He Wanted to Die, but He Became the Number One God of War in Kyushu

After reading it for a day, I summarized it. It's so awesome that I almost made my horse urinate. Especially when the protagonist fakes his death, he is very emotional. This is also my first time to review a book. It's really good. Please update the author soon! [Blow kiss]

First of all, it's not just that the sailors know it by looking at my homepage. I rarely write reviews, but this book is really well written. At least the author really wrote it with intention. The book does have unreasonable settings, but the characters and details are really well written. At least it made me want to read it. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that is so thoughtful in terms of fighting and character. I can't read 100 chapters of ordinary fictional novels. The whole book is just like the third child. The great thing about the author of this novel is not just the plot, it really arouses my emotions in every chapter and makes me unable to stop reading. It's really the first time the author has written that, it's really awesome👍 Keep it up for a while, it's not enough to watch.

From beginning to end, the plot does not drag on, the descriptions of the minor characters are delicate but not bloated, and it depicts a kind and upright modern soul who is brave and fearless supported by the lights of thousands of families behind him. While the online novel mode makes people feel refreshed, it can also give us who read the book some experience. What is supporting us after working hard every day, it is nothing more than a small lamp left for you at home, and Wulun, you will miss your parents wherever you are. Therefore, this book is a rare good book in 🍅, and it is highly recommended by old bookworms. Come on, author, the data at this time is only temporary, and the difference is a breaking point. Everything is ready and all we need is Dongfeng, come on!

We are amazed by the author's sophistication and skill in writing. But it's a pity that I don't really appreciate emotional scenes. I like Yingxue's one very much. Aruna and Yaoguang are both good girls, but what Chu Xiao gave them made me feel more guilty, compensation and responsibility [laughing] It's not as delicate as Yingxue's, it's too late and too slow. Yingxue can only talk to each other after one hundred chapters, and Princess can barely do it after more than four hundred chapters. It's not easy to become a real person. The plot has ups and downs and is quite dramatic. I am too old to watch the joys and sorrows, and I feel a stomachache. Please support it with five-star reviews and look forward to new works in the future.

In this book, the emotions are described in detail and the characters are drawn in great detail. Tomato is a rare good book. Without collapse. Has the potential to become a god. Come on, author, if you don't experience the wind and rain, how can you see the rainbow? The current achievements are just the only way to success. Stick to your style. I and other book clubs will always pay attention to your books.

It is considered to be a relatively skilled writer. The plot is of high quality, the writing and diction are remarkable, and there is considerable emotional description. It can be read as a refreshing article. "Shao Song" is relatively difficult to understand and requires a certain amount of historical knowledge to understand it. This article is a historical fiction and it is very simple. However, I still hope that the author can refer to "Shao Song". The author's historical knowledge and writing style are very deep and delicate. His description of "things" is more "complex" and his understanding of "emotions" is more "deep". He has a sophisticated understanding of administrative structures, characters, events, and military tactics. If the author still has some spare time, he can learn from this and enrich the article.

The book is in short supply. I originally read it with the intention of giving it a try. After reading it, I really felt that it was very good. The emotions of the characters are well written, such as faith, responsibility... Etc. It is rare to read a novel that makes me shed tears. Come on, author [like]

Overall it's good, the fighting scenes are particularly outstanding. The biggest flaw is the emotional scenes, whether it's the harem or the family relationship, it's very raw and rigid, and even a little... Unreasonable or... Too inconsistent. The strategy and tactics are pretty good, but the aura of the protagonist is too strong. Such a mature and wonderful fighting strategy is somewhat upstaged by the aura of the protagonist. The expressions and reactions of the characters during the battle are very penetrating, which is very good. As for emotions, it may be the result of the author's careless care about love and family relationships in real life. If this is the author's debut novel, then to be honest, I will give it 7 points. The remaining 2 points are not bad, but room for improvement, and the remaining 1 point is the flaw in the emotional line. Overall, it's good. I've read Chapter 376.

It seems that the author has not written many works, but the writing style is really good, the emotional description is also good, and the three views are also very good. I am always amazed by some details. I have read twenty chapters so far and the pace is good. I will continue reading. Write more beauties, love to see [think][like][love]

@Update seven days a week. The author is great. You can change the name of this book, but it depends on the timing. After all, the name is quite attractive (I just like to read the name and introduction) 1. Why the name was changed? Because of the content and concept of this book, the overall style is already higher. It is not a cool novel with a brainless system (but it is really cool), but it is much better than other AI novels. They are all flesh-and-blood characters. Secondly, there will be people who criticize that you can go home if you die. If the protagonist really wants to die and is determined to go home, he will go back early according to reasonable logic, unless the author does not allow it (then this is no different from other bad street anti-protagonist wishes) The setting can be kept, but the protagonist of the novel should gradually have his own persistence, no longer blindly thinking about it, but caring about these living people in the "different world", and the content level will directly increase. 2. I did empathize with the protagonist before and after he died in battle (although this kind of family and country justice is also a common routine), but the writing is indeed okay. 3. Finally, I would like to tell you that this novel is indeed good. I cannot say it is very good, but I can see that the author really put his heart into writing it. It is an enjoyable novel but of high quality.

The detailed descriptions in this book are very accurate and detailed. Each character has its own personality characteristics. The descriptions of actions and environment are more fascinating. It feels like you are in it, and you have a strong sense of immersion. You feel like you are Chu Xiao!

How can I put it? In my opinion, the author's writing style is one of the few among so many books. It is easy to put yourself into the character's perspective. There may be some places that readers find poisonous, but as long as you step into that scene, you will find that in fact, it is sometimes like this in reality, isn't it? This book is really good. You can give it a try and read it. I hope the author can write more about the system and less plug-ins, so as to provide better assistance and reminders for the subsequent plot, so that the author will not be so exhausted that he only remembers the system. Come on

It's really good to read. Although the author said it's the first book, the emotional delivery is very real. The protagonist's sense of responsibility and responsibility are very well portrayed. I just hope that Reiko's regrets in this part can be made up, but on the premise of handling the princess's emotional line well, Aruna's words should not be too political [I'm about to cry]

It's a very good book. Although the author is writing a book for the first time, the plot of the article is compact and the plot transitions are also very smooth. Overall, it has surpassed many popular novels nowadays. It is a rare piece of fine chaff and is worth reading.

The writing is really great, the characters are full-bodied, they really look like real people, each character has distinct characteristics, not facial expressions, the plot is compact, and full of immersion [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The author's writing is really good. I have read about 100 chapters so far. In the previous chapters where the hero fights, the feelings of family and country are really expressed. The emotions are really delicate. I don't cry much when reading novels, but I felt the emotions of the characters and cried for a long time. The author's writing is really good. I hope the author can gain motivation among readers.

The part I watched was quite heroic. The protagonist's mentality of wanting to die but wanting to be responsible was well written and had a profound impact on me. It's really good to read. It's a foreshadowing at the beginning, but the final battle with the Northern Barbarians is very heroic. It's really worth reading. The author's writing style is also very good. It's one of the best works I've seen on Tomato. I even cried while reading it. If you like fighting, I highly recommend this novel.

Note: I cannot be completely objective when I write these words, please watch and enjoy for yourself. As an author who writes novels for the first time, it is not easy to have such skills. Generally speaking, I recommend it. For the purpose of recommendation, I think the advantages should be written first. Overall, this book has a clearer writing context, vivid language, and emotional brewing than most books on the market. The aspect is one of its major features. It can be seen that this author is not like other authors. He depicts most of the characters very vividly. It can be said that he has the ability to describe most of the group portraits. After talking about the advantages, I will talk about a few obvious shortcomings for ordinary readers based on my subjective judgment. 1. There are poisonous points in the character's thinking and logic. 2. Many characters are too idealistic and not realistic enough, which makes the characters not three-dimensional and full enough. This is a common mistake for novices. It can be seen that the only relatively complete conception at the beginning is the story up to the climax of the first story. This is a common problem of many novel authors. They think of a grand and passionate ending, and then write articles on this basis. 3 The whole story describes battles, love, brotherhood, etc. (Of course, it is well written), but it lacks depictions of human hearts such as power struggles and strategies. This makes most of the characters in the story look the same, and problems such as the imperial power being too insignificant have arisen one after another. (Maybe it's because I'm old. If I were five years younger and watched these passionate and emotional scenes, where everyone was sincere and pure, I might actually regard this as an enlightenment work.) My purpose is that if the author sees it, if he thinks what I said is right, he can see if he can improve it. On the other hand, if the passing readers see it, they can add to it, and everyone can discuss it.

The writing is really good, especially the part where the protagonist goes back to save Chuzhou. I can put myself into it. I haven't seen such a good-looking book for a long time. This rating is really low. It is much better than many books with a score of 9.0 Or above. [Adoration] [Adoration]

Finally got a rating, it must be five stars, it must be five stars. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] The Invincible Universe is the most beautiful. The plot is detailed and smooth without being confusing. The characters are not brainless. It's super cool to watch. This may not be the first time the author has written a book, so feel free to read it. [Sending Hearts]

It is a well-written and refreshing novel, with some points of empathy, but also some flaws and awkwardness, and the details still need to be polished. What I am most confused about is where the Southern Barbarians refer to. They attack southern Xinjiang for a while, and escape to Mobei for a while. Are the Southern Barbarians still marching south? Where are they heading south? What is their geographical positioning? Is it north or south? If you want to think normally, why does it snow in the south, and how can Nanman ride so well? Is this the initial confusion of thinking, or is it feeding the AI ​​to make me stupid (it feels like it contains AI elements). In short, it is a book that can be read, but don't have too high expectations [eating melon]

I originally planned to read the latest chapter before commenting, but I couldn't help myself after seeing this extra chapter. The author said that I was surprised when I first wrote a novel. The writing style is really good. The fighting scenes are detailed and the characters are fleshed out. Especially the part about Chu Xiao's suicide note after he "died in battle" made me cry. I've read a lot of novels, but this one is one of the few that can resonate with my emotions. This shows my writing skills. As an author, just try whatever you want to write. Don't be afraid of not being able to write well for the first time. And at least from the looks of it, the writing is really good. As long as you don't rush the ending, I will support you [sending my heart] Come on, come on~ (Can you write a supporting role as a swordsman in the future? He is free and easy and has no martial arts skills. If his surname is Zhang, he will be ready. Hahahaha [laughing] I hope he can be free for me in the book) (Just treat me as nonsense hahaha)

Although I wasn't ready to continue reading until halfway through, it wasn't because the author didn't write well. It is just so well written. The death of every soldier in the article will add sadness to my heart, and every victory will make my blood surge! Words are powerful, and I don't want to watch brave people die anymore, so I decided to give up this sad book. At first I just thought it was a suicide story that would be easy and funny, but when the butterfly effect comes, the protagonist has more and more responsibilities and hopes, and he can no longer die selfishly. I was disturbed when I saw Chu Xiong's assassination. I will read this novel when my mind is strong. Why

The emotions are delicate and moving, I like it very much, and I feel very immersed in it. Everyone has something they want to protect, and the protagonist is no exception. He is flesh and blood, sometimes crying, sometimes laughing, sometimes missing, and sometimes angry. All in all, it's a good book. I highly recommend reading it. Big cheers to the author~

So far, everything I have read is very interesting, and it has some interesting aspects. But what is different from 99% of other books is that the protagonist really implements the flower grower, our country's leader at that time, and does not take the people by force. There is no other violent dragon Aotian who is all about himself, everything is based on self-interest. It is exciting, but I soon got tired of it. Now that I have read this book, I think the three views are very good. In addition to the emotional relationship between the protagonist and the male protagonist, the girlfriend left by the protagonist on the Blue Star hopes that the male protagonist will not have a harem in this world, otherwise he will be too submissive to his girlfriend Reiko on the Blue Star. If the author wants to write about the relationship between men and women in the world where the protagonist travels in this book, it would be better not to write about Reiko in the first place. I kind of regretted that I didn't read the table of contents earlier, and happened to get to the section about the royal family. I still can't accept it. In fact, when I read the first part, I couldn't figure out why the author wrote that the male protagonist had a beloved girlfriend in the original world. I also thought that if the author wrote like this, the male protagonist should have no relationship between a man and a woman in this world, but then he wrote that he would marry another woman and have children in this world. He ran away and ran away.

It's very interesting. How can I say it? Everyone has their own thoughts and characteristics. I feel like it's a cliché. When it comes to plot, it doesn't feel particularly good, but it can get deep into my heart. When it comes to the outline, it's just what it used to be. But I just can't help reading chapter after chapter. I recommend this book and review this book because I hope there will be more with me. For those who like this book after reading it, I will add a sentence at the end, author, come on, write slowly, write well, don't rush, don't be busy, I hope you can write better, but I hope you don't get into trouble in life because of this book, I don't know how to say nice things, I will say whatever comes to my mind, the last two words: Come on

It was so well written that I read more than a hundred chapters all night, especially the part where the protagonist died in battle. I cried for half an hour before I recovered. I hope the author writes better and better. This rating is really not what this book deserves.

So far, the author has portrayed the characters very well, and the inner description of the characters is also very consistent with the progress and progress of the story. Not obtrusive, natural. I can tell stories, 8 points is low. 9 Points is OK.

After reading the Battle of Chuzhou's Life and Death, I will comment. The overall writing style of the book is quite good. It can clearly depict the psychology and actions of the characters, making the characters stand out and become more three-dimensional and comprehensive. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of thought in the conception and writing. In addition, the description of the details and atmosphere of the war are also quite good, especially the emotional rendering of the part where the prince forgets life and death and fights for his loved ones behind him is very good, allowing readers to have an immersive feeling. In addition to the protagonist, the portrayal of some supporting characters is also vivid, such as mourning the world in the whole city. Zi Ji brings out the noodle shop father and daughter who were saved by the prince earlier from the group portraits, as well as the children's admiration for the prince from a child's perspective, which all reflect the book's skillful use of group portraits and side foils. It truly makes every character in the book have its own meaning, thus making the entire Battle of Chuzhou richer and deeper. However, as a reader, I feel that one thing that can be optimized is that the description of war scenes can transition from small aspects to large scenes, and gradually present the grandeur and brutality of the war scenes from small to large. The description of the characters' emotions can also be more delicate. Combining the background of the characters and the entire story line of the protagonist makes the characters look more flesh-and-blood on the original basis, and the memory points are more profound! Overall, it can be regarded as one of the few masterpieces I have seen on the Tomato platform. The author will continue to work hard and look forward to the subsequent masterpieces!

The writing is full of passion. I am a 40-year-old bookworm who has been reading various apps for 20 years. This book you wrote has the appearance of becoming a god. It is so passionate that my eyes are swollen when I read it. It is too passionate. I don't recommend it well. I know that not many people will read your book for the time being. However, if you keep writing like this, sooner or later this book will become a god and be known to the world, and it may be turned into a TV series! You make me happy, and I make you happy too, and I'll give you a master certification