Douluo************

The plot is not Chinese, the protagonist is not pretentious, and there is no magic change. The writing is very good, and the story is very novel and interesting. In a word, as a happy history, I voted for this project [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [smile]

This book is pretty good. I prefer the fanfic about the Star Iron Trio as they explore the world.

It's good to read, not exaggerated, and not magically modified. Just because of this book, Teacher, I have completely become interested in fanfics about three little animals traveling through other worlds.

It feels pretty good, pioneering, good reviews, anchor points and good reviews. Many fanfics will not write this. I feel that the character of the star in this is very consistent. When many authors write about the star, they often forget that she is a mute beauty. It is difficult to describe the feeling in words. My vocabulary is too small. I can only describe her as not talking very much to people she is not familiar with. She is reserved. Once she gets to know her, she becomes all kinds of funny and abstract. Maybe the description is not right. This author writes very well.

The book is good, but many of the comments in it are quite abstract. For example, the train fell down at the beginning and destroyed other people's houses. The three little guys only repaired the car and then restored other people's buildings. It's all normal now. But here in the comments... I feel like many people's comments are very Tang Shenwang... The train crew is not unreasonable. It was indeed a train that smashed into someone else's house. It was at fault, so what if they asked for compensation (or even just asked for it to be repaired)... Their demands were quite normal... The three little ones didn't think there was anything wrong, but everyone in the comment section was talking about ways to kill themselves... The prominent one was "I'll help you with your repairs and you must be grateful and virtuous."

I really like the interaction between the train crew in Douluo World. Sure enough, the little raccoon will never be OOC no matter what he does hahaha [laughing]

It's so delicious, I'm already trying to score points. However, there are many flaws in the integration of the storyline and so on, but they are innocuous. The characters are very consistent with the personality. Of course, there are some OOC, which is innocuous. What I enjoy the most is the atmosphere. The relaxed, joyful and happy atmosphere really touches me.

Yes, there is absolutely no trace of the elementary school student writing style of The Three Ghosts of the Huang Family.

It feels good. Come on, author, write better [Like] Come here to score points [blowing kiss]

The writing in the early stage is particularly delicate, and the plot is relatively natural. It has an addictive feeling. However, during the winter vacation, the updates are a bit slow.

It's very beautiful, and the characters are very fitting. It's one of the best Douluo fanfics. I hope the author won't be backstabbed by MiHoYo in the future.

Sister, you are quite awesome, Klass. You are so cruel that you don't reply to Nuts' message. Just one Nut is fine. There are so many Nuts waiting for you here, staring here, doing nothing, waiting for you here.

After a cursory look, I hope that Ompharos' character can be summoned later. After all, based on the current description, Shrek's people are a bit interested in knowing the technology of the Star Dome Train, and they are not very polite. They hope to summon Bai E to intimidate them.

It looks good, the writing is good and it's very comfortable to read.

Wang Qiuer and Huo Yuhao are not CPs, they must not be. Don't write the train crew as too arrogant. They are not such people. Pioneering is never a high-level rescue.

The plot is smooth and natural, and the characters are also perfect.

Did the author modify the article in AI [face covering]

Based on the explanation of the script in Chapter 15, I think it's fine to get a five-star rating. Meet your requirements

It's okay, not very OOC. I didn't give full marks because it's too little so far and I can't see how to write it later. And now that we've passed Omfalos, what about Sunday? Four little ones, please don't send anyone,,, and Xi Lian entered reincarnation and was not sacrificed, there is still a chance [smile]

Support good-looking and good-looking. Currently there is no OOC! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The author and readers are both objective, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are the most perfect among the fanfics I have read. There are no stereotypes in other fanfics. After checking the score, I checked the comment section. Will I really be banned if I have a high score? [What] If you're not a buddy, why do you have to suppress your fighting ability? (ಠ … ಠ)

The characters are not seriously OOC, the overall plot is also very interesting, the suspense setting is also good, but the update is a bit slow.

It's pretty good. I give it five stars. As long as it keeps updating, it will be great. Please look forward to the next content. What happened to the God Realm? Hope to keep updating. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I don't know what to say, but it looks good!

It's very beautiful. Good luck to the author.

Keep up the good work, author

Ninety-nine percent rare.

Not as good looking as OOC, I like the 3 little ones

The writing is good, but where is Brother Zhou Tian? If Brother Zhou Tian comes, there is no need to play anymore, just adjust the tune.

It's really nice, but I feel like some of the text was copied and pasted directly from the original text.