, not Pokémon. The Pokémon world is also urban fiction, not the original anime. The latest cultivation level is the Nascent Soul stage, and the progress is not bad. At least compared to other immortal cultivation texts, there are more words and inks when breaking through each stage, and normal cultivation is covered in one stroke, which is a relatively good advantage. The reason why I gave it 4 points instead of 5 points is because the AI ​​flavor is too strong, and the artificiality of AI can be seen between the lines. If it is not AI, then the author's writing style is too AI. Normal writing is either in certain scenes or in general vernacular. This article seems to be a bit full of nonsense. The heroine is multi-talented, with main, um, emotional scenes and some school lines, which are the three main themes of ancient novels. It's a bit old but not too wrong. Overall it's OK. It's a pity that the main world is a cultivator and not a Pokémon ai ai ai Say important things three times, this AI generator really made up the word count

I've read about 300 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. Advantages: The subject matter is really good! I really like the theme of combining Pokémon and immortality. The author's writing style is smooth, not a clichéd white text, but gives people a sense of the real world. Disadvantages: The description of the background in the novel, the description of the characters' psychology, and even the description of doing one thing are too detailed. It affects the reading experience, especially in the first few chapters, which almost delays the plot until more than 20 chapters. It feels like there are too many descriptive things, and it is most obvious when listening to the book that I have to skip chapters to read it. But things will improve after Chapter 200, and the plot will obviously speed up. Then the plot content is relatively depressing. It is obvious that the author has more experience and will bring a lot of thinking into the plot. This also leads to a lack of enjoyment. After reading more than 300 chapters, many times the protagonist's harvest should have been a refreshing scene, but it was suppressed by the protagonist's excessive thinking and sense of worry. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to your next work.

It's a very novel setting. Although I've only read Chapter 25, it doesn't matter how novel the subject matter is. It is also a depiction of the human relationship between people. The protagonist seizes every opportunity to play scheming games on people, and has an urgent desire to be injected with spiritual marrow. It made me heartbroken when I watched it. Also, I saved the fellow traveler who is the same type of person as the protagonist. I think it is necessary because the journey of cultivating immortality is too lonely. . The writing is also good. I just don't know what will happen to combat descriptions in the future. But I am willing to give five stars here.

After reading Chapter 17, I can't help but praise it. This book is really good. The protagonist's IQ and ability are good in all aspects, but the balance between Pokémon's strength and immortality must be balanced. After all, Pokémon grow very fast. In fact, it's better to switch to the world of beast control. If not, add some original content. The Pokémon's food and immortality resources exceed the upper limit. I suggest the author balance the strength comparison. Anyway, in terms of appearance, I personally like Pokémon very much.

It's good, it's good. It's just that the hook for Hua Chanye is too big. The protagonist is desperately plotting, but she inexplicably keeps up.

Xiancao, I don't know why the rating is so low, I stayed up all night to read the latest chapter The subject matter is very novel and perfectly combines the two world systems. The protagonist has a calm personality and likes to research and develop new things.

It's watchable, but the pace is not as slow as usual. The latest chapter hasn't started officially yet. It's a 100% failure at the beginning, let alone a fast-paced platform like Tomato.

Highly recommended! The setting of traveling between two realms + Pokémon cultivating immortality is so creative, the plot is exciting and dense, and the world view is well built without any clichés. The author's updates are stable, the writing is smooth, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the use of Pokémon's abilities is also consistent with the original work. I can't stop reading. It is definitely a high-quality product in the same category. I highly recommend everyone to read it!

I don't know why it doesn't become popular. Whether it's the protagonist's iron-blooded skills in the cruel and dark Pokémon world, or the protagonist's path to seek truth in the modern world of immortality, the book is particularly deeply rooted in people's hearts. Not to mention that the author has written these two worlds together, which makes it even more unique. And the author doesn't favor one over the other, both worlds have enough drama. There are also shortcomings: one is an emotional drama, the plot is there, but the male and female protagonists always say they owe each other. From before the female protagonist proposes to the male protagonist, I thought the author just wanted to write about comradeship; the other is not really a shortcoming. The author wrote about traveling between two worlds, and the opportunity to cultivate the immortal world is over. The other opportunity must be in the Pokémon world, which can only be said to be unreasonable. There are also advantages to writing this way, that is, the existence of both worlds is very strong. Finally, this book is the fifth book on Tomato that I like so much, and I sincerely recommend it (my two Tomato books are 4000h+).

It's pretty good, not cliche…

The novel world mode, the golden finger that travels between two worlds, the ancient world of immortality, the Pokémon Earth where the secret realm comes, the collision of worlds, the combination of immortality and Pokémon, the cultivation mode has also changed a lot, it is the first time to see the fairy species The core model of cultivating immortals is to look forward to this immortal species, not to be too limited to immortal plants, and hope that this immortal species will have more specialized branches. For example, the immortal species contains all spirits, and various immortal species can be distinguished based on each person's thoughts, such as spiritual weapons and spiritual objects. , The technique hopes to be more closely connected with Pokémon, that is, the protagonist's path to immortality is very closely connected with Pokémon. Nowadays, many fairy tales about cultivating immortals and spiritual beasts clearly distinguish between humans and spiritual pets. At most, it is a contract, and if you die, it will be replaced. At most, the cultivation level will drop by a small stage.

It's not exciting enough, a bit frustrating, and looks a bit depressing. Although the storyline is well set up and the writing is okay.

It's really good, a rare double-crossing article. I feel that the world view is very grand (the world of wizards, the world of immortals, the modern world of elves, the secret realm of ancient elves...), And I hope that the protagonist will become the behind-the-scenes controller of the elves world after practicing for hundreds of thousands of years, or establish a huge private elf empire... I hope that I can persist in updating until the world view is fully unfolded, there is a lot to write about.

I read it in one sitting without feeling overwhelmed. The world view of Gou Daoliu is huge. The new type of immortality and the new world of Pokémon are intertwined to create new ideas. [Admiration] [Grief] [What] [Thinking] [Making faces] [Griefing] [Sending hearts] [What] [Making faces] [Grgrievances] [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] [Covering face] [Eating melon] [Full] [Petrochemical] [Covering face] [Petrochemical] [Almost crying] [Laughing] [Admiration] [Grgrievance] [Making face] [Spit]

The theme is novel and the interesting cultivation flow develops across the two realms of Pokémon.

Niubi, come on, come on [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [Add One to the Bookshelf] [I also strongly recommend] [The grass has been planted] The writing style is weird, the adjectives and some sentences are like a junior high school student's composition [grievance], the imagination and the current plot (there are too many coincidences, I'm a bit tired of reading [lips curled]) are all OK [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. It's not verbose or cluttered with the plot, and it's a complete book. I really like it after reading it👍🏻. It's a cultivator + Pokémon. It's not a fanfic. You don't follow the protagonist, you don't have to follow the plot, and the plot is innovative.

I have read the latest chapter. My personal suggestion is not to listen. The author should revise the previous content. Some parts were too complicated and cumbersome. It was difficult for me to read it and I would fall asleep while listening to the book. I didn't notice which chapter it started and it suddenly got better. There may be a problem of dissuading new readers. I saved nearly 90 chapters and read them all in one go. It was still good.

There are no famous scenes, no big climaxes. With one enemy against ten thousand, the situation is reversed and the world is shaken. There is no grand ambition, everyone is like a dragon, civilization leaps forward, and all living beings are equal. The plot is good, the writing is rigorous, and it is highly readable. It is considered a fine product and a good grass!

There may be loopholes in a small part of the plot (it is not very rigorous, and the world is so big and full of wonders that it can be rounded off). I personally recommend giving it a try. A rating of less than 7 is probably low, but it is definitely not.

Quite an interesting fusion of the two worlds. It's just that the details are a bit lacking. The content description focus and world view of the two worlds still need to be continuously supplemented. Communication without spirits, and exploration of information.

Well, I feel pretty good. Anyway, the subject matter is very novel and attractive. The huge system of borrowing money to cultivate immortals, and the introduction of fairy species and Pokémon factors, is not brainless. However, I feel that we need to handle the relationship between the two worlds later and don't lose our combat power. After all, Arezeus's level is not bad, and other first-level gods and phantom gods are just the same. Anyway, if you compare it to the fairyland of cultivating immortals, you may check it. You must mark the comparison of combat power.

Full marks for creativity, but I don't know how to proceed

Tomato is pretty good inside, as you can see, it becomes a bit overpowered later on, and the cultivation level in the Nascent Soul stage is completely unremarkable. In Pokémon, it's the same as nothing [face covering] Overall it's good.

After reading a few chapters, you will realize that the world view conceived by the author is really huge. I also hope that the battle force will not be unbalanced later. Overall, it is still a good work.

Oh my God, I accidentally found something good. It's so good-looking. I've seen more than 100 of them so far. It's really interesting to combine Pokémon with Cultivation, and then Cultivation is combined with Harry Potter's academy writing. It's really pretty. Pokémon is also a relatively fresh choice. I recommend it.