[Original Fall of the Old Capital in the early stage, New Elido in the later stage][Wearing][Three heroines][New author]
Yunkui Mountain!
The righteous spiritual sect!
There are many methods of practice inside! There is also a Qingming Sword!
A strange baby suddenly appeared in front of Yunkui Mountain.
The old man wearing a cloak, with a white-haired child with golden eyes on his back, and holding a white-haired child with red eyes by the hand, looked at the sudden appearance of the baby, was silent for a while, and then picked it up.
The baby on the grass was looking at the old man in front of him with deep eyes.
"... Three hundred years to the east of the river, three hundred years to the west of the river, don't bully the young devil! Just wait for me, don't let me catch you, wait for me for three hundred years, you Taoist master, I won't kill you over and over again!"
That's right, this is a second time traveling magic cultivator.
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Ether is the devilish energy, body is the food, I love it, I love it
What? ! What do you mean my favorability is growing!
What do you mean I was captured! Shouldn't I be in the boss unit?
Liu Qing, who is in Yunkui Mountain, said that he is a demon cultivator with Miao Hong's roots, how can you forcefully open his defeat CG!
I don't want this!
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"General, are we really not going to be discovered?"
"Private Yuzuha!"
"Arrived!"
"We are going to the pier to order French fries now. There is absolutely no problem with my appearance!"
Liu Qing was dressed in black and had oil paint on her face. She specifically found Fubo Youye as her hostage, but suddenly her shoulders felt heavy.
"I'm sorry, General."
"... Can we reconcile?"
This time must be a different romantic story~
Reader comments
The writing is quite good, but I don't know why there is an abstract plot like killing myself in the future. I judged that the protagonist was doing too well in the early stage, so it was recommended to kill him directly.
The suspense finally died. I didn't expect that anyone would dare to touch the independent consciousness clone these days. + The early development was stable and good, but the result was that it was destroyed in one go (it was my future body) just to advance the original plot. Both of them were poisonous.
Oh, by the way, the actual plan of Wan Zhou has not been released yet, otherwise you can add one to give the clone a girl, and you will have all the fun and thunder.
(One star for the early plot, two stars for the author's good attitude)
The writing is quite good, but I don't know why there is an abstract plot like killing myself in the future. I judged that the protagonist was doing too well in the early stage, so it was recommended to kill him directly. The suspense finally died. I didn't expect that anyone would dare to touch the independent consciousness clone these days. + The early development was stable and good, but the result was that it was destroyed in one go (it was my future body) just to advance the original plot. Both of them were poisonous. Oh, by the way, the actual plan of Wan Zhou has not been released yet, otherwise you can add one to give the clone a girl, and you will have all the fun and thunder. (One star for the early plot, two stars for the author's good attitude)