[The gentle and slow passerby heroine VS four top-notch sons of luck who are crazy about her]
Did you receive a system death notification just after traveling through time? !
Yu Ruan looked at the red words "1 hour remaining life" on the panel, his hands shaking - if he wants to live, he must have close contact with the children of destiny in this world?
In order to survive, Yu Ruan had to capture the Son of Destiny.
At first, they dismissed her:
The playboy gave her two months of love for fun, but it was boring and cheap to see her clumsily trying to please him.
The aloof academic god disliked her for disturbing the purity of the laboratory, and believed that she was superficial and impulsive and would only bring trouble to his strict and regular world.
The arrogant young master scolded her for being stupid and annoyed her, but in his heart he was wondering why this woman always hangs around others.
The Jingui CEO regarded her as a troublemaker who was shallow and trying to cling to his younger brother. He looked at her coldly and just wanted to eliminate her.
Later, they fell for her step by step:
Some rushed into the heavy rain on the night of separation and stared at the empty streets with red eyes.
Some tear down their rationality and embrace her at all costs.
Some of them broke down and screamed when they saw her interlocking with her brother.
Some put their arms around her shoulders to block everyone's view, and kissed her to declare their sovereignty to everyone.
When the Shura field broke out, all the men fought for her, no matter the cost.
And Yu Ruan counted the skyrocketing lifespans in the system, looked at their regretful eyes, and tilted his head in confusion: "What's wrong with you?"
Reader comments
Super pretty! Anyone who is with the heroine will be happy with the baby. She is slow but has the ability to love. She is a little sun with a natural electric wave fishing ability. The author's psychological description is also very delicate, the writing is good, and the emotional rhythm is also well-controlled [Send Heart][Send Heart][Adoration]
It's pretty good. I like the heroine's character. She's so cute. The male character is okay too. As for the relationship line, the only one I can seriously talk about is the younger brother. If the elder brother works hard, maybe he can become the main palace [laughing and crying] I really like the heroine's character. It's just like what the elder brother said [blowing kiss] There seems to be no vicious male/female co-stars at the moment. I hope the author will continue to write [heartfelt]
I think it's very beautiful. The heroine feels a little clueless. The heroine is like a little sun, and there are many types of male protagonists. I think the author's first writing is already very good. I think the author can write a 1v1 book in the future.
I really like how the heroine is so delicate and cute. Some of the small details of the action description also really poked me. For example, when the second male protagonist appeared, I saw the heroine unconsciously trying to straighten her clothes [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
It's really good to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The pace of this book is a little faster. The author's language is so delicate that it makes you feel sad when you see the heroine break up. The characters are also very distinct. Thank you for the author.
The pacing is very good and the length is just right. I really like this kind of story about a really slow little white flower who wins the hearts of everyone with her kindness for a mission. In the early stage, she met four people. She mainly abused the male protagonist and dismantled them one by one with the author's power. It was followed by Shura Field in the later stage. Finally, there was the villain with the ending of unrequited love. I think the heroine was attracted to the cheerful puppy in the first place (who wouldn't like it). There was no bad female partner in the whole process. The male protagonist was clean and Shen was a bit complicated.
In fact, overall, I think some small details are well written, and there are occasional thunder plots, but the author still writes it very well. There is no messy female rivalry plot. The heroine is a cheerful and frank little girl who is very cute. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]
How about giving up the surname Shen and getting someone noble? Big [shy]
The author's writing is also very good. Klass, OK, Doubao will help me generate tomorrow's lottery winning numbers for the author.
The plot really gets better and better as it gets better. It is human nature to fall in love with Ruan Ruan. The pasts of the male protagonists are also well written. The wishing wooden sign is really touching. Xiang Jingshen loves Ruan Ruan and loves his younger brother. Ruan Ruan wrote everyone's name on it. This cute girl is a very good person...
I feel like everything in the article is beautiful. The father and mother of Xiang who were mean at first also changed their minds towards Ruanruan. Mother Xiang is also very cute. She likes watching soap operas, hahahaha, and getting along with Ruanruan is like friends. Lin Wan's description in the later period is also very good, there is no brainless female rivalry. She who is talkative and eager to share meets Ruanruan who is willing to listen. Two of you are very cute! Author, I will always follow you (by the way, will Lu Jinan come to the table)
The female protagonist is really fun for me to watch haha, the plot progresses very quickly, this is the only NPC I feel most comfortable watching. Overall, it seems quite bland, with a very comfortable plot, and there is no female competition, just a group portrait. And all the characters are vividly drawn, giving them a sense of living people [laughs]
Nice! Take care of the outside world!
The writing is really good. Now I just want to know if Shen has kissed or hugged other women. If not, it would be really hard to tolerate.
Super awesome and beautiful. I think this is what good-looking writing should look like.
I have read the whole book and although the ending is a bit rushed, I think it is a good ending! The experiences between the female protagonist and the male protagonists are really touching. The more I watch it, the more moved I am. Especially in the back, the female protagonist has a sweet process with everyone. She never said that she gave up on anyone. Anyway, it is so beautiful! ! ! I don't think there are any interesting points in the whole book. The three views are just the logic of normal writing, but the descriptions are delicate. Author, you must keep writing! You all go and read to me!
This book is very comfortable to write, the heartthrob setting is not awkward, the protagonist is sober and charming, the supporting characters have their own personalities, the emotional line is natural and easy to read, the plot is smooth and not draggy, and I feel good after reading it.
Nice! I like the heroine!
It looks okay so far, but it's a pity that it's being serialized
The ending is a bit rushed, and it can be seen that the author is still relatively young, but he persisted in finishing it and it was very impressive.
It's beautiful, the heroine is a little sun [laughing]
It's very sweet and happy. Every time the male protagonist and female protagonist get along, you can feel a faint sense of happiness. It's a very real sense of happiness. After watching it, I feel warm in my heart. It's natural to fall in love with soft people!
Not bad, the male protagonists have different personalities and well-developed images. The heroine is delicate and cute, but she didn't clearly explain the direction of her relationship later, which is a bit regretful that it ended abruptly.
This is a book with a sense of living people. It is very exciting. I predict that I will become a very good writer and a very powerful novelist.
It's nice to read. I read novels all the year round. The articles are not novice, coherent and logical, and the language is used well. Worth a look.
Super pretty! Anyone who is with the heroine will be happy with the baby. She is slow but has the ability to love. She is a little sun with a natural electric wave fishing ability. The author's psychological description is also very delicate, the writing is good, and the emotional rhythm is also well-controlled [Send Heart][Send Heart][Adoration]
It's pretty good. I like the heroine's character. She's so cute. The male character is okay too. As for the relationship line, the only one I can seriously talk about is the younger brother. If the elder brother works hard, maybe he can become the main palace [laughing and crying] I really like the heroine's character. It's just like what the elder brother said [blowing kiss] There seems to be no vicious male/female co-stars at the moment. I hope the author will continue to write [heartfelt]
I think it's very beautiful. The heroine feels a little clueless. The heroine is like a little sun, and there are many types of male protagonists. I think the author's first writing is already very good. I think the author can write a 1v1 book in the future.
I really like how the heroine is so delicate and cute. Some of the small details of the action description also really poked me. For example, when the second male protagonist appeared, I saw the heroine unconsciously trying to straighten her clothes [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
It's really good to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The pace of this book is a little faster. The author's language is so delicate that it makes you feel sad when you see the heroine break up. The characters are also very distinct. Thank you for the author.
The pacing is very good and the length is just right. I really like this kind of story about a really slow little white flower who wins the hearts of everyone with her kindness for a mission. In the early stage, she met four people. She mainly abused the male protagonist and dismantled them one by one with the author's power. It was followed by Shura Field in the later stage. Finally, there was the villain with the ending of unrequited love. I think the heroine was attracted to the cheerful puppy in the first place (who wouldn't like it). There was no bad female partner in the whole process. The male protagonist was clean and Shen was a bit complicated.
In fact, overall, I think some small details are well written, and there are occasional thunder plots, but the author still writes it very well. There is no messy female rivalry plot. The heroine is a cheerful and frank little girl who is very cute. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]
How about giving up the surname Shen and getting someone noble? Big [shy]
The author's writing is also very good. Klass, OK, Doubao will help me generate tomorrow's lottery winning numbers for the author. The plot really gets better and better as it gets better. It is human nature to fall in love with Ruan Ruan. The pasts of the male protagonists are also well written. The wishing wooden sign is really touching. Xiang Jingshen loves Ruan Ruan and loves his younger brother. Ruan Ruan wrote everyone's name on it. This cute girl is a very good person... I feel like everything in the article is beautiful. The father and mother of Xiang who were mean at first also changed their minds towards Ruanruan. Mother Xiang is also very cute. She likes watching soap operas, hahahaha, and getting along with Ruanruan is like friends. Lin Wan's description in the later period is also very good, there is no brainless female rivalry. She who is talkative and eager to share meets Ruanruan who is willing to listen. Two of you are very cute! Author, I will always follow you (by the way, will Lu Jinan come to the table)
The female protagonist is really fun for me to watch haha, the plot progresses very quickly, this is the only NPC I feel most comfortable watching. Overall, it seems quite bland, with a very comfortable plot, and there is no female competition, just a group portrait. And all the characters are vividly drawn, giving them a sense of living people [laughs]
Nice! Take care of the outside world!
The writing is really good. Now I just want to know if Shen has kissed or hugged other women. If not, it would be really hard to tolerate.
Super awesome and beautiful. I think this is what good-looking writing should look like. I have read the whole book and although the ending is a bit rushed, I think it is a good ending! The experiences between the female protagonist and the male protagonists are really touching. The more I watch it, the more moved I am. Especially in the back, the female protagonist has a sweet process with everyone. She never said that she gave up on anyone. Anyway, it is so beautiful! ! ! I don't think there are any interesting points in the whole book. The three views are just the logic of normal writing, but the descriptions are delicate. Author, you must keep writing! You all go and read to me!
This book is very comfortable to write, the heartthrob setting is not awkward, the protagonist is sober and charming, the supporting characters have their own personalities, the emotional line is natural and easy to read, the plot is smooth and not draggy, and I feel good after reading it.
Nice! I like the heroine!
It looks okay so far, but it's a pity that it's being serialized
The ending is a bit rushed, and it can be seen that the author is still relatively young, but he persisted in finishing it and it was very impressive.
It's beautiful, the heroine is a little sun [laughing]
It's very sweet and happy. Every time the male protagonist and female protagonist get along, you can feel a faint sense of happiness. It's a very real sense of happiness. After watching it, I feel warm in my heart. It's natural to fall in love with soft people!
Not bad, the male protagonists have different personalities and well-developed images. The heroine is delicate and cute, but she didn't clearly explain the direction of her relationship later, which is a bit regretful that it ended abruptly.
This is a book with a sense of living people. It is very exciting. I predict that I will become a very good writer and a very powerful novelist.
It's nice to read. I read novels all the year round. The articles are not novice, coherent and logical, and the language is used well. Worth a look.