Unofficial History Misled Me

Well, first of all, the setting is good, the writing is good, the plot is good and the description is delicate, but I would like to make a few suggestions. The first one is that there are a little too many descriptions. DaDa's writing style is very good, but I feel that DaDa used to write short stories or usually like to write some fan fiction, so the descriptions in many places can actually be omitted, and they are even a little repetitive (for example, the description of the benevolence of the doctor where I saved people is two consecutive pages). Some people think that the writing is good, but too much description will make you feel tired after repeated reading. I think it can be cut down a little, simpler, and occasionally a profound sentence is the icing on the cake (for example, the defective product is not that you can go back every time you run away, which really left a deep impression). If there are too many, it will be a little boring. The second problem is the writing style (not that the writing style is not good). In fact, when it comes to promoting the plot and writing environment, the description is still very coherent, but when it comes to character description, it becomes discontinuous. Short sentences are described. I personally think that short sentences are too much. They can be thrown out at the right time to make Boruto's eyes shine, but stacking them together will make it a little tired and embarrassing. End of suggestion. The setting of this article is really attractive to me. The plot is okay, the character description is also first-rate and delicate, and the writing style is still very good. Then I beg for the crematorium. Well, I was very angry after reading this in the early stage. Although I feel regretful after reading it and the fatalism pointed out so far, the crematorium is indispensable, but it can be more ruthless, yes. In short, although there are a few problems, they are completely flawless. I don't recommend these friends to pursue it. (These suggestions are just personal opinions. Don't scold me. You are right.)

Very well written! I personally like the character of Shen Tangsong, because he knows his own future destiny, but is still willing to get involved in saving others, even strangers, and come into contact with the known but confusing fate with inexplicable sadness. I also like the previous description of Shen. The previous description of him gave me the feeling that he was sick. It was a psychological and spiritual illness. He was so lonely. It is a kind of sadness about the future and the past. For the future, it may be the known and inexplicable story line. For the past, it is alone in this time and space. The various traces of the past life are inconsistent with the present. It may not be called it, or he is a little trance. (It's just some personal understanding, and then I beg the author to write it down. I really want to read it, and pray not to stop updating and give up. Please, I want to read it [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart])

It's a really, really nice book. I read some comments before and thought it was too descriptive. I think it's a personal problem, because I really, really like these descriptions, they are very delicate, and I can especially feel Shen's powerlessness and confusion. Especially the doctor's benevolence. I read those chapters yesterday, and these four words are all in my mind today. I can't help crying every time I think about it. I am really moved by Shen's benevolence. As well as the description of the scenery in the mountains, I really felt like an epiphany at that time: The worries I have every day are just because I have trapped myself and the road is narrow. At that time, I directly thought of the sentence "Let them go to a spacious place, live happily, and live a reasonable life." The plot arrangement is also very interesting. I especially like reading books that pay attention to details. But many times, the plots of these books seem draggy due to their descriptions, making it difficult for me to keep reading. Just like Jiangnan's "Kyushu Piaomiao Lu" that I watched recently. I really liked it, but because I felt that the plot was very sparse and scattered, it was difficult to watch it coherently. I just watched it intermittently. There are very few updates to this book at the moment, but the plot is still very good, and the assassination before returning to Beijing is well arranged. To be honest, in the past two years, I have watched ancient movies, and they rarely describe the protagonist's reaction when he sees a pile of corpses for the first time. The arrangement here is really good, and the description is particularly immersive. I can really imagine the scene of fighting outside. Especially the "cursing" was really well written and very real. It suddenly made me realize that in a real fight, there would be yelling and screaming, and it was by no means a so-called scene with only the sound of weapons clashing. It's too late, I'll write it here first, and I'll add it when I have time. I am very much looking forward to the development of the plot in the future. The "I regret it" is really deeply imprinted in my mind. The author should update it quickly. I will definitely follow it to the end. After the exam, I finally have time to comment. Some time ago, I saved a lot of chapters but didn't read them, and I just finished them. I probably read the reviews of this book, and most readers found it very interesting. The controversial points are actually the so-called "slow plot advancement" and "too much attention to detail". I want to say that if you are attracted by the plot in the introduction, or if you treat this book as an online article, you will indeed be a little disappointed. Because so far, there is no shadow of the plot introduced in the introduction, and there is no particularly attractive "cooling point". But I feel that this book can help people learn something, and it should not be treated as just an online article. Shen's character makes people feel very comfortable. I like it very much and can't help but imitate him. I think he is very good at living and living a happy life. He grows flowers, and coincidentally, I will also start buying flowers and growing them from the last day of 2025. The roses have been planted in the water for more than a month. Although the flowers have withered, they have grown many leaves. I feel happy every day when I see them. He accepts the dull and repetitive life, and I can even feel a little freedom from it. I used to long for a life with different challenges every day. But my brother told me that you can't be like that every day in your life, otherwise you will be very tired. Perhaps only repetition day after day, coupled with occasional adventures, is the norm and the essence of life. I am still a person who pursues the so-called immortality, but as I grow older, I also begin to realize that immortality must endure the unbearable loneliness of ordinary people. What kind of mentality can we face immortality? It is probably peaceful, calm, able to accept everything, and able to enjoy the repetition day after day. I remember a passage about Shen's first official visit to the palace to meet the emperor and accept a reward. He walked out of the palace gate and saw Song Zhao waiting for him. The description was quite good. The next day after reading it, I began to slowly calm down my temper (I am usually a very irritable person who explodes at the slightest moment). … There are so many details like this that you can think about them while looking at them. The author's writing is very good. At least so far, such ancient scenes did not make me feel like I was in a drama. I recommend this book again and thank the author for such a good work. Finally, I saw that the author would say "randomly written" at the end of almost every chapter. I hope the author will not belittle himself. A low rating may make people sad, but there are many, many people who really like this book.

This book is an ancient material that I quite like. The author vividly displays the confusion and helplessness of Xiao Shen as a modern person who traveled to ancient times. The characters are delicately and plumply drawn, and the characters are full of vitality. Xiao Shen is kind and tenacious. He is worried about his own destiny, but also wants to try his best to change and save more people. This can be seen from Xiao Shen's willingness to go down the mountain to save the plague. I don't believe it when you say you scrawled it. Xiao Shen was forced to participate in the DPRK and was helpless. He just wanted to live a stable life, but he was pushed forward by reality. I am very interested. The author will update soon! !

Shen Tangsong really has the feeling of a cold young man. I like this protagonist very much. It's a bit pitiful that he feels out of place in this world. There seems to be a layer of barrier between him and others. After saving Xiao and Song, he is no longer the same as before, and he has no ability to settle down in ancient times. It feels like he is being led by others.

Well, yes, I like this character very much. There is no twists and turns or hesitation in the heart. He is an ordinary person pushed by fate. From the top of the mountain to the deep palace, every step is beyond his expectation. Every character is very vivid. I can feel it from the writing in just a few chapters. Moreover, the author's writing is really very good, and the wonderful writing cannot be overstated. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot and hope not to be demoted. The introduction should indicate imprisonment. I am also looking forward to the follow-up

I can't get enough of it, I really can't get enough of it. I like the calm and calm demeanor of the protagonist. With the benevolence of a doctor, no matter what the future holds, he only saves the present. He has the ability and ability to do his best. Life in the mountains is very beautiful. After coming down from the mountain, the emperor and the prime minister showed the considerations and calculations of being an official. It was a bit uncomfortable [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. The introduction was compulsory, and it felt like ungratefulness [rolled eyes] [rolled eyes] [rolled eyes]

Wow, it's so beautiful, the writing is super good, and it's so eloquent that I couldn't stop reading it during the finals week [crying]. The description of the environment is very clever. Basically, every part has the effect of hinting at the character's emotions or promoting the following. The technique should be mostly white description, which is very labor-intensive. However, it is objective and concise, allowing readers to experience it for themselves and better grasp the subtle sense of plausibility, which not only conveys the author's intention, but also allows readers to have their own unique understanding. The plot is also very attractive. I read it at the first glance. This is one of my criteria for judging the quality of a book. A good author will grasp the rhythm of the plot and take into account the reader's reading mentality and tiredness. In addition, the cultural knowledge in the books is relatively close to reality. There may be fiction, but it does not hinder it. Moreover, the ancient Chinese characters, semi-vernacular expression habits, etc. Perfectly fit the context and character creation, and are natural and smooth, without causing the abrupt feeling of "deliberately ancient Chinese" or "pure vernacular". From these aspects, the author undoubtedly put a lot of effort into writing this book, but I discovered it too quickly. I hope the author will update it more. Teacher, although I have praised your writing style, don't show off your skills. The plot must keep up. If you keep describing the scenery, it will easily pass in one chapter. If there is no suspense, it is easy to lose the desire to follow up. Teacher, you must grasp the rhythm.

Holy shit, how can such a good article be written? It's rare to find such a good article on Tomato. It's no exaggeration to say that the plot is really good, very novel, the plots are interlocking, and it's very interesting. The writing is also very good, and the writing style is also very good. I hope the author will update it soon. It's also worthy of praise. The writing style is really good, and the plot is also super awesome. You must come and take a look. I really recommend it. I hope the author will treat Xiao Shen well and not be too cruel. Xiao Shen is still too kind.

I was attracted by the brief introduction and plot. The writing is good, and the writing style is smooth and flowing. It was very interesting in the early stage, but later on I felt that the plot began to deviate (?) The plot was too long and it was a bit tiring to watch. In the later stage, I felt that the visual focus was not on the protagonist. It's on. It's progressing very slowly. When I saw the plot being pulled back, I lost my enthusiasm a bit. Maybe the length setting of short and medium novels would be more appropriate, but it is still a very good article. The sense of fate and emotional drama between the two protagonists is very well written.

Very nice! ! ! The author is really awesome [laughs]! ! ! The writing is very good and the content is wonderful! ! ! But as a reader, I felt a deep sense of powerlessness. I saw Shen Tangsong being unhappy after entering the capital. I saw that he had a modern soul but was imprisoned in the body of an ancient man in the feudal dynasty. I saw that he could not conform to his heart in everything. The people he saved were forced to do things they did not want. I could only try to avoid the plot of the book in a lonely era. I really feel very sad and unwilling. Although he is such a kind person, he can't find his own happiness! ! ! But the author's writing is really beautiful! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I think the writing style of this book is the most poignant. It has a delicate and flowing texture. The author never uses words to pile up emotions, but only focuses on the smallest details. This ingenuity is particularly outstanding in the creation of Shen Tangsong. As a top medical student who traveled through time, he broke into a strange ancient court with modern thinking and a "script" of unofficial history, but he was always pushed away by fate. The author writes about his confusion, never outright shouting "loneliness in another world", but capturing the subtle sounds of him subconsciously reciting acupoint formulas, the focused look on his face while frowning at the herbal stall, and the moment when his fingertips paused slightly when he turned to the bamboo slips of medical records. This materializes the sense of separation between modern medical knowledge and the ancient medical practice environment; to describe the entanglement of his unofficial history, he can only use his long silence in front of the yellowed manuscript paper, his lingering pen tip when writing "Spoiler", and the flash of confusion in his eyes when looking at the moon late at night. Incorporate the resistance to the unknown and the helplessness of the situation into your daily life. There is no fierce dramatic conflict, but in the slow-paced narrative, Shen Tangsong's sense of fragmentation and softness is spread layer by layer. In short, the author's writing style is very powerful [full]

How can the foreign persimmon He De have such high-quality writing? The writing style is really comfortable. I was originally attracted by the introduction to walk through the emotional line. Who knew that the description of the scene environment and the psychology of the characters in the first few chapters is very attractive. Boss, you are really Aren't you a liberal arts major (a question from a pure science major). The descriptions of medicinal herbs and medical skills in the article are also very detailed. They are not simply a collection of documents and knowledge fragments, but they are naturally mixed into the plot, which really sets off Shen's character very well. The tone of the previous episode is a little more depressing, and I feel a little sorry for Shen's current state. He originally didn't want to participate in the court disputes, but he had to be involved because of the kindness of the doctor. It's a bit like the feeling of being led by fate even though he knows the future [almost crying] [almost crying] The pace is slow, especially the scene on the mountain. I really feel the feeling of a long stream of water. The slow pace is very reassuring, and the turning points are not abrupt. It is not a plot for the sake of plot. The logic is clear and it follows the character's mental journey. In short, it is very beautiful to watch. This is the first time I write a long review. It is really a good book with full marks. I hope the boss can give Xiao Shen a good ending [almost crying] [almost crying]

Well, from the perspective of the protagonist, it's a bit depressing. It feels a bit like suffering from depression. You know what will happen in the future but you can't do anything about it. You know that you can change the future by not caring about anything, but you have to follow the path of the future because of kindness. It is very advanced and one of the few novels written by Yang Persimmon that is more logical and meaningful. The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere. The article has great literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting.

Overall it's good, the writing is very good and there are no flaws. But the characterization is a bit immature. Although it is understandable that Xiao Shen is helpless to move forward due to fate, but too many descriptions give people a deliberate feeling, and it seems that Xiao Shen is a bit pretentious. Now all I can think about is "Bara Bala (probably Xiao Shen's mood was better first, and then was interrupted), leaving only deep exhaustion." This sentence appeared many times together. If you really don't want to be an official, you don't need to tell the methods of water control and farming at the beginning. The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of having a jade. A good emperor would not easily let go of a talented person with world-wide experience; now that he has become an official and others are coaxing him to come along, it would be very uninteresting to drag it out for a long time because he is "not convinced" and feel sorry for himself while doing nothing. It will make the character petty and petty. It is very offensive in any era, and it is normal to be angered by the powerful in the later period, but it is really unfair to be abused for such reasons. If you don't like such an environment, you can work hard to create an environment that you can adapt to. Failure in that way is also a big abuse point. However, this book is a well-written masterpiece on Tomato. The imperfections of the characters may be more in line with the real reactions of ordinary people traveling to ancient times. If you don't mind this, I recommend reading it.

I saw the latest one directly, and the author's writing style is still very good! The setting is also very novel, and it attracted me right away. I feel like the characters in it are also very vivid! It feels like Shen Zongsong's fate, even though he struggled to break through, still followed its trajectory and reached the same direction in another form. Also, when he first walked into the thatched house, the note left behind said that there was rain in the mountains and he could not go if there were changes. Did the original owner really have the ability to predict and observe the sky, or was he just a reminder not to make the same mistakes again? Regarding Xiao Rongyu, it really gives people an unfathomable feeling, especially for Song, they are like two people (Ayu). I am looking forward to the later plot! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Come on!

It's good-looking, feels quite literary, and gives me the feeling of watching Bu Bu Jing Xin. Watching an old era swallowing up a new era person, Shen Tangsong cannot change the unofficial history records. I hope I can at least achieve oe, but don't be, otherwise I'll burst into tears.

It's beautiful. I highly recommend it. The descriptions are also very detailed, you can imagine the scene, the development is slow and steady, there are many plots, and the protagonist's emotional line is not much at the moment. Anyway, I can read any kind of it. I really recommend it. I have only read more than 30 chapters so far. I feel sorry for Xiao Shen [almost crying]. He is alone in another world, trying to avoid fate, but he is pushed away by fate. I was very afraid that he would be depressed [crying] and it was marked as a sadistic story. It must be very sadistic [crying][crying][crying] later on. I hope Xiao Shen will be well. I hope it is not the destined ending in the book. He will not be like Wu Sidao. Big cheers for the author! ! ! PS: I had browsed it before and saw that it was a serial but did not add it to the bookshelf. Yesterday, this introduction flashed through my mind, and then I went to the history to find it! ! Then I found out it's really beautiful! ! Recommended

It's very interesting, and has a light feeling. I think this part is very logical. What the protagonist says and what he does has its own thread. The characters are well established, and the writing is good. All the descriptions, and the simplicity and shortness of the dialogue are great. I think it's great. There is room for people to think, but it's not too much. Straightforward, but on the other hand, it is sometimes a bit hazy and euphemistic. The pace is not very fast, and sometimes it is a bit convoluted, maybe because I want to bury the thread. It is more suitable for reading in quiet moments. Also, I think it has a bit of a sad atmosphere, and it can be a bit depressing. Overall, it is a good novel.

It is very beautiful. The author's writing style is light, and there is a sense of alienation and unpredictability in writing destiny. It is a very philosophical book, but it does not make people feel obscure. The pace of the article is slow, but very true. I love this kind of calm and undercurrent life.

The writing is pretty good. The early writing is smooth and the emotions of the characters are well grasped. Fubi can also see it and knows how the plot will proceed. It is very comfortable. However, in the later chapters, is there too much description of the supporting characters? After several consecutive pictures, the protagonist is not written much, but the supporting role is written a lot. Shouldn't the protagonist be the whole? This one doesn't seem to be a group portrait either. Compared with Tomato, this book can be considered a good book compared to other books, but the author seems not to be suitable for writing long novels, and his grasp of the characters and plot is slightly off. It feels more suitable to write about group portraits, but this book does not label group portraits, and then, um, the subsequent plot describes the supporting characters a little too much. The eldest brother and the second brother of the He family always make me feel something is wrong. Later, when I wrote about the protagonist, I felt a little stuck. I hope the author will get better and better

It's equal, it's good to watch, but there are too few updates [laughs and cries], the overall pace is slow, and the setting is very interesting. Shou is a medical student who wears ancient books. He just wants to survive in peace, but he is forced to go to the court by the emperor. The emperor is interested in Shou's knowledge of medicine, current affairs, court, etc. [Laughs evilly]. After all, Shou is standing on the shoulders of giants who have been around for thousands of years! Shou is clear in his heart, but he still insists on what he thinks. He is not easily defeated by the emperor, nor is he transformed by the assisting prime minister. Shou just sees through things without telling them. The overall progress is relatively slow at the moment. There are so many chapters that are just the beginning, talking about the encounter between shou and gong. The pace is a bit slow [laughs and cries] It's a pity that I've been following the story from the beginning to now. The rhythm is a bit off in the middle, and I'm going high and low...

It's so good. I accidentally clicked it before going to bed and I finished it all night long. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot. At present, the two protagonists have not interacted much since they entered the capital, and there are almost no emotional scenes. However, the protagonist Gong seems to pay more attention to Shou and has a strong possessiveness. The protagonist Shou rides the same horse as Cheng and is taken to drink wine. It feels like the protagonist Gong His feelings are quite complicated. He values the talents of the protagonist Shou, but also has some personal feelings that he is not aware of. It may be the suspension bridge effect. When he was cornered and was being chased and seriously injured, he was rescued by the protagonist Shou. At that moment, he undoubtedly felt like a fairy in his heart. Later, he was attracted by the talent of the protagonist Shou's medical skills and temperament. . But the protagonist doesn't seem to be attracted to the protagonist so far, and is still a little resistant and scared. I really want to know the development of the plot later, and the author will update it soon! !

So far, it's quite interesting to watch, and the plot development and some changes in the characters' mentality are quite reasonable. The author's writing style is also very online. Working in Tianji Pavilion should be a key place for the protagonist's mentality change. I'm still looking forward to the following chapters. As for the prime minister and the emperor that I think everyone is criticizing, in fact, as far as the background of the entire novel is concerned, I think everything they say and do is in line with their characters and background. In short, the author will update quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I think the character creation is okay. Why is Shen so entangled? He may feel that even if he makes some small changes, he can't escape the fate of Ye Shi. He feels like he is being controlled or something. Alas... I am still looking forward to the follow-up development. Two chapters a day is not enough, but I am willing to wait. The author should write slowly and at his own pace. It feels like he is laying the groundwork step by step. Shen's characterization is very attractive to me. He is calm and self-possessed. She's very charming, and the cuteness she shows off occasionally makes me like her very much. [Shy]

The only downside to this book for me is that it's not finished yet. After reading the hot reviews, some questioned the author's writing style. I think the author's writing style is top-notch among Tomatoes. The first chapter may be a bit slow, but this is not a shortcoming. The author is definitely very attentive to this book. She is very attentive in constructing the world, imagining that world, and imagining their existence. She also successfully made me immerse myself in it. I have eaten too many fast-food novels, but I am still very happy to encounter this book. Since there were few updates initially, those descriptions may have made the original readers impatient. They wanted to see the latest plot faster. I think this is also the reason why they complained about the descriptions. But now that the novel has been updated for a long time, you probably won't be dissatisfied with the slow pace of the previous article. If you don't like it, just speed up the reading and skip it. I looked back at the introduction. In fact, until the latest chapter, there was no introduction content. It is undeniable that I was attracted by the introduction at the beginning. After all, "Qing Leng Guoshi" and "Forced Love" are so attractive. But when I actually read this book, I will be fascinated by this very delicate emotion. Forced love is not that intense, but it is also very exciting. Xiao Xiao is not forced by a dark male ghost. On the contrary, he is very restrained and respects Xiao Shen. The occasional "coercive mentality" is not too much. He is very cute and easy to knock off. Let's talk about our protagonist Xiao Shen. It can indeed be called cold, but the author did not write him as a cold shell. You can feel Xiao Shen's reality and fullness, feel Xiao Shen's confusion and struggle, and feel the pain of Xiao Shen's inability to integrate into that era and the gradual relaxation of a little acceptance. Every step of Xiao Shen's psychological changes is traceable and very logical. It will not make people feel abrupt or false, nor will it make people feel that this is just a character set by the author. Readers will accompany Xiao Shen to grow up slowly. Other supporting characters are also very cute, such as Song Xiang who appears from the beginning of the story. Song Xiang is a very smart person who likes to make fun of them. In short, it is completely suitable to give him a "fox statue"! The only thing I'm bored of is Master Yu. He annoyed me for many chapters. Although I used to like "Heartthrob" and "Multiple Arrows", here I hate Master Yu who covets Xiao Shen. I'm worried that he will hurt Xiao Shen. Fortunately, Xiao Shen only regarded him as a friend and did not develop any psychological dependence or excessive trust. Moreover, he temporarily left Xiao Shen, which made people feel much more comfortable. Come on, author! Believe in yourself! This book is really great! Don't enter under control! ! ! He was tortured for the sake of torture, and he laughed out of anger. (I originally revised the score, but found that the author had avoided lightning at the beginning. It was too long and I forgot and was confused by the previous chapters. It was my fault, so I changed it to 5 points) The villain and the protagonist are not equal in intelligence, and whatever the villain does always achieves results. In other words, Prime Minister Song is the most pleasing to the eye. Don't let Xiao Xiao go to the table. He tortures for the sake of torture, and finally comes to wash his hands with incense. It's really interesting. After a lot of trouble, Xiao Shen didn't get the book. Let's just keep the plot going. Anyway, we have to push their relationship to a desperate situation. Just torture Xiao Shen like this. Xiao Shen is almost broken. Now I feel that Xiao Shen is a tool of sadomasochism. He has been passive, passive and suffering like this. Second change: The deputy CP is a bit too long, and I don't even see Xiao Shen a few times every day... Editor 3: It's over. I've been following it for so long. I loved it and hated it. It went from five stars to one and two stars, and finally it was changed to four stars. I feel relieved now. But I still want to say that I still like the style of the first half of the book. After the forced love, it is really just about the plot. In any case, Xiao Shen still realized his original wish, which was satisfying. I wish you a happy life in modern times.

It's super good [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] Personally, I don't read serials very much, but even if I do, I will keep more of them. Mainly because I don't like the feeling of following the plot but being suddenly interrupted. The introduction particularly attracted me at first, but after reading the content, I couldn't bear to stock up. The first thing I do when I wake up every morning is read the day's updates [crying] I like it very much, but I can't get enough of it. As for the description, I keep up with it every day. It's been so long that I can't remember the details, but my overall feeling when reading this book is that there is nothing weird or awkward about it. The author's writing style is very comfortable, just like Shen Tangsong's. It is very light but has its own unique style. Author, do you dare to update 30,000 words and scare me? [Laughing] [laughing] [send heart] [send heart] [fly kiss] [fly kiss]

Don't leave it just because the rating is low! The author's writing style and character creation are very good, his writing attitude is also very serious, and his word choice is also very elegant. For some classical Chinese words, it is particularly appropriate. Although it is the third perspective, it is better than the first perspective. There are a lot of descriptions of the environment and details, which are beautiful and delicate. The transitions of the plot are particularly natural, and the foreshadowing is coherent and smooth. The tone of the article is very elegant, just like the protagonist. Moreover, the writing reflected many details of the society at that time, and the ideas were very different, but clear and clear. The description of the characters is particularly detailed, and it would be a pity not to read such a high-quality article with such good writing style. Looking forward to continued updates!

I have read more than a dozen chapters. The author's writing is really good. Some very small things are written beautifully and very delicately. You really have no choice but to meet such an author. The storyline is like that of jasmine tea, which is very comfortable and so easy to love. I really like the character of the protagonist. At the beginning, there was a faint feeling of being alive and dying. He did not change his mind because of others, but because he wanted to save the people from the fire. You can really watch it, really really really really really! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have to say that my wife's writing style is really smooth and very visual, but there are too many descriptions and the control of the rhythm and plot is a bit slow, which really makes people lose the desire to follow up. I hope my wife will get better and better. [Praise]