I Am Here******

It's so well-written and beautiful. We happened to have suspended the update of "The Legend of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" (it's been updated) and have no other novels to read. Occasionally I found a good book. Bravo, author. Come on.

Originally I just clicked on it to take a look, but I didn't expect that the author's writing style was surprisingly good. The overall atmosphere of the novel actually has a lot of similarities with the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. It is definitely a good read in 🍅, please read it and cherish it!

Why is the rating so low? So far, the writing is quite good. There is still some control over the details of the characters and psychological descriptions. I haven't seen the bad points until now. The Tomato rating system is incomprehensible. There are also some 9.5-9.7 That are difficult to watch and completely inseparable. Some 6.0-7.5 Are actually well written, but most of them will die suddenly. Judging from the descriptions of the authors of several books, there are few people who reward books at this stage. Not counting platform incentives, a day's meal or a pack of cigarettes may not be enough. Mortals are currently so popular, but there are very few people writing fan fiction. Except for the few books about ideas, the level of other books is not as good as the author's, which is difficult to understand.

I don't know why the score is so low. I think it's okay. I'll give it a high score.

Please support me. Not many people on Tomato can read the biographies of mortals cultivating immortality. But in comparison, at least this is written by a real person, and it's okay [like]

I finally came across a mortal fanfic written by someone, and it's also about the heroine Song Yu

Good book, but it's a pity that Tomato doesn't provide traffic. I hope it won't die young. When mortals start over again, the quality will still be the same. I think it will become popular sooner or later.

The protagonist's mind is wide open and there's a lot to be done!

I haven't seen much of it yet, I'll tell you later. The logic is quite clear so far, so give the author a big thumbs up!

This is a rare piece of writing among ordinary people, please read it and cherish it.

The writing is very good and there are no big logical problems. I started to follow up as I read it. The relationship with the characters in Mortal is also very gentle and delicate. Although the protagonist has undergone drastic changes, his nature is very kind and kind, and the relationship with Zi Ling is also very warm.

It's good to watch, Goldfinger is very interesting, the protagonist isn't crazy, and the writing is pretty good.

You read slowly, the author writes slowly, don't be anxious. Blocked woo woo woo

Not bad, you can see it

Not bad, the writing is quite humane

The works are all made real and it's very beautiful.

I think it's okay. Come on, author.

Not cautious enough, but considered good in a mortal fanfic.

Is the author still around? Can you tell me if he has been reincarnated?

The exercises are very interesting and the writing is also good. It's worth reading. However, the number of words is short and I can't read it quickly.

Come on, don't fail

Good-looking, good, good, good

Like first and then view, make it a habit

The plot is good and interesting😄

OK. . . It would be better if you don't find some lame reasons to suppress your fighting ability later.

I give you a four-star [smile] I went to Luan Xinghai and didn't find Ling Yuling as my wife.

Okay, the heroine is Wang Ling, who I like

Author, author, if you don't read it for a few days, will it affect your grades? It's really not enough [crying] Or, author, if you don't feel aggrieved, can you do ten updates a day? [Almost crying]

There are very few fans among mortals who can watch it

The plot is not cliché, and the protagonist Goldfinger is also interesting [laughs]