The Abandoned Daughter's Path to Immortality

I have read 30 chapters so far, and there is no big problem with the storyline. The author updates a lot every day. But the brackets () are used a little too much. Maybe the author wants to explain better, but it is too frequent and it affects reading.

The story is very exciting and interesting, and I have the desire to read it. I couldn't help but stay up all night to read it. The author is a very careful person, and the writing is very delicate and connotative. I like this heroine very much. She is decisive in killing, rational and calm, but also kind and loving. She is very smart, hard-working, and has a very upright and strong heroine.

Not the Holy Mother, but not heartless either. The plot is exciting and interesting. The author's writing is good 👍👍

Not bad, not bad, please update quickly 🍉 🍉 🍉

Another kind of effort in the traditional way of cultivating immortality

The writing is smooth and the expression is clear. A very nice piece of work.

Very good, the heroine is tough, why is the rating so low?

The plot is vivid and vivid, the scenes are touching and gripping, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. I like this kind of story.

Not bad, not bad, really good, awesome

Good, fascinating, and rare book