Harry Potter: Start as a Black Defense Professor

The overall feeling is good, it's the type that makes people want to continue reading, but I don't really want to watch the heroine... The heroine of Harry Potter is either Hermione or Hermione. To be honest, it's better to have a good career [laughs]

The protagonist's experience and growth are consistent and the rhythm is well controlled. I just want to see the heroine

The author is very careful in writing, and the five stars encourage it, but there are a few points that may cause dissatisfaction: First, the choice of the system, there is a feeling of being tied to the system, but it has been improved in the later period, and the number of system appearances and choices have become less; second, there is something that everyone does not like in the teaching article. Click on the nanny story (I personally don't feel that disgusted); thirdly, he is obviously a time traveler and knows the plot well, but the author flaps his wings like a little butterfly for the ups and downs, which often drags on the plot, and gives me a feeling of being half stuck, fighting wits and courage with the air. I really like the subject matter of Harry, so it's my first time to write a book review. Don't criticize me if I don't write it well, Risby! Also, I'm almost finished watching it. There should be no female protagonist. Anyway, there is no particularly clear emotional line at the moment.

Not counting babysitters, I quite like them. The protagonist group is just the age of elementary school students. The protagonist is their teacher, so there is nothing wrong with helping the children...

I have now finished reading the first chapter of the Philosopher's Stone. The echoing clues throughout the book and the fatalistic ending really moved me. The overall writing style has a dreamy and warm feeling, which is very consistent with my imagination of the magical world. And the portrayal of the professor is definitely T0 level among tomato hp fans. It is worthy of a high score. I don't understand what it means for people who don't want to read nanny articles and see the cover saying "become a professor" and click in to spray. Are you coming to Tomato to be the earth emperor?

There is a system. When faced with a choice, the male protagonist makes a choice and the system rewards him. The male protagonist is a Hufflepuff graduate who traveled through time for a year, has the memory of the original owner, and has a magic level similar to that of Snape. In the later stage, wisdom will be reduced. When Dumbledore Snape and the others went out to deal with Barty Jr., They also had to take Hermione and Fleur with them. Furong is from a foreign school, how can you just take her with you?

Just read it if you like, nanny articles are nanny articles, come on, don't care too much about other people's comments [blowing kiss]

I quite like this book. There is nothing wrong with it. It's my fault that I fell in love with the serialization (つД`)ノ, but it's still interesting to follow up. I really don't know what nanny articles you are talking about. Teachers are supposed to lead students and babysit every day. As a teacher, that is his duty! If the protagonist really doesn't want to be a professor, he can resign by himself (he has a lot of gold galleons anyway) and his life will be exciting no matter what. Who dares to say that the protagonist has no feelings for them?

The overall feeling is good, but the secret room chapter is a bit too cumbersome, but overall it's still good. I hope there won't be a female protagonist

It's okay. I read it in daily language. I deducted one star because I felt that the later chapters had a bit of an AI flavor. When I listened to the book and heard those parts, I really couldn't hold back. The smell of AI is so familiar [face covering] [face covering]

I personally think I like it very much, it looks good. If you like a warm atmosphere like me, you can take a look at this. For those who say this is a nanny story. I disagree. Because Harry Potter has no parents since he was a child. His aunt's family treated him badly, and his childhood could even be described as miserable. If I traveled back in time to that era, I guess I would not be at the level of a nanny, I should be at the level of a mother. He was a man who lived a life of dependence on others when no one knew him. When many people knew him, it was really tiring for him to take on the responsibility of the savior with his 11-year-old body. I'm not a saint, but that doesn't mean I'm heartless. 😭

To be honest, it's not bad. There is no problem with the logic, and the writing skills are acceptable. Maybe the score is a little low because of the nanny flow, but aside from the fact that the main character is a nanny, the score of this book shouldn't be so low. And although the original story is used as the skeleton, it has been original since the second grade. It depends on whether the author can hold on to it. After all, it is a very bold thing to create an original story line and directly bring out some later characters.

It's a very natural process that won't make people addicted at first sight but reluctant to mention it a second time. It's like a seed that grows over time and takes root in the heart.

It is a very well written book on the Harry Potter theme.

Come on, author, it's very interesting. Don't abandon the book QAQ

The logic is slightly problematic. Some parts of the text are not very clear, but overall it is still readable.

Don't bring Voldemort to life in the novel. In other novels I read, Voldemort is always alive. Voldemort is done in the movie. Hopefully the author won't resurrect Voldemort. („ಡωಡ„) Q

There's nothing poisonous about it, it's one of the better-looking fics on Tomato.

The teacher's description is very delicate, and the experience of the protagonist Charles is also very interesting. The teacher's description is very delicate, and the experience of the protagonist Charles is also very interesting. I like Charles so much🥰🥰. Great support for the author👏👏

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It's pretty good, I think. Why is the rating so low?

The rating should not be so low [Thinking] . . . . . . . . Nice

Very nice, but I don't know why the rating is so low

Although the plot is different from the original work, it is reasonable and subtle

It's very interesting, but I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist, and if there is a female protagonist, it doesn't involve a teacher-student relationship [awkward laugh]

Highly recommended, everyone thinks it is a very interesting and interesting book.

The writing is good, the logic is smooth, the writing is smooth, it has its own ideas, and it does not completely follow the original plot. It is a good HP fan.

It's a very high-quality and beautiful book. The author has his own ideas and real characters [laughing] I hope it will continue to be good.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author! 🌝

It's a very good fanfic. The protagonist's plot is very suitable. It's fun but not excessive. The plot is very good. It can be seen that the author is very careful.