How to Defeat the Perverted and Wet Male Ghost That Zhan Shen Picked Up

Damn it. . . . . The writing is super good. The characters are very vivid and have a strong sense of substitution. The image of the little snake is very vivid. There is no feeling of conflict. Everyone in the orphanage is also very loving. However, in the if chapter, "When you think about keeping them, you have already betrayed Shen Qingzhu." I am a little curious about how it will be dealt with later. It feels like it will be a sad point 😭 The author asks for an update

I like this setting very much. The author's writing is also very good and delicate [Love] But from this point of view, there will definitely be knives, and the sweet and sour ones are also delicious [Love] But I beg the author, please don't be too cruel. The last word must be he [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] If it really doesn't work, it's okay to die in love with both of you [sending my heart]

In fact, I had tied it the night before yesterday, but I never had time to write a long book review, so now I am taking advantage of the teacher's strict control over this class to write one (bushi The author's writing style is very good, and it can be seen that he has some literary skills. The logic is smooth and the language is fluent. Although the plot is not perfect among the works so far, it is definitely outstanding. The characters are well controlled. At least I don't see Brother Drag's character as OOC, and Little Snake's character has also changed a lot. He's a little gentler, but not much. It's limited to everyone in the orphanage, his little bamboo, and other acquaintances. In the end, it's not really a big deal. Just what I want to say. ◍˃ᵕ˂◍

The original plot is based on the world view of Zhanshen. It gets rid of many fan fiction recruit training + interaction routines with the protagonists of the original book. It is very innovative. [Like] The author's writing style is particularly gentle, the description is particularly textured, and the rendering of emotions is very well controlled, like a boss's trumpet [Thinking] Looking forward to the follow-up (ps: Never stop updating) Love you author [love] [love] [love]

It's really beautiful. I haven't seen anything like this since the end of Drama God. I really love it, it's delicious. I love it. I beg the author to give me some food. It is recommended to watch it with a friend, the corners of your mouth will definitely be raised. In the end, I really don't know what to say. In short, it is: very beautiful (for friends who like to read God-killing fan fiction, it is recommended to taste it in person and then evaluate it. After all, everyone has different tastes.) Anyway, I love the author to death, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good!

Some little abuser [crying] [crying] [crying] Why is Li Che also dead...? The little snake and the green bamboo must be fine [love] [love] [love] [love] The author's writing style is also very good, it's nice to read and love [Chigua][Chigua]

Super pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very delicate, the author's character structure is super detailed, and the teacher analyzes the character's personality very clearly and with personality. In fact, I originally wanted to give it four stars. Because I really don't like reading sadistic stories (it won't work if it's more than 1/3, and the ending won't work either), but the author's writing style is really good. It's obvious that the author can write Snake Bao to be awesome in the early stage, invincible in the later stage, and then end up destroying the whole world, and finally have a super perfect ending. But the author didn't. It was very sweet in the early stage and then gradually started to go wrong in the middle. It was sweet and sad at the same time, sweet but also sad (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ). Every time I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore, I would be attracted back by the author's writing style. At the end! This is my first time to write a long review, because the author's writing style is really awesome! It's the first time I feel like this in a fanfic! ! ! ε(´｡•᎑•`)っ♡ This is the first long review of the novel that I have read so many times, so I hope Eleven will read it. My little hope is very small! <(._.)>: Let me first mention the more than 100 chapters written by the author. I have not read them all. Now I have read more than 90 chapters, so my right to speak is based on the content of these 90 chapters. The final ending must be sweet, and the subsequent plot should also be sweeter. Love it more and hate it less, okay? (っ╥╯╰╥C)

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The emotional line of this book is very clear, and the parts that should be neat are not delayed. The original plot line is also very clear, interlocking, and has foreshadowing, making it very comfortable to read. There are many original plots, and the writing style does not drag down the entire article, making people fall into it without even realizing it. This is a really good article. The author is very good. I hope the author can keep writing. I hope the author's articles will be liked by more people! ! !

The author has his own understanding of the characters and will not feel uncomfortable even if it is OOC. It is highly recommended (also, the author has to start reading this article every day. It feels so uncomfortable to read a little bit every day😣😣😣I want to finish it in one go)

Very good looking, highly recommended! Show them all to me! Believe it or not, if you don't look at me, you will die in one click- ̗̀ ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

Why do I feel like this setting will cause daggers——[Blowing Kiss]

The writing style is very good. The author avoids the plot of making up for regrets in previous fan fiction, and instead describes another story, which gives the impression of a parallel world of Zhan Shen. It is undeniable that this novel is really charming, but just thinking about it, I know how cruel it will be in the later stage. It is too torturous for Brother Yan and Xiao She. I like Brother Yan very much. I originally read this novel for sweet love and making up for regrets. I really can't see Brother Yan suffering. I felt very sorry for him in the original novel. The suffering I'm talking about is psychological, it's too uncomfortable. I originally thought I would be happy in the end, but the "be" in the he scared me a bit. It was miserable in the original novel, and it is miserable now. Brother Drag has been pushed away, and the little snake is also pushing him. Although he knows there is nothing he can do, but still... Well, after careful consideration, I decided to abandon this novel, but the author really wrote it well. If it weren't for it, I wouldn't be so involved [crying] It really surprised me. Maybe this comment is a bit out of context, and my typing was a bit messy, and I just said whatever comes to mind, but I want to bring this fanfic to an end here.

When reading this book, I will eventually have an ominous premonition (I feel like there will be a knife [laughs])

The writing style is great, really well written, very delicate writing style. This is one of the best fanfics I have read among the God-killing fans. I don't understand why the score is so low. It's so beautiful (๑•.•๑)

Come on, the little snake and bamboo are so cute, and there is a lot of interaction. I look forward to entering the main plot and Yu Yan's horse-drawing =ᗜωᗜ=

It's a very interesting book, and the plot is very novel! The emotional line is also very good. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel that there is a lot of foreshadowing (¿) In short, it is a very interesting book [][][]

The main character, Snake, is super invincible and the best in the world. The emotional line with Brother Yan is particularly delicate. The characters are vivid and the emotions are outstanding. Captain Mo really made me cry when they died, but Xiao Snake and Brother Yan are very sweet. This is a fake year, but Xiao Snake has never called Brother Yan "brother". I can only say that he doesn't call Brother Yan. He has a lot of thoughts. I recommend this book with five stars 😍

No, I can't watch it anymore. It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's better to say that the writing is so good that I can't stand it. I really can't stand it. The first volume made me cry with both eyes. If I can't read it anymore, I'll cry to death. It's so sad. I'll take a break and watch some pure sweet qwq.

The author's writing style is excellent and his thoughts are delicate. I have to say that this is one of the best articles I have ever read. I really love this article because I haven't given such a long comment to another article. It's really good.

It's very, very beautiful, especially the description of Shen Qingzhu's experience, which fills the gaps in the original work. What I particularly like is the emotional handling of Shen Qingzhu and everyone in the orphanage, with a good farewell.

Very good new plot! ! Click to see the cute black cut black snake. There is also a childish period in the article that is not mentioned in the original work. Very tasty. . Goddess I'm even more looking forward to the new plot, so watch it, Goddess. .

The characters written in large letters by the author are very three-dimensional, and the character design of Yu Yan is super cool. It's one of the most beautiful fanfics I've ever seen. 😍😍😍😍

Although there are very few, after reading the introduction and these, I am looking forward to the story when I grow up

The writing style is very delicate, and the relationship and twists and turns between Qingzhu and Little Snake are well written. Little Snake has always been partial to A Zhu T∽T. Little Snake not only remembered Shen Qingzhu's birthday but also celebrated his birthday. He even forgot about it. Brother Drag, aren't you excited?

It's so beautiful ~ the writing is very good (~^∇^)~

Small snakes and green bamboos are excellent

Okay, not that much OOC, just a bit uncomfortable and a bit sadistic

Delicious, really delicious, I hope it won't be discontinued.